Penname: neneburge [Contact]

Real name: Anita Brown

Member Since: March 03 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio:

40+ year old mother of two..married 20years to same fella...who is extremely patient with me and loves it when you girls right the naughty cause it makes me amourous as he puts it..I just say horney..rotfl!

I am currently taking care of our neices who are 4yrs and 8yrs my (my kids: daughter is 21 and my son is 23) and it makes me feel young!!

I love to read. I love meeting new people. I love talking (as you can tell).

I work too hard but I am extremely grateful to have a job at this time!

I am very active in my church and with organizations I believe in because I believe that actions speak louder than words!!

I put God first in my life, my family second , my friends third and everything else falls into place!!

I am very happy I found this place and you wonderfully talented ladies!!! You make me smile, laugh, cry (rarely) and enjoy reading again!!

  

 




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Bright Ōsaka Star by puertaobierta
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 373]
Summary:

 

Sara Richards lives in Ōsaka, Japan. She becomes embroiled in the drama and comedy of clashing cultures, traditional philosophies and modern ideas as she is reunited with the past. She struggles to navigate the tempestuous waters where East meets West and a love lost but not forgotten that may never be regained, while keeping her eye on the one point in the sky that can lead her the peace of dry land. Her Bright Ōsaka Star.

 

Fabulous Banner by Music!!!

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 72940
Read Count: 168305
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: June 27 2012

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Title: Chapter 11: Jyuu (10)

OMGos I loved this story and have missed it so much!!

I just adore Darren?percy and who wouldnt want then as parents!

Yuki's mom gonna gt the beatdown before it is over it sems!! lol

I absolutely adore Shouda..and I know he parents still love each other!!

This such a wonderful story..I hope you do get a chance to updt soon!

Sorry to hear about your family problems..and I hope you are doing ok....thank you sweetie for giving another slice of this wonderful art of your..great job!!



Author's Response:

Thank you nene for more than just your review. I really appreciate it. Glad that you enjoy the story and there is more to come. I think Umezawa needs a beat done too. Its a race to see who gets to do it.

Till next time!

:)

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Jyuu yon (14)

I lurvs this story so much..I don't wan it to end!!

I think I am really starting to fall for Yuki...I have forgiven him for being a chump and giving up on Sarah the first time cause he is proving over and over that he is a real man for her now!!

Yuki was all sexy alpha man for his Sarah ..he made her a promise and delivered ...and the conversation with them was sweet and very respectful...I really like that..I want them together but the right wy...he neds to get divorced and ease his way back into Sarahs life again..I think he never left her heart!!

I love Yuki's dad being his back up and kinda match make..that was so awesome!!

Great job again sweetie..as always!



Author's Response:

Yea for Yuki! I must say, I like him myslef, but I always did even though I made him look reeeeallll bad. But he is a good guy. Yes, I want to keep their relationship respectful. I appreciate you pointing that out. Kenji is a trip, makes you wonder what he has up his sleeve. He always has something up there.

Thanks nene as always! :}

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24 2012
Title: Chapter 12: Jyuu ichi (11)

This was a nice surprise..I did not expect an updt so soon..I am so happy!

I don't dislike Kamir but he is nit right for Sara..He is not respectful of her business like Yuki or her time with Shouda ...I understand he is focused solely on getting Sara but al that is a part of Sara comes with the woman...includin her relationship with Yuki...

I actually really have come to love the idea of Yuki and Sara..though i did not like him him much at first....I know his wife is not happy...maybe they will realize they would be better off apart 

I am cheering for Sar, Yuki and Shouda...and it seems O am not the only one...Shinohara is right there too...

Great updt sweetie..loved it!~



Author's Response:

Absolutely, Kamir has to be patient. Is it in his nature? Well, we don't know that much about him. He kind of burst on the sceen in the middle of everything. Yeah for Yuki, he turned another one! Yes, Shinohara was being sneaky! Little bugger. 

Thanks nene! :)

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Date: December 11 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Jyuu san (13)

I actually really like Karou..she really does just keep it real. I respect that she told Yuki teh truth and that they care enough about each other to just move on and let the other one be happy.

They were so adult and mature about it....sometimes honesty is the best avenue.

Kamir on the other hand ..I am about sick of him...what a jerk...he is definitely not good enough for Sarah but He is not good enough bed partner for Karou either.

I hope Yuki can find a way to help Sarah and more than anhything I hope they can get back together.

 



Author's Response:

I can't believe I haven't answered reviews as far back as this. Please forgive me! (ToT)

Yes, Yuki and Kaoru have a unique relationship to be sure, but I think I would have a hard time writing it any other way. Needless drama makes me tired and bored. I feel like they should be over it by now.

Thanks!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27 2012
Title: Chapter 14: Jyuu san (13)

Forgot to say how much  loved the updt and cannot wait for more...excellent job sweetie as usual!!

