Penname: LelaniDanielle1988 [Contact]

Real name: Nicole

Member Since: May 06 2018

Membership status: Member

Bio:

30 something finally finding her voice




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[Reviews - 765]
Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78667
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021


Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Who I Thought I Knew

SWEET BABY JESUS. THIS WAS A LOT. BRANDON CAN'T SEE THAT MARISOL KNEW OF HIS FEELINGS AND HAS USED THAT TO HAVE HIM AT HER BECK AND CALL. SHE'S BEEN USING HER GIRLS TO KEEP HIM AROUND. SHE DOESN'T WANT HIM. SHE LOVES THAT HE WILL ALWAYS DAMN NEAR HER AND THE GIRLS ABOVE EVERYONE. HE CAN'T SEE THAT SHE IS TOXIC. HE LOVED HER AND SHE USED IT AGAINST HIM. I KNOW HE LOVES DI BUT THIS IS SO DAMN CRUSHING. HE SHOULD OF TOLD HER ABOUT MARISOL PERIOD. THEY WILL NEVER BE THE SAME. I LOVE BRANDON AND DI BUT THEY BOTH HAVE STUFF THEY NEED TO DEAL WITH PERIOD. HE BROKE HER TRUST AND ITS GONNA TAKE A LOT TO GET THAT BACK. GREAT CHAPTER AS PER USUAL.

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Date: August 16 2019

Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Truth Be Told

I seriously hate Marisol. She's the worst kind of person. How do play with someone's emotions for so many damn years!!!! She doesn't want Brandon but doesn't want anyone else to have him. She likes knowing that he'll do anything for her and her girls. She doesn't love him. I feel for Diya. She loves Brandon but there's just too much to deal with. I really hope both she and Brandon take a step back. Brandon has to work on himself and cut the cord with Marisol. I know he loves her girls but none of this is healthy.

Reviewer: LelaniDanielle1988 Signed
Date: October 05 2019

Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - More Than Words

She needs to ask Brandon to leave Marisol alone especially if she still wants to be with him. Di, baby girl,bopen your mouth!!! Brandon needs to pull his head out of his ass. No call or text for a week!!!! I get that he thought Di didn't want to see or hear from him, but he could have made some effort. This story is so good and breaking my heart in the best way.



Author's Response:

Thanks, LelaniDanielle1988!  I aim to please : )

Asking Brandon to leave Marisol alone is a huge gamble.  Even if he's willing to distance himself from her, there's still Rafe and the girls to consider. All their relationships are sure to suffer as a result, especially Diya and Brandon's. She's sort of damned if she do, damned if she don't.

 

Reviewer: LelaniDanielle1988 Signed
Date: February 05 2020

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 960]
Summary:

 

COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 284039
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019


Title: Chapter 31: Raw Conclusion

I honestly don't know what to say cause these last two chapters hit me hard. I was molested as a child  by my older brother and it's not something I've ever really got over. Thank you for writing honest and real emotions. I can't wait to see Chef's side and see how Sugar and he come out on the other side.

Reviewer: LelaniDanielle1988 Signed
Date: April 20 2019

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