Penname: ChocolateLovesVanilla [Contact]

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Member Since: August 05 2012

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ME&U by Elizablu
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 586]
Summary:

 

 

Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 127262
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014

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Title: ME&U

LOL!!!! This story just keeps getting better and better. Don't stop 'cause I can't wait to see what comes next. I'm on the edge of my seat. I know that Mal's gonna have someones ass not to mention Jethro. Can't wait to see Cayanne get hers. Keep it up!!!!

 Reviewer: ChocolateLovesVanilla Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23 2013
Title: ME&U

When I first discovered this website, "Full Bloom" & "Me&U" were two of the first stories that I read and I instantly fell in love with the stories and the characters.  When I can to this chapter I was on the edge of my seat & I still am.  I don't know what Elizablu needs to get her groove back for this story but I know you can do it.  I know that this story has a lot of layers, characters, and angles to explore so it can be hard to know where to go from here.  This is a really great story and I know you will give it a really great ending.  You are a very talented writer and you inspire someone like me who has so many ideas in their heads and it trying to find a way to get it down on paper (computer screen) and hopefully share it with others one day very soon.  I can't wait to see what you do with this story and how it all ends.



Author's Response:

When I read your review, it brung tears to my eyes. Your words lifted my heart and it feels so good to know that something I love to do, which is tell stories can lift someone's spirits or even inspire.

If you have some ideas that need to have an outlet, then let them out. Write, write, write and write some more. You never know, your story might be one of the Greats. But I do have a good feeling that your story will be one of the classics.

ME&U will be a long story, can't help it. I got so many layers to peel back for TeamMal and sometimes , the magnitude of it tends to be overwhelming. When that happens I step back and collect myself. ME&U will be back soon and the craziness really just got started.

Thank you for reading & loving TeamMal...and I will be waiting on your story.

 Reviewer: ChocolateLovesVanilla Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21 2012
Lotus Flower Bomb by nikki
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

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When shannon mckinleys finds herself at a new high school she doesnt know what to do or what will happen. She believes in love at first sight and when she meets Conner, the head football captain and boy of her dreams she couldnt be more happier. Hes charming, sexy, athletic, and everythig shes every wanted in a guy. But what happens when Racheal Truman, queen bee of the school and Conners ex tries to sabatoge their love for her own benifit. Will the stay together or fall apart? And what will happen when they find out something is not right in the suburban paradise.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators or producers o any media franchise. No copyright infringement is inteneded.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2114
Read Count: 26486
Published: November 13 2011
Updated: January 07 2019

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Title: Lotus Flower Bomb

I would love to hear more about how the coupling of Conner & Shannon happened.  I understand that they are the alpha male & female but I still want to see more.  I know Connor is already protective of Shannon but I would love to also like to see more romance between the two.  They are a cute couple but I would like to see more intimacy between them.  Not the horny teenage type but the connections that go beyond the physical.  The emotional, the intellectual, etc.  I already love them as a couple & love how Conner takes the role of not only Alpha seriously but also the role of protector of not only the Alpha female but his mate & his love very seriously & that really endears me to the character of Connor & Shannon.  I'm loving this story & can't wait to see where it goes.  I find myself re-reading the story in anticipation of the next update.  Keep up the great writing, I know will be & is going to be a great story!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review it honestly made my day. I know exactly what you mean about the romance between these characters being shown and that was what this story was originally going to be about but so much has gotten in the way of it and thats really upseting. It something I have personally thought about eveytime I read over one of the chapters but I can promise I am determined to show it in the next chapter for sure you just got the wheels in my head turning. So glad you love this story as much as I love writing it.

 Reviewer: ChocolateLovesVanilla Signed
Date: December 29 2012
Shattered by Acdromance
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 231]
Summary:

Nyla Rogers is a 26 year old widow, she has just rrecently begun to live again when she meets handsome Dr. Gavin McKeough. She doesnt feel she'll ever love again. Gavin wants to pick up the peices of her shattered heart will she let him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 70273
Read Count: 218744
Published: August 23 2012
Updated: August 29 2014

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Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23- Letting go

Even though I'm on the edge of my seating yelling at the compter asking abot what's next, you can't leave me hanging like that, I also think the way you ended the chapter was great.  It woild have been easy to let the chapter end with Nyla wake up, her and Gavin work things out by her bedside and they live happily ever after.  That would have been too predictable.  I like the way yo ended the chapter becase I feel like this opens you up to taking the story line into many different directions instead of pigeonholing you into an forgone and predictable story and ending.  I'm wating on pins & needles on the edge of my seat holding my breath to see what happens next.

 

CAN'T WAIT!!!!

 Reviewer: ChocolateLovesVanilla Signed
Date: June 03 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.