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Summary:

Loki

What happens after Loki falls from the Rainbow Bridge? My first fic EVER. M rating for later chapters.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: Other
Classification: Alternate Universe, Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 49769
Read Count: 40311
Published: April 13 2013
Updated: April 22 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Broadway

  Not exactly the best first impression but then again this is not the typical story.  Loki apparentley will have to face what he is running from whether he likes it or not.  Noni is gutsy for allowing a complete stranger stay with her even after the attempt to strangle her dog to death.  His strange appearence would confuse anyone on earth and it is only a matter of time unitl reality rears it's ugly head.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I don't want to give too much away but looks can be deceiving is what I can say. His appearance is definitely odd. Stay tuned for more. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13 2013

Title: Chocolate

You have provided a story that is not easily forgotten.  The least we can do is wait.  Life gets busy, that is understandable.  Until then.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed
Date: June 11 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Mini-Midgard

This is a side of Loki that few ever see and in a way it is refrteshing to see  him with a kind tone.  Noni has no idea who he is and perhaps it is for the best for now.  I wonder how long it will last until that need to prove himself comes full circle.  How will it affect his feelings for Noni and her good deeds toward him despite his strange appearence.



Author's Response:

Stay tuned to find out. ;)

I love writing this fic. Like I said so someone else, Loki is extremely complex. It's interesting to see the multiple sides to his character.

Thanks for the review--again! ^_^

Reviewer: reader101 Signed
Date: April 14 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chocolate

It is clear how he feels about her and i think it is keeping his mind of of his other life even for a moment.  Seeing him react to earthly customs and food in like seeing a toddler learning to to walk, it is priceless.  How will this affect him and what does this mean for his ambitions?  Seeing Loki expressing this feelings and seeing his inner thoughts reminds me that he is still a man, immortal or not.  Noni seems unaware of Loki and his unknown god nature even with the small details. 



Author's Response:

It is very clear, though at times he doesn't want it to be. His internal struggle is interesting to write. Thanks.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Snow

It is clear that they are starting to develop feeling for one another.  Leave it to a gay male to be spot on about Loki clouding her mind.  Noni is a designer, well that explains alot.  Seeing Loki being fasinated with the snow was the cherry on top of the sundae.  Now i know that Loki's feels that he can be with her and that she would accept despite ont knowing the full story.  Of course life has a way of blowing storm clouds over the skies.  Danny seeing them togther is a sign of more drama in the wings.



Author's Response:

Yeah, considering he's the son of a Frost Giant, snow and ice are kinda his thing. Sorry for responding so late!

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Trifles!

  Many thanks to your boyfriend times infinity, and you for finding it in you for the two for one update.  It seems that Loki is quite good at bringing out the worst in everyone.  The kiss was an unexpected spur of the moment as well as inner desires coming to the surface.  Any woman would need to cool off after a passionate exchange like that.   The fact that all the chocolate portion was gone was a clear sign that someone really loves chocolate.  Thank you so much and am looking forward for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for all your wonderful reviews. They mean sooooooo much. I honestly just want people to love reading this story as much as I love writing it. And yes, Mr. Laufeyson is quite fond of chocolate. ;)

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Date: April 16 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Granny Smith Apples

Now we see the strong mouth Loki that can back up his words if he must.   If only he knew that women like Noni do not always have to give in to a man's advances.  This would definetly have to be the most unusual shopping trip Noni has ever had. 



Author's Response:

Loki is a G.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Just a Taste...

The attraction is so painfully obvious that it is becoming annoying just thinking about it.  Noni is persistent when it comes to wanting to find uot more about Loki.  There is still so much she does not know and perhaps there is a reason why.  Loki is a trip when it comes to the chocolate and that makes it enchanting because he has his guard down.  It seems that Loki wants more than just a taste, and so does Noni.

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Date: April 17 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Flashing Lights

It seems that everyone has secrets.  it was said about want happened to jake and i know that Noni and Danny are pretty torn up.

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Date: April 18 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Mocha V

It seems that Noni is not unfaimliar eith losing those close to her and it seems to have built a sort of mental shield around her.  In a way she appears to be around whenever someone close to her dies.  As for the dog, that was disgusting but there was no other way around it.  Loki's sense of humor is well something that will take some getting use to.  Immortal or not a man is a man. 

