Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Change of Plans
Great update. So much for Charlie wanting to find a virgin. When he saw Jermain attack Inga, she all of sudden became "his Inga". I love his take charge personality. I just sorry he wasn't able to deal Jermaine man to man before the sheriff showed up.
As for Val, I am glad she is finally seeing Charlie for the man he is. I wish she could see how self destructive Jared is. Jared does'nt love anyone but himself.
P.S.,
Are you going to update any of your other stories soon?
Author's Response: I know, I know I'm so behind in updating it's pathetic. I've got a half written chapter for both Acceptible lies and Good things in a small package. *smh* This challenge has my muse on fire and I hope things stay that way so that I can continue to update. So, please be patient with me. I had promised myself no new stories until I update, but after reading Scribe's answer to my challenge, I couldn't contain myself.
Now as for Charlie, he still thinks that he needs to find a virgin. LOL You're the first one to pick up on him saying "his Inga." LOL Good catch! Yes, he's going to fight it a little longer, but we all know what's going to happen, so stay tuned.....
Reviewer: juno Signed
Date: March 09 2012