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Tale of Two by Alexandria Glass
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 74]
Summary:

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Pandora Steele is your everyday geek who has never had a guy look at her twice...until she meets Bradley Phillips. Bradley Phillips is tired of the kind of life he leads and searches for something different. He finds her and magical things happen. Tale of Two follows Bradley and Pandora throughout the years as they fight for love but life fights back.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 16278
Read Count: 10791
Published: August 17 2016
Updated: August 29 2016

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I don't doubt that you are a good writer, but I already don't like Bradley and this is only the first two chapters. All that talk about Hope being clingy and crazy, yet he even married her and has a child with her. I'm guessing either he gave in or Hope formed a plan that he stupidly fell for and got her pregnant. I'm liking Pandora and  if I continue reading the story I hope she will eventually fall in love with someone else or that she already has someone special in her life. A guy between two sister and having been intimate with both of them is anything but attractive. Pandora deserve better.



Author's Response:

thank you for your feedback! it really keeps me motivated to continue on. 

 Reviewer: grazylisa Signed
Date: August 17 2016
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I think we all kind of guessed that Hope might of set up a plan to get Bradley. Even if he got her pregnant, he still didn't have to mary her to be able to be a father for his child. I still hope that Pandora will find true love with someone else instead of her sisters left overs. Sorry but I still don't and can't ship her and Bradley. 

 Reviewer: grazylisa Signed
Date: August 29 2016

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