Penname: Elizablu [Contact]

Real name: Courtney G.

Member Since: April 11 2011

Membership status: Administrator

Bio:

I love romance, drama, comedy, horror and all of the little things in between. I'm an artist and a part-time writer. I've been telling stories to anyone who would listen ever since I was little. Southern Mississippi is where I call home.


 ## DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF THAT GOES BY KALANI ZOLDYCK. I DECIDED TO TAKE MY STORIES DOWN##


 


 


 


 


  


sometimes all a person needs is a good story



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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 119]
Summary:

To everyone who knew Liam and Lacey they knew that they were truely in love. Lacey a 29 year old mother and wife nurse to many and lover of all things good, is ready to give up on her love. Can she really continue to be that woman who stays when she knows everything is wrong? 

Liam loves his wife and his daughter he will do anything to keep them safe. When a threat comes aginst his family he always makes sure they are taken care of. Why cant his wife see that he's trying?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: The Tough and The Gritty
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9815
Read Count: 5957
Published: February 11 2013
Updated: July 08 2015


Title: Chapter 4: IHOP TALKS

Let me just say...Bella is a mess! I love her!! 

Overall it was good. Now, I usually don't give advice on formatting, grammar or what have you, because alot of the writers are sensitive (I'm one) but I also believe if it comes from a good place, then its golden. So here's my 2 cents...

Be sure to give your update a thorough proofread before you click that add story button. Then you will be able to snatch the mistakes. Just keep in mind that no matter how many times you go over it, some will slip by you. That's just how it normally goes, so don't go all caa-caa. lol.

On the large paragraph issue...This might sound cray- but I believe that we all write to a certain rhythm. So when I'm faced with a large para' I will read it out to myself and when I sense that those few lines have made a certain point across or have made a good stopping point. Then, I will double deuce that ENTER button.

Well that all I got right now.  That's my 2pennies. 

Can't wait for the next update. Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much i appreciate all your help!!! Yess yes yess, Bella is my drive i will admit i love the kid ha!! but im not a normal writer in any sense English has never been my strong suit but i do love it :) 

Believe me i am so scared to put my un edited work out here but i do read it at least 10 times, idk you know how sometimes you just need an extra set of eyes to see whats not working right!! but i like to sleep on my chapters as well, if i think somthings perfect at 1am im probably going to hate it at 12pm so i make sure i read them multiple times in different settings, but some mistakes will always get away unfourtionatly.

My large para issue is slowly working itself out. I am a college student so i write in para form ALL the time, dialogue isint my strong suit YET! but im getting there, and i completly agree with everything you say, i try to cut them off but it never really happened in this chapter. lol

THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH FOR READING AND HELPING!! it honestly means sosososososo much you dont even know. Your 2pennies will be well spent i promise. Thanks again and stay tuned :) 

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

What happens when Spock can't get Uhura out of his head.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3470
Read Count: 5740
Published: February 26 2013
Updated: February 26 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

...NICE!!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

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Thalia knows why she abandoned her hometown of Darming for the Big Apple. Her infamous Shannen blood could never let her forget it. But when news of her cousin's murder brings her rushing back home she finds herself caught up in a whirlwind of familial dilemmas and betrayals, all while going head-to-head with the notorious MC, the Saxon Horde.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Family, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Femslash, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: The Tough and The Gritty
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 31051
Read Count: 19192
Published: February 28 2013
Updated: November 04 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Meet the Cast

The cast is butta! 



Author's Response:

Hahahahaha taaaaanks :D

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 28 2013

Title: Chapter 2: A Head of Matter

I diggin' this. Can't wait to see how this plays out!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading! You and I both haha :D

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 28 2013

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

From Sunport toWindenburg

In an attempt to move forward with his life; widower, father, and Keeper, Joshua, makes the decision to take his daughter to Windenburg. With the support of best friend and fellow monster slayer, Adrian, the two person family boards the train and head for their new home.

