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Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108481
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

I've enjoyed all of your stories. This new one has not disappointed at all. I'm glad that Jayden is onto his mom's plan. I found myself LOL througout this entire chapter. The twins are hilarious! Between Jay trying to conspire to go swimming at the pool and Dana calling everyone a heathen and wanting to use holy oil on everything it is too funny. I'm happy to see Jayden atleast trying to make an effort to have a relationship with his kids and hopefully Tam. Can't wait to see how the rest of the visit goes.



Author's Response:

Nancy is very selfish and doesn't know how to be a Mom and Jayden has suffered because of it.  More is coming soon!

Reviewer: Butterfly943 Signed
Date: February 14 2013

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