Bastien wasnt expecting her and Cameron never wanted him.
I understand how she feels ab oyt this situation and that no one told her until now expecting her to go aling with it.
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Bastian feels that his life is over and he has every right to feel that way. Right now he feels that nothing will ever be the same and that there is no chance of any happiness.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed Destiny is a funny thing indeed. I am sure that Robert did not see this coming or what had happened to Samuel's son. Either way sending Cameron away will do her some good and maybe she might have a good time in the process. The fact they made this agreement was wrong and should never interfere with their childrenl's lives.
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Elise Jones was gonna end her life. She was gonna lie in the sand and wait for the tide to drown her. Or that was the plan until she was interrupted by a stranger and called on her BS. Why can't she be left alone in her dramatics?
This was a nice tale and i can relate to having a lack of self esteem. They say one person cannot make a difference, I believe one person will make a difference. Fate has a way of bringing people together. I enjoyed reading this .
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Mallory Ruskin lost her sight in an unfortunate accident five years ago. Can she push aside the fear of the assumed and the unknown to trust the one man who had her heart?
It seems that things are only going to become worse before things are going to get any better. There is no easy choice and thinking so only hinders ones judgement. They are only human that have human needs. Declan, Rory, and Mallory are in pain and they continue to walk through life.
I agree fully. It's why I enjoy writing this story; the complex feelings and decisions that these characters have to work through is just fascinating to me. My only hope is that it continues to be an enjoyable- and insightful- read.
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Reviewer: reader101 Signed So Far am i like the images of the cast. They looked just as i imagined them to be.
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Reviewer: reader101 SignedI can see why he is still angry because he ended up taking everything away from her and would only hurt her more. They both still have aloot of issues to work out.
Declan's anger is well placed, that's for sure. But in order for both Mallory and Rory to face their past, he has to take a step back. Right now though, that's easier said than done.
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Reviewer: reader101 Signed Those really are some painful memories for anyone to face. I hope that they will both be able to face them in order to move forward and realize that they are made for each other. they need one another because they complete one another and that will never change.
Yes, I believe that in some instances, Mallory knows that she's incomplete without Rory. It's just getting past all that sticky business. She loves him, he loves her...they just have to find a middle.
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Reviewer: reader101 Signed All i can say is that everyone has to make choices in life that will only get difficult with time. They are only trying to move forward and not dwell on the past. And for the record his parents are the cause for his pain and only want him to live by their standards.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed So she still has a place in her heart for him. They really are two broken people that cannot be understood by just anyone. Declam os broken hearted but with time he will heal. His father is nothing but a monster. No wonder Rory is such a compulsive wreck that eberyone believes can be swept under the rug. While they are both damaged, they are what rach other needs.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed It is plain to.see that Rory is no longer in the mood to.be the puppet anylonger, not by anyone. Without much doubt he is prepared on taking his life back.
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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers. Could he make it right and start anew? Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.
Well it appears that things are starting to fill in the blanks.
Reviewer: reader101 SignedWell that was different. It seems that more is being filled in along the way Still it's nice to see the story developing with each chapter.
Reviewer: reader101 SignedNothing can ever prepare a person for what theses two went through. Nancy has a right to express her anger but at the same time is hurt on the inside. Dana has just learned one of life's lessons but that does not make it any easier. That has to be one of the hardest things to explain to a child as clearly seen.
Reviewer: reader101 SignedEverything happens for a reason whether we like it or not. I would like to see where it will lead.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed This chapter was filled to the brim with drama. I hope they will do what is best for the children and it is quite clear they still have feelings for one another. There will always be those that feel that some are above the rest when it comes to race. What does not kill them will only make them stronger. I am glad he stopped listening to his father and followed his heart to take responsibilty for himself.
Jayden has had ten years of lonliness. He's ready for the real thing and his parents complaints are just noise in his ears! More is coming!
Reviewer: reader101 SignedIt all is starting to make sense because everything is slowly coming together like the puzzle of fate. I detest his parents even more knowing they are manipulaters and underestimate how smart their son truly is. I can hardly wait to see when it will all blow up in their faces. The children were a treat and i know that Jayden will come to love them as much as he still loves Tam.
Yes, there comes a time in every parents life, that they know they have to step back and let their child be grown. Jayden's parents haven't learned, but they will. Whether they accept their son's children or not, they have to accept the fact that their SON accepts them. More is coming!
Reviewer: reader101 SignedThe kids are a trip as well as the father, without a doubt they are his children and he is their father. Jayden is quite the card when it comes to cleanliness but i give him credit for going to see his children.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed L can see this will be an interesting journey for everyone. Without a doubt, Tam and Jayden stills care about one another despite ten years. He is different arouind her and i know she feels the same way.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed There are still issues that The two of them need to work out ang ignoring them will only make problems worse. I found the talk between Jay and Jayden quite encouraging beacause it shows that they can really become a family and that the twins have no problem with that. As for Dana, there did seem to be a bit of an old soul to her and her need to comfort her fathe did seem familiar. His Gradmother is still with him in a sense living through his daugther. As for the hug, it wasa slight sign of a break trhrough, but this is far from over.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed This chapter makes it very clear that nature will and should take it's course. I know that Jayden wants to have that american dream of children and a wife but he cannot rush it and that the breakthrough wuth his grammy is only a small stepping stone. Tam still has to come clean to her mother and i hope it will not go as badly as she thinks it will go.
Thanks for the review. Jayden is trying to give Tam time, but she wants what he has and he in turn wants a commitment. More is coming soon!
Reviewer: reader101 SignedThe hear to heart was long overdue but i am still glad they both laid their cards on the table. It is quite clear that Jayden is full intended on marrying Tam and gain his dream of a family. Her mother is wise and Tam is lucky to have such an understanding mother that just wants her daughter to be happy and have someone take care of her for a change. Thanks for the wonderful update.
Yes, Tam's mother is going to need to be the voice of reason for her daughter. More is coming soon!
Reviewer: reader101 Signed what a eye opener as well as concrete proof that Jayden and Tam are meant to be. Jayden is in a coma, his mother is a wreck, and Tam discovers that she is pregnant talk about drama.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed It seems that not everyone is as honest as they say. It appears that the Winstons were being manipulated as well. No one is who they appear to be and i can hardley wait to see where it will lead.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed Things are certainly shifting into place. I can hardly wait to see where it will all lead to.
Thanks. MOre is coming!
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