Although the ride from Sunport to Windenburg is a short journey, the trip will prove to be interesting when the train comes to a sudden stop and buried feelings begin to surface.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5895
Read Count: 2888
Published: March 11 2013
Updated: March 11 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was one of the BEST one shots I have read in a very long time. I would love for you to give us more chapters. It was just everything and I'm so glad that you debuted this at the Chamber. WELCOME!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 105]
Summary:

 

 

 

Professor Wilson is in the office late again grading papers. I wonder who'll stop by...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 19538
Read Count: 18959
Published: March 25 2013
Updated: November 24 2013


Title: Chapter 2: The Office

GOOD JESUS!! This can't be a one-hitta quitta?! Please don't let it be that! This was so freakinfrakin GOOD! Thank you for blessing us with this marvelous debut! Now bless us with MORE!



Author's Response:

HUGE fan of yours, Elizablu (among many other marvelous writers on this site). I consider it an honor that you reviewed. Thank you. I'll do my best to give you guys the goods.

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 26 2013

Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

OHWEEE!!! I swear on my brand new pet kitten that's exactly how I pictured homegirl girl. And Pierce is YUMMY! I'm ready for more, you got yourself a new fan!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Zoey never imagined herself making such life decisions but that was all before she met John.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Psychological
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1833
Read Count: 1465
Published: March 29 2013
Updated: March 29 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

....HA! Poor Johnny got played, didn't he? I would love to see more of this if u are willing. Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 73]
Summary:

“A mighty pain to love it is,
And 'tis a pain that pain to miss;
But of all pains, the greatest pain
It is to love, but love in vain.”



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 28555
Read Count: 11890
Published: April 01 2013
Updated: August 15 2023


Title: Chapter 1: In the beginning...

Please madame...may i have some more? From the short intro I knew that this will be outstanding! Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

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Merri Tallon is a fifty year old widow that wants to have some fun.  Her single adult children think that she should sit in the corner and knit, but Merri has something else in mind!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14750
Read Count: 7548
Published: April 05 2013
Updated: April 09 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 First Date

Caleb, Caleb, Caleb...one taste of brown sugar honey and now you feenin! Ha, I love it!!! Now about the age difference and foolishness. Madam Merri is not OLD. She is experienced in LIFE. Caleb is not a child...that damn MAN is a MATURE ADULT and I'm sure that he wouldn't mind having Madam Merri take a little advantage of him.

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

 

BETA READER: Anni Grey

There was temptation at every corner of the Albany Hotel. Temptation in the form of fine brothers spiffed up to the nines. There was plenty to pick from as the unavailable suddenly became touchable.

Can I tell you my fantasy?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 11003
Read Count: 3439
Published: April 16 2013
Updated: May 25 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Could I give you all of me?

Loved it...by the way I tossed out the 3 chap limit, so go as long as u want!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 68]
Summary:

I never said I was the  good guy. I'm nobody's hero.

 

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 15545
Read Count: 8753
Published: May 11 2013
Updated: June 08 2014


Title: Chapter 1: The first time I met her

"Besides what's one girl gonna do to me?" ...hehehehehe

Just wait and see Morgan!

...hehehehe

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

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No place for beginners or sensitive hearts
Sentiment is left to chance
No place to be ending but somewhere to start
No need to ask He's a smooth operator


A peek into the lives of three male escorts.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: Smooth Operator
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5674
Read Count: 6964
Published: May 11 2013
Updated: May 27 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

2 thumbs up and a snap. Yep, I'm digging it.



Author's Response:

LOL! Thank You!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

Sometimes things just don't go as planned.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Sexual Healing, Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3801
Read Count: 17982
Published: May 14 2013
Updated: May 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HAHAHA!!!

This is going to be fun.

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks much! I'm working on it!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

 

 

I wasn’t a good guy but she was my bad guy. 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1356
Read Count: 1336
Published: May 19 2013
Updated: May 19 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm loving this and would love to know more about HER. 

