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Summary:

What if you were just a normal person who didn’t have anything extraordinary about them? What if you became just some sort of experiment just to appease a curious mind? I have, but at least I am not alone.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4409
Read Count: 1865
Published: September 10 2012
Updated: December 28 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Project Zero: 2

  It seems that Sora and Karena are not off to a good start.  It seems that Sora has a few issues of his own, but seems to be warming up to her.  This is seriously disturbing that they are doing this to them. 

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Date: December 29 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Project Zero: 3

  Now we see the deeper plot. This is really easy to grasp and at the same time messed up.  They took them from their homes mutated them and expect them to mate and produce in order to save their alien race.   Iwould react the same way as Karena did more less minus the profanity. 

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Date: December 29 2012

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Solana Blue is a young African American woman, who comes from a line of an ancient race of humaniod wolves that evolved to be able to survive the modern human world. As a young girl ,she had to learn what was like to be an Alpha as her parents were murdered in a wolf raid. She had no choice but to fight to protect her younger sister Eris Blue. 

Now at the adult age of 18, she must leave her grandmother's home with her sister to live with her potential mate Matthew Cruz in order to create a pack of her own. As the Blue sisters with under the Cruz house, Solana has to soon choose to become one with Matthew before the first Full Moon. But Solana is not sure if she can handle the sudden adulthood. 

Disclaimer:All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:Yes
Word count: 68011
Read Count: 28738
Published: November 14 2012
Updated: August 03 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I felt as though i were apart of the story due to the strong emotion and detail. Solana has to be strong despite her age. The ways of the wolf can never be completely understood. Her Parents did what was needed in order to protect their children and bloodline. A strangle worthy chapter.

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Date: November 14 2012

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

A thrilling chapter. Startimg a new life usually has some ups and downs. I know that Solana and Eris are in good company. Matthew defintely has that alpha male instinct. I know they felt their place in the woods as a pack. It felt so natural as if was second nature. Lets see where it will lead.

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Date: November 15 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Solana and Matthew seem to get along quite well. It feels nice to see them comfertable with each other more or less. The thrill of the hunt was obvious to them and it was second nature. They are slowly building what will be an eventual bond. until next time.

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Date: November 19 2012

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

This was a nice Thanksgiving suprise. I liked seeing Solana apart of a new pack as Cruz's eventual mate. I disliked kara finding her rude and a bit of a attention grabber. I could see Solana's inner wolf as she and Cruz danced.

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Date: November 22 2012

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

So far i like the characters and i enjoyed how Solana took care of those men. So far so good. Cruz is clearly looking out for them.

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Date: December 26 2012

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I am glad that Emily is alright and that Eris has a friend her age to relate with. I know how hard that can be. Emily has a strong interest in wolves that it seems like fate they all met.

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Date: December 26 2012

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I admire Solana's work ethic and keeping her composure in the presence of other male wolves. I found the inner thoughts funny and slightly awkward at the same time. Mat certainly made his feelings known in Pierre's presence. This is the start of some unhealthy competion wolf style. Great update.

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Date: December 26 2012

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

They really have to watch what they say with Emily. Poor Solana sprained her ankle and had to be carried home by Cruz's competion. I see that Solana and Eris still have not come to grips with their parents deaths. It should'nt be to hard to pretend they are engaged. Nice update.

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Date: January 08 2013

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

  Well this certainly explains alot.  The drama factor did not fail to ensnare and caught me like prey.  It all makes sense now, that is alot to take in for anyone.  Solana's life is full of surprises but that is nothing new.  I wonder how cruz would take the realization but once again that cliffhangers rears it's ugly and unptedictable head.

  As for Emily who  I wondered was doing only cnnected the dotes to the conclusion i had at the back of my mind.  Now it all makes sense why it took this long I will never know.  Eris is in a state of shock and confusion as anyone would be.  There was something different about her and now i know why.  Cleary this is rare and may come as a surprise.  The questions will never end but this helped to tie many loose ends.  Such a mad genius.

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Date: July 28 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

  An enchanting chapter in the world of these wolves.  Matt will have to be strong for Solana now that there is a new rival.  I just hope Antoine is prepared and will not take Matt as a push over.

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Date: February 12 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

  Antoine must be sure of himself that he will win this duel or he must really want to die.  Cruz is no push over and will do everything in his power to ensure Solana remains his alone.  I know that Solana does not want bloodshed but it is unavoidable.  With the mating season near, these two will settle it once and for all.  Great update and sorry for the late review.

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Date: March 12 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

  I wondered when their grandmother would appear again.  There is nothing like a family visit to ease the tension.  As for Cruz requesting Solana to resign her position at the restaurant, i understand that he wants her safe. When Solana and Cruz shifted and when it for a run, i knew they were in their element.  They finally had a chance to spend time together, just the two of them.

  As for Eris, she kind of set herself up to get caught and that this situation will make their lives more difficult.  I wonder how Solana will take the news and how this will affect the family as a whole.  

