Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Cause (Revised)
Wow 😯 ... I'm just speechless ....🤐!! I didn't imagine Brandon was going to come at her with all of that. I figured his family might be Klan, but d@mn, his brother is a straight up hateful @$$h0le! For him to continuously bring negativity into Bradons life when he was simply trying to redirect it was so tremendously f'ed up!! 😡😩. My heart goes out to Brandon on that note. I think Brandon really could use some additional therapy ... for real. With all he had going on in his life, it's a wonder at his confindence in his ability to deal with Diya and her family. Especially given her father is a civil rights attorney. I'm glad and proud of Diya for her patience and willingness to hear him out. It goes to show how deep her feelings for him have fallen. I just hope they can continue to be open and honest with one another. With the challenges they're facing, they're really going to need that. I can imagine this party is going to be interesting.
Now, Brandon could've done a lil more @$$ kiss in' if you ask me, 😏, but then again, I could tell he was struggling with feeling that he didn't even deserve Diya's forgiveness during his confessions, so I suppose I'll give him a pass this time 😉. Dude just betts bring it in them sheets! LOL 😜😋😄!
This installment was deep on so many different levels. Great update with a lot of clarification. BTW, I love the pace of this story. With all of the layers you've incorporated into this awesome story, it would be a true shame to rush it. So, keep bringing it the way you do! 😀
Author's Response: Musicluva, you make an excellent point about Brandon wanting to meet Diya's father. There is a method to his madness that'll be discussed later. I can say confessing his racist past to William is not in Brandon's plans. Whether or not Daddy Dearest finds out is another matter.
Diya is in DEEP when it comes to her feelings for Brandon, which is why he so easily found forgiveness without ever really seeking it. And, as you suggested, he never asked or did any ass-kissing because he doesn't think there's anything he can say or do to deserves Diya or her forgiveness, magic stick and all ; )
I'm so happy to know you're enjoying the pace and plot of the story. Thanks so much for the support, for sharing your insight, and for taking this bumpy ass ride with me : )
P.S. Mia's birthday party will be VERY interesting...
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed
Date: January 28 2016