Thanks for sharing and like your name. :)



Author's Response:

Working on the next chapter. I hope to have it up soon.

Thank you for reading and lol I guess we have that name thing in common.

I likey yours too :D

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Tomaso lived for Nicholi and they both survived harsh times together but now Nicholi was moving on with someone else and Tomaso was on his own. That is, until he meets Nathaniel. The attraction is instant and Tomaso wants nothing to do with him for several reasons, the first and most important one was that no one knew he was gay and he wanted to keep it that way. If only forgetting Nathaniel was as easy as forgetting the rest.

 

Nathaniel knew he was gay and he didn't try to hide it. He hated commitment and loved playing around, that’s why Nathaniel thought he would be a bachelor forever. However things changed when he met Tomaso. The Italian wasn’t the type that Nathaniel would usually go for but he couldn’t get him out of his head. Now he wants more than the Italian’s body he wants his heart.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Slash, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9019
Read Count: 4038
Published: June 13 2013
Updated: April 02 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

YES! A few days ago, I was having a combo with a few ladies of this site about why we don't have more or if any slash stories on here. I love them and I love this and I will be keeping an eye out for more updates.



Author's Response:

Coming from you that is quite a compliment. I hope you continue to enjoy.

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

I meant convo not combo, LOL. Damn tablet and its quirks.

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

You are my sunshine.


My only sunshine.


You make me happy, when skies are grey. 


You'll never know dear, how much I love you.


So please don't take, my sunshine away. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6337
Read Count: 10575
Published: July 07 2013
Updated: July 12 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Love it! Give us more!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 07 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 353]
Summary:

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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas.  Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways, Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 558
Read Count: 82570
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: August 27 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I LOVE IT!!!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 17 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

It's like the game 'Hot Potato' - What was I supposed to do when this time machine fell into my lap?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Action-Adventure
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Second Chances
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 498
Read Count: 600
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: July 17 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Time waits for no one

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm thrilled that you read it! :-D

*doing the fangirl dance*

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 17 2013

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

Min Kimbrough comes across the strangest man.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 500
Read Count: 2928
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: July 17 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Don't worry about the Readlover and Love and Vengenance, that will show everytime you preveiw your work before you actually post it. It doesn't show up when you finally post it.

Now, your submission to the writer's prompt was so flapping good! Thank you for debuting your first story! And I hope that you will do more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the info and feedback!  I only realized that after I submitted.  I was so paranoid about it!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2013

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:


She left it all behind. Her past. Yet somehow here she stood in the midst of it.... forced to relive it. 




*ORIGINALLY my 500 word CHALLENGE* 


*Formerly titled a chance encounter with destiny*


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Drabbles , Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters
Challenges: Second Chances
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 2062
Read Count: 13716
Published: July 18 2013
Updated: June 23 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HA! Loved it!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Running from her past, Layla finds her future.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed
Challenges: Lonely Highways
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 500
Read Count: 3140
Published: July 18 2013
Updated: July 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow...beautiful.



Author's Response:

Thanks Elizablu!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A stranger stops you on a busy street and hands you a small red box. Inside lies something that gives its owner the power to go back in time. He warns you not to open the box. Do you?

 

Why yes, yes I do!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Challenges: Second Chances
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 500
Read Count: 812
Published: July 18 2013
Updated: July 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You can't see me, but I'm giving you 2 thumbs up and twirl. lol

LOVED IT!



Author's Response:

LOL! Thank You!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Nancy returns from burying the last of her family. She's now all alone and has no one.  If only she could see them one last time!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Second Chances
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 500
Read Count: 941
Published: July 18 2013
Updated: July 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

...I'm crying. Some days if the house is quiet I can still hear my grandmother singing, she always did it when she was cooking. From time to time I can still smell my grandfather's old church colonge and Old Spice. lol. Lord knows if I had that little red box, I would be back to when they were living and when I was at my most happiest. 

You got me good Ms. Brenda, you got me good. Thank you and I loved it,

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.