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Date: February 27 2012
Title: Chapter 16: Jyuu go (15)

I just love love love Shouda..he is perfection in a child..so sweet, kind and loving. He is what all parents want their children to be...funny I agree with Izumi..he is a lot like Yuki..alot..though Sarau through and through...he is teh best of them both!! Respectful , charming, smart and humble..lots from his dad...I really love Shouda.

 

I love how he put it out there though..he wants his parents together again and he wants brothers and sisters with them...but he is too sensitive to hurt Karou (his mother's side) to achieve his desires....I love that so much.

I am glad Izumi got to spendd this time with Shouda and that it made her realize some things about her own child...it was a beautiful revelation!

I love how it is all developing....I think everyone is going to come to the conclusion tha Yuki and Sarau need to be together...as it was always suppose to be...

Sweetie can weave a story like no other...the characters are so real...yiu acre about them, appreciate them and wish for their happiness!! 

They have dignity, love and copassion. No matter how bad some of them may have started off you want them to have HEA they all deserve...even Karou !!!  Excellent job sweetie.. 

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Date: March 27 2012
Title: Chapter 17: Jyuu roku (16)

I am glad Sarau found out the truth about Kamir..I really do not care for him and how dare him be jealous of Yuki!! 

I do not want Sarau mad at Karaou though..I want them to be friends...I think Karaou is a good person in a bad situation...everything about her marriage was just wrong and both her and yuki were unhappy! Karaou really respects and admires Saarau..they should be friends.

I think Karou is too good for Kamir..I think she should enjoy being single and working..she should find someone that chose her first..desired her first and foremost ..not as an after thought because they could not have Sarau like Kamir and Yuki.

Also..I think Sarau in her heart knows Yuki cares about her because she still cares about him. I just think however he admits his feelings it should be done as respectful and tasteful ,sweetly and lovingly sensitive as everything about there relationship has been so far!!

Excellent updt sweetie....I just cannot get enough of this wonderful wonderful story!

 



Author's Response:

I know right? Kamir has some nerve. It will be interesting to see how Kaoru and Sara interact now that Sara knows. Indeed. I think you are right about what Sara knows in her heart. I think its growing inside her little by little. In fact, I'd go so far as to say the only things suppressing it, is his marrage. xD And we all know whats up with that!

Thanks nene!

:}

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Date: April 01 2012
Dashenka: Half-Breed by Quills
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 163]
Summary:

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In the Sedetian Empire a Dashenka male rules with absolute power. While the female is taught submission and obeisance. And humans are nothing more than slaves. It is within this society that half-breed Aria Skal is born and must learn to accept if she has any hope surviving.  But survival seems nearly impossible when she discovers that her Vadar has sold her to the highest bidder, the son of the Ruling Male.

Oren Di-Lor is a cruel and overbearing male who hates the very air Aria breathes. He is her newly acquired mate and the bane of her existence. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 41889
Read Count: 31961
Published: August 23 2011
Updated: October 15 2012

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oren is  HYPOCRITICAL bully~ Hw treats Aria the worse way based on rumors and is surprised she runs away...jerk,

This story is ecthed in my mind I loved it so much ...pls send us more..I love@@

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved this story when you first posted it and have loned for more..I am so happy you are bringing it back!!!Excellent story sweetie...

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Date: August 28 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I thik Aria and Oren are getting closer..he seems to finally be wooing her instead of being a jerk and demanding her to give herself o him by force. I cannot wait to seeee where they go from here...

I cannot wait to read Oren's friends stiries...I love good series and this will make a great one...awesomeness sweetie!

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Date: October 20 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I forgot how much Oren made me want to kick his butt at first and how much I loved Alaric!!

I love Aria!! She is beautiful, strong and proud!! She will show Oren what a gift she really is before it is over and he will love her or let her go!!

I love this story sweetie..more more more!!

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Date: October 07 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Girl I love this story and you write the heck out of it!!

I remember how much I hated Oren here ..humiliating and trying to break Aria..but I also remember hwo strong and full of pride she was also..not letting him treat her any type of way w/confrontation no matter the cost to herself!

He should feel guilty and I hope it eats him up and makes him treat her better!!

Aria as Daahenka is bad as heck but I just think sista is bad period! 

Great job sweetie..I lovee this story and you are writing the heck out of it!!

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Date: October 13 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

He is a big bully!! Oren is a spoiled use to taking whatever he wants beast and Aria having a mind of her own is not giving into it!!

It is silly for him to think that he could treat her her anyway and she would be ok with it but he is learning that not all women fall at his feet ..he will need to learn to treat her right before he can expect anything in return!!

Great job sweetie..I love this story ...

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

His mother is a wise woman..I am glad she loves him enough to set him straight and that he loves her enough to listen!!

It is obvious that they are starting to care a great deal abbbout each other...It is a lonnnnggg road...and I am not sure where it will lead but the journey will be interesting to watch to say the least..long as they wind up in love..iit will be worth it!!

Now plz heal Aria ..she has been through enough!!

I loveeee this story sweetie!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18 2011

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