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Member Since: October 03 2011

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Good Things in a Small Package by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 670]
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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140135
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25 A Lesson in Intimacy

Good to see Seleah in a good light for a change. She's had so much pain and sorrow in her life before Joseph.

Amaris and Julien is going thru the new parents transition. It will take time and patience. And maybe a little help.

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Date: October 29 2011
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22 My Past, Your Past, Our Future

I'm glad that Amaris met her dad. I know that she's hurt about Julian impending fatherhood with another woman, but she needs to assess the situation before breaking her engagement.

Tamera's mom seems to her own issues.



Author's Response:

Amaris won't leave her man.  She's just reeling from all that happened to her in one day.  More to come soon!

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Date: October 10 2011
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21 Road to Recovery

I understand that Seleah did not want her personal life revealed in front of the church but it affected Amaris also. And I also believed that Amaris got caught up in her grief and just blurted it out. Seleah has kept the pain a secret longer.



Author's Response:

Seleah thought that she could handle it because she's been handling it for a very long time.  She doesn't realize that her holding it in has affected her relationship with Amaris and everyone else she's in a relationship with.  She will seek the help she needs...

More to come soon. Thanks for the review!

 Reviewer: cookicrumb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05 2011
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21 Road to Recovery

It's been 3 days. I need my fix.

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Date: October 08 2011
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

Talk about reaping what you sow! Kayla tried to be vindictive and now she's dead. Looks like Amaris won't have to deal with baby mama drama. Kayla's mother seemed to be much like her daughter.

I loved the update! Keep them coming.

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Date: October 18 2011
ME&U by Elizablu
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 586]
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Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 127261
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014

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Title: ME&U

This chapter was way too short. Need some more and some more soon, please...



Author's Response:

Sorry for the short update...will have more soon! Thanks for reading!

 Reviewer: cookicrumb Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 23 2011
Title: ME&U

Mal is smoking hot! Coco won't know what hits her.

What in the world did Mal's mother and step-father do to him as a child? Does Mal's father know what they did to him?

Cheyenne is one despicable woman. Why would she snatch her child from a nuturing family?



Author's Response:

Mal and CoCo will burn the screen just get ready. I will explain the Katelyn & Jefferson situation soon. Cayenne enjoys chaos especially if she is the one dishing it out. Thanks for reading!

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Date: October 15 2011
Lovers' Dance Part 2 by K Carr
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 225]
Summary:

Part 2



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11288
Read Count: 22096
Published: June 09 2015
Updated: October 05 2015

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Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Love this story.

 Reviewer: cookicrumb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.