I think you are something awesome. Its like Im watching a movie, only better. I love your characters, Benjamine is something sexy and he deserves a high five for scoring with Gina...who is a riot!
And Daryl...you want to hate him....but Ali handles it so well....you portrayed the whole scene with them so well....thank you again for another wonderful reading. Im looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed
[Report This]Date: January 31 2013 06:25 am
It went from being sweet and spicey to scorching HOT in seconds with that last statement he made. THAT IS HOT!
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]Date: January 31 2013 05:05 am
All I can say is damn! Just damn! Good chapter. The question would be though, is it his? Can Jeremy and Alicia become a couple already? They are perfect for each other!
Reviewer: Punkin Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 31 2013 04:26 am
I so appreciate this scene esp. after knowing how they first met. How they felt about each other in the beginning.
You did a great job and letting that lack of relationship grow into what took place in this chapter. Nothing rushed, nothing assumed. Thak you. I like it. A lot.
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed
[Report This]Date: January 31 2013 04:06 am
And another 10 point for again, Jubilee and the plot.
Cant wait to read more!
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]Date: January 31 2013 03:37 am
Im gving this chapter a 10 because of one word: Jubilee. I love her!
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]Date: January 31 2013 03:35 am
Darryl and Vanessa are getting exactly what they deserve but I feel sorry for that baby. I do hope that Alicia and Jeremy will finally admit their feelings for each other. I really want want Jeremy's step-mother to disappear like forever!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 31 2013 01:46 am
great update...I love this story
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: January 31 2013 01:32 am
Well Damn... It's beyond time for an update on this story! It"s been way too long. Of course we have been wanting this story to continue, and for you to bring it to completion. But don't tease us with an update now and nothing for the rest of the year. Thats not fair. So yes, I like the update very much. So please continue with regular updates...Thanks.
Author's Response:
I'll do my best. I'm glad that you're continuing to read and I hope that you enjoy the next chapter! Let me know what you think!
Reviewer: VAL1 Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 03:51 am
Good chapter. Leaves a nice place for other ideas to come into play
Author's Response:
Yeah what's crazy is that I have this whole story mapped out in my head...it's just getting onto paper or in this case onto a word document. ;) I hope you like the next chapter!
Reviewer: Ashly12 Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 06:56 am
Loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks Kelsey! :)
Reviewer: Kelsey Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 02 2013 09:51 pm
I'm so freaking happy that your back been checking on this story for about a year waiting for you to come back really think this is a good read thanks for coming back with that killer tease
Author's Response:
Ahhh thanks for sticking with this story for so long. I'm going to try and update at least once every two weeks or so maybe more depending on how real life goes. Thanks again for the reply and I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Reviewer: toni174ever Signed [Report This]Date: January 02 2013 11:25 am
great udpdate
Author's Response:
Thanks bunches!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: January 02 2013 06:40 am
I'm definitely still interested. Read this story a while ago & I'm glad to see you've updated. Loved this chapter & looking forward to the next one.
Reviewer: Roz Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 02 2013 06:05 am
Just found this and it so much fun. Jubilee is too much and Gina... she´s a mess. As for the main characters, I felt the chemistry this chapter, I couldn´t really see past his jackass attitude in the previous chapters. Will there be more Ben in the next installment?
Author's Response:
I love Jubilee too. She's actually based off of someone real. And yes of course my boy Benny will be back. Him and Gina's story is as much apart of this as Alicia and Jeremy's. And yeah Jeremy can be an asshole sometimes but there is just something about him... thanks for the reply.
Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]Date: January 02 2013 05:56 am
Great chapter! Update again soon!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Punkin Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2013 05:50 pm
Yaaay! I remember this story! Good to have an update and I'm loving the pace that Alicia and Jeremy are going into this.
Can't wait for your next update! Hope it isn't next year lol
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Yeah I really like Alicia and Jeremy too and I've been away from them for much too long. Thanks for the reply and I promise I'm going to do my best to finish this story.
Reviewer: LoveisPudding Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 01 2013 06:51 am
What an update.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope you continue to read! :)
Reviewer: nightseer Signed
[Report This]Date: January 01 2013 06:12 am
Please update soon! I am in love with this story! It deserves a finish!! Please update soon! I need to read the next chapter! I am anticipating on what is going to happen!!!(:
XOXO
Reviewer: Kissrole Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2013 04:00 am
I am so glad you are back!!! I love this story. I hope the next chapter will be soon because you have been gone for too long. Keep up the great work!!!
Author's Response:
Ahhh thanks so much! I have to admit I've really missed writing in this story. Writer's block suck but hopefully the creative juices will keep flowing. Thanks for the reply.
Reviewer: CeeBlue Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 01 2013 03:22 am
I have only been a reader on this site for the past year. I looked at your profile, and I don't see too much evidence that you finish your projects. If I start this, will I be left hanging? Put something up on your profile, and I'll see whether or not you intend to stick to some sort of update schedule.
Author's Response:
Unfortunately I guess that's sort of the risk you take. I understand if you don't want to take the chance as that is completely up to you. I won't be offended but I got to be honest I'm not going to put anyhting in my bio but I'm going to try my hardest to finish my story. Thanks for the reply! :)
Reviewer: I'm interested, but... Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 01 2013 01:46 am
Cute *couple.* Funny...I had just saw this story the other night and realized that it hadn't been updated in a while. I'm still interested in the story so let the updates continue.
Author's Response:
Yeah real life sort of took over! Not an excuse I know but it's all I got. I'm glad you're still interested. Thanks for the reply.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2013 01:08 am
This story is so good! Please update soon!
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 10 2012 07:16 pm
This is really good...thanks...
Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 01 2011 12:11 am
please update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 03:16 am