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Date: April 19 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Need

  Intense chapter from start to finish.   Danny is clearly heartbroken and an emotional wreak since his son died.  As for Noni, she is filled with different types of emotions with all that has happened in one day.  The tension between Loki andNoni has led to this,a time to just let go and give in to their desires.  Of courze Noni also wanted to be comforted in more ways than one.  Leave it to Loki to know what they both needed, each other.

  I wonder how this will affect them as well as how it will affect Loki and that desire to prove himself.  Does this alter his plans or will it only be a bump in the road.  Only time will tell.n     



Author's Response:

Yeah. I think they needed comfort most of all. 

Danny...well, I'll write about him later. :P

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2013

Title: Chapter 12: The List

Her feelings of lose are in reason.  She only wants to make the best of every momeny she has.  Everyone that she cares about are always leaving her to pick up the broken pieces of her lifr.  At least Loki is there for her, for now. Any update is a blessing.

 

 

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Date: May 05 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Long Live The King

The past always has a way of creeping back tp the center of his mind.  Loki will always have his inner demons that continue to pick at his sanity.  Noni can only do so much to keep that dormant, but it is only asleep.  What will happen when that inner voice gains more strengh the more he thinks of his life.



Author's Response:

The voice may very well turn out to be helpful. Who knows?

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Date: May 07 2013

Title: Chapter 18: Whiskey

Well it is great to ser this update and we all know how hect daily lifr can be.  This chapter clearly depicted a man that has suffered a terrible loss.  His emotions are not uncalled and are what's to be expected from a grieving father. I cannot help but feel sorry that it seems his life is always filled with losing battles. 



Author's Response:

Yeah. I really like Danny, personally. Let's see if he really is a good guy or he's just in a bad way right now and his true colors will come out later... ;)

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 26 2014

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Summary:

Nina has just started to live her life. She drops out of school and moves to L.A. At 23 she is essentially having a midlife crisis. So at this point she was not mentally or emotionally prepared for a relationship. Then she meets Alexander, the dark stranger with as many secrets as there were stars.

 

Nina wants a brief affair but Alexander has different plans he has waited years for her to walk into his life and he is not willing to let her walk out of it so easily. Even when shadows from his past reappear he will fight for a future for them. The question is will she fight for a future with him? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7365
Read Count: 6240
Published: April 15 2013
Updated: June 20 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1-The Beginning

Enchanting.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed
Date: July 08 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Very nice cast.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed
Date: July 08 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

well that is just wrong.  who just leaves their child with a stranger?  Oh wait i know but will leep that in my head.  Nina is getting more tgan she expected, at least she has the means to take care Selina and actually give her a home.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed
Date: July 08 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3-You again

He found her.  In a strange way,they do look like a family people cannot help but to stare.  Selina has gone through hell and this new life is strange to her.  Alexander is curious about this mysterious woman that has caught his heart.  

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Date: July 08 2013

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Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53968
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Learning and Coping

Alot of angst, that's for sure.  Brave move on his part about facing the situation.  People like that make my skin crawl and make me question the whole forgive and forget situation.  Someone needed to take a stand at least he did.

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Date: May 31 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Deception and Lies

There seems to be a lot of underestimating in this story, no one is who they appear.  Let's hope that it will work out in the end after all the turmoil.  

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Deception and Lies

There seems to be a lot of underestimating in this story, no one is who they appear.  Let's hope that it will work out in the end after all the turmoil.  

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Date: May 31 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Moving Forward...Moving Backward

What type of monster is he? This really is some crazy ish pure and simple



Author's Response:

True!  LOL

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Date: May 31 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 A Method to the Madness

This is madness. Yet entertaining at the same time.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed
Date: May 31 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 A Method to the Madness

This is madness. Yet entertaining at the same time.



Author's Response:

Yes, it's madness and more to come!  LOL

 

Reviewer: reader101 Signed
Date: May 31 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Facts

The truth is not always easy to accept, especially after livivg most of your life in the dark.  It will just take some time,it is still alot to take in.  His past is not who he is and he has nothing to be ashamed of.  His mother was only doing what she thought was best for the both of them.  A man's point of view sounds refreshing and is a nice change to see life through a man's eyes.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31 2013

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