Penname: Aries-Care [Contact]

Real name: Jacey Tyler

Member Since: April 20 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm a Louisiana Native mes cheres. I currently have my B.A. in psychology working on my MA in counseling. I'm new to putting my work up so bare with me. Super nervous. (bites nails).Laissez le bon temps rouler!!!



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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

& NOW KINDLE VELLAS TOP 250 FAVORITES LIST *

FIVE STARS ON AMAZON

When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214782
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I would like for Mark's affair and love child come to light 

Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed
Date: June 13 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 153]
Summary:

 

Mallory Ruskin lost her sight in an unfortunate accident five years ago. Can she push aside the fear of the assumed and the unknown to trust the one man who had her heart?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 28493
Read Count: 19565
Published: January 29 2013
Updated: May 19 2014


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Weight of the World

My only concern is this cliff hanger!! I want more

Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed
Date: July 06 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 776]
Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108480
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Regret

Tam is still irking me. Taking Dana to a therapist. Hell, she has more issues than her child. Shame.

Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed
Date: May 08 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Sebastian and Sage want what they can't have.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4846
Read Count: 5679
Published: May 02 2013
Updated: May 04 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was an interesting update. I really enjoyed the story; can wait to read your next story

Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed
Date: May 04 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 140]
Summary:

Kalila is the Guardian or so she is told…whatever that means she's not sure. All she really knows is that it involves a key and the destruction of the world.

Days before her 20th birthday she meets her father and his two best friends. Now her once boring life has become a roller-coaster of mystery, intrigue and romance. It’s nice to finally have a father but what are the feelings she holds for he father's friends Marcus and Caine? Will they live long enough to find out?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: End of the World, repent!
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 23156
Read Count: 9551
Published: May 04 2013
Updated: January 16 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

All I can say is wow. I'm ready to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed
Date: May 04 2013

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 288957
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Val...or Valerie is really irking the hell out me. If she wants to b alone great,  but don't drive everyone down with her. I'm glad I dnt have friends like her. Sheesh! let her a** b lonely and living in a miserable world of regret until she learns on her own to do better. (woo saaa) ok my rant is over. Great update; keep em comin.

Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed
Date: June 03 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 68]
Summary:

I never said I was the  good guy. I'm nobody's hero.

 

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 15545
Read Count: 8760
Published: May 11 2013
Updated: June 08 2014


Title: Chapter 1: The first time I met her

I'm super excited for this story to unfold. I loved Morgan and Alicia from the previous story. Can't wait

Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed
Date: May 11 2013

Title: Chapter 3: 2 weeks

It kinda is fast but the heart wants what it wants. And it's realistic, some relationships don't take long for you to feel like you're in love. I love your characters, I was was hooked after the first one shot. Please update soon.

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Date: June 08 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 417]
Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53961
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 A Method to the Madness

Oh.My.Gawd! Qu'ai j'ai lu?! (What did I read?!)Ophelia is not thinking straight, it seems like she's suffering from Stockholm Syndrome. Hope at the end, she sees a therapist. C'est une excellente mise à jour!(This is an excellent update)!! I hope she goes with Teddy's plan, it seems more diabolitical 



Author's Response:

Ophelia is determined to make Raymond pay.  Will it happen?  Stay tuned!

Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed
Date: May 29 2013

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[Reviews - 64]
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10 years went by in the blink of an eye. Now eveyone was gathered in a tiny town for there highschool reunion. Sparks will fly as old 'friends' meet again.

Then enters two guys who have come with the intention of wooing the one girl they shouldnt have let go of in the first place. The only problem is there after the same girl.

On this unlevel playing field where hurt, love and jealousy run wild everyone is playing for keeps



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15228
Read Count: 10429
Published: June 22 2013
Updated: November 16 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Telling my Story

This is a great story so far. Please update soon.

Ok, I hope she isn't going to forgive Mark of everything he's done to her easily. It seems like she would be selling herself short if she forgives him and gets back together with him. Especially, after her late husband showed her how a man is suppose to treat her. 

Mark has a long uphill journey ahead of him. I hope he feels everything bad that he has made Melody feel. 



Author's Response:

It's never easy to forgive and Mark is going to have to work for it. I really wanted to show how time can change a person, he wont be perfect but he is a work in progress.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed
Date: June 26 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

I am currently NOT working on this story and don't know when I will be again. Writing this takes a toll on me and I have kinda been posting other things here. Give them a looksie. :]

 

Kensington's battered body ached from abuse, each blow recieved slowly tearing her apart. She was drowning in the hell that once used to be her home until a mysterious stranger comes along. Will he be the one restrore Kensington's faith in the world?

Heads up: The beginning (meaning the first few chapters)  of this story is a bit DARK. If you are of a faint heart than I fear this story is not going to be appealing to you. 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 10114
Read Count: 12992
Published: July 25 2013
Updated: May 29 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow

Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed
Date: July 25 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

 

Hello again my Chamber friends I appreciate the opinions that were posted here and the ones that were personally sent to me. I have decided that I will keep the names the same and the story of Kayla and Tyler as well, but I think I’m going to polish it up a little bit without changing the story line. As for the new characters I have decided to let this be an independent story and this will be the first chapter into the world of Kaila, Jordan and Canada with a few changes starting with where it takes place and a few other little things. I will be reposting this first chapter when i have it redone so please be looking out for it, and again thank you all so much for your input.

 

 

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2083
Read Count: 1130
Published: June 28 2014
Updated: June 28 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think u should keep everyone's name the same to avoid confusion. 

 

Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed
Date: June 28 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.