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Date: March 12 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

  I can understand why Solana is upset and how Matthew feels that he has not been paying much attention to Eris.  I am glad that Eris is alright and that she was able to get away.  It seems that they will have to be more careful from now on.  At least no one believes the old man about wolves living among them for now.

  This detective seems like he may become a hindrance in the case of the burned cabin.  He refuses to let it go which indicates that he will be making more appearences in the future.  Thank you for the update and not keeping it a cliff hanger for to long.



Author's Response:

With that old man and the dectective snooping around. Things are going to be a little difficult for the Cruz house. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Nsablo

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Date: March 16 2013

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

There is alot to think about.  Solana is still young but in time she will grow into her strengh and her role as female alpha.  Let nature take it s course and flow naturally.  It also seems that Matthew has some more competion.  Still a good read.

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Date: June 24 2013

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

There is alot to think about.  Solana is still young but in time she will grow into her strengh and her role as female alpha.  Let nature take it s course and flow naturally.  It also seems that Matthew has some more competion.  Still a good read.

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Date: June 24 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

The Gore only made me more hungrey to read faster.  At least Eris is safe and the threat has been taken care of.  Cruz as the pact leader does hav to make a lot of tough decisions for the pack.  But I wonder about that detective with the fur sample and that this is only the beginning.

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Date: April 13 2013

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

It is nice to realax and not worry about life even if it is for a short time.  Nothing says summer like going to the beach with good friends and not a care in the world.  Solana and Matthew mave not always have time to be alone but they still enjoy every moment together.  It seems that they will have to be careful now that the detective discovered the wolf fur.  I suppose they cannot help but to worry about the future.  At least they have each other, abest friend and a shoulder to cry on.

 

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Date: April 16 2013

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

He may love her but he has to remember that she is not ready. Great update.I

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Date: April 21 2013

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

The invitable match has begun.  It has come down to two males fighting for the object of desire,the circle of life and nature.  Oh the old glamour into submission, Antoine is one dangerous wolf and that says alot.  Solana knew this day would come and now she has to sit back and watch as these two fight to the death at worst.  Matthew and Antoine have made clear that they will kill to have Solana for themselves.  For Eris this is all so strange and wrong, but in time she will come to understand as her grandmother stated.  Matthew`s father is wise and level headed, no wonder Cruz is so kind but does not take no bull.  The stage is set let the battle commence.

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Date: July 07 2013

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Someone going to die, that was how badly they fought to claim Solana as their own.  For a moment it looked like Cruz was going to lose it.  Antoine was strong but Matthew and his love for Solana was the strongest.  It was a tough fight and he will have more battle scars to add to his collection as he clearly stated.  The time is drawing closer as they are both getting closer to the Lunar Festival close at hand. 

For a while, Cruz had me going with that little fainting spell but i guess i would faint too if i was in his condition.  The lifestyle of the wolf is no walk in the park.  Anyway still a good read.



Author's Response:

The life of a wolf is never easy. They have so many rules to follow, espeically if they are in a pack. Other than that, Matthew has survived the battle. It was the toughest one in his life so far. Now he can relax for a bit and enjoy the festival. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing buddy! <3

Nsablo 

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Date: July 12 2013

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Well i have got to say that was a chapter well worth the wait, that is what makes the readers come back hungry for more.  Solana is showing the pure signs of the alpha female without even trying like a true female wolf.  As for the love scene, it was great it felt realistic without all the fantasy sugar coat.  They are now mated for life, they will be inseperable just like a newlywed couple but with the closer lifelong bond.  They are taking the next step in their lives but that also means new obstacles that will test them over and over.  For now they are basking in each others presences now that their souls are one.  Great....waitt no excellent update oh and did not mind the flaws in fact i really paid them no mind



Author's Response:

Finally they mate right? I wanted to make this chapter as juicy as possible. I'm happy you enjoyed the love scenes my friend! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! 

Nsablo

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Date: July 14 2013

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Solana and Matthew have alone time, nothing seems to tear these two apart.  The animal urge to mate and claim is brighter than any flame and just as hot.  Solana does trully have a mothers instinct and there is no doubt about it.  Cruz is happy knowing that Solana is his mate now and forever but he still loves her.  Seeing these two together connected by mind and spirit only brings them closer.

The run in the forest only seemed to wet their appetite to be even closer in more ways than one.  They may be wolves but they also love one another in the purist form.  Solana getting sick is alittle alarming.  Cruz probably feels responsible because he suggested that they go for a late night run.  Darn these cliff hangerss and darn you for doing it but i am sure there is a reason for it.  This was a good way to start off any day.

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Date: July 21 2013

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Okay third times the charm, this has been an amazing ride filled with twists and turns like a great roller coaster.  Over all the story as a whole was well thought throgh as where the plot was leading to, the characters helped move the story along and the love actually did not make me sick.  and despite the cliffhangers being a pain, they did feed my hunger to know what would happen next.  A sequel has alot to own up to and rarely are they better than the original.  But i guess that i will just have to wait and see.  Until than adieu.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.