Penname: Treale [Contact]

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Member Since: May 25 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm just girl. Trying to live in this big writing world. Lol. Im still in high school Class of 2014!! I been writing since I was nine. I was mainly writing poems but I lost my sparks. I just got my writing bug back so i decided to share my stories and share it with you guys! 


I love writing about interracial love stories and dark fiction.


Love has no boundaries. 


Perfect combinations are rare in an imperfect world. ♥


make sure you guys follow me on Twitter @Just_CallMe_PUD I will have info on the stories and things like that. 


 


                                           *Story update!*


Me and Ayoo_Joi are taking a break from working on Anybody Can Find Love. We feel like we lost our vision with the story. So we are going to be making some changes to the story. We are so sorry you guys. Hopefully you guys will like the new changes we are making. You will see the A new version of the story really soon we promise!




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Reviews by Treale


Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

What's a girl to do when there are two after you? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Threesome+
Challenges: Give Me a Mountain Man Anyday!
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 6583
Read Count: 43901
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: July 13 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I like this one!! I'm already in love with the little brother. Lol. More please!! 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Everybody got their secrets. I love but can't stand Haynes. Lol. 

Casey is so sweet I just want to pinch his cheeks! Lol 

But why Haynes won't tell Casey that they a freaking millionaires??

OMG Loving it!!! 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05 2013

Title: The McRyan Brothers

I love it. I'm so in love with the nickname Lil Bit for Casey. That is just the cutest thing. Lol. I hate Haynes sometimes but then I love him. Lol 

Why won't Haynes tell Lil Bit above through mother and what did she do that was so horrible that Haynes don't want to remember??  Oooooo some many questions!  Can't wait for the next update ""

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16 2013

Title: The McRyan Brothers

I can handle Haynes!! Lol. Awesome update!! 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

For Elyshia Jenkins, one night will change her life forever.
If it is for the better or worse, only time will tell.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 16634
Read Count: 38146
Published: September 03 2013
Updated: January 03 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Hope

I was so happy when I saw this update! 

Great update!! 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Proposition

I like this. Very good start! Can't wait to see what you have next! Please continue! 



Author's Response: thanks, I hope you like where I go !!!

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

The sequel to Metamorphosis!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7989
Read Count: 2980
Published: September 08 2013
Updated: April 14 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1

Rory ass is still the same. Lol. I love it. but she need to listen to Vic obviously he knows what he be talking about. She always into something and Vic is always coming to save the day!  

Damn I missed them!! Lol 



Author's Response:

Haha! Too true. Thanks for your review! These crazy cats were ready to get out again :)

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

Ummmmmmmm yessssssss!!!! I need more!!! I like that Vic is telling it. 



Author's Response:

The prologue is in Nate's POV. Was it confusing? Let me know! Glad you're liking it :)

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Cast of Characters

No it wasn't confusing I read it wrong.  When I saw the update my mind automatically went to Vic and Rory. Lol. 



Author's Response:

Oh, good! *wipes brow* Don't worry. We shall see them soon enough :D

Reviewer: Treale Signed
Date: September 08 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Taylor is ready for something to change in her life. She is ready for someone special to come and alter her views of relationships. She is ready to be happy.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 31822
Read Count: 4950
Published: September 09 2013
Updated: September 27 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One.

I'm really liking this story! I love Alex she crazy ass hell. Lol Great update! 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10 2013

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 267]
Summary:

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Response to the Made to Order challenge!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54406
Read Count: 50801
Published: September 11 2013
Updated: December 18 2013


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Obsession

WHAT in the HELL is wrong with Anne?? I knew the bitch was crazy,.but DAMN THIS JUST TOOK THE CAKE!!!!!!! I'M soooooooooooooooo over Anne I can't even think straight. Her crazy ass gives me headaches!!  Lol 

Awesome update!!  

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 A New Crisis

Anne makes me sick to my stomach!! How can you rape somebody how is dying!! Really? That's some sick shit!! Anne needs to get hit by a bus and burn to death!! Ugh!! 

Now PLEASE DON'T LET THOMAS DIE!!!!! I love him!! 

Alfred was to funny about the tablets and the images. I love Alfred! 

And What does the safe deposit box contains? What is so important about it?

Oooooooooo some many questions!!  I love it! 

Awesome updates Brenda!! You rock!! ♥



Author's Response:

LOL  Anne is a nut case for sure, but I love playing with her evil ass.  There's nothing she won't do in her obsession with the late Charles Breggins!  LOL at Alfred.  YOu know how he rolls.  He'll go through all of your stuff and hold it up for the world to see.  *snicker*

As for what's in the box, you'll have to wait and see.  I hope to update by tomorrow.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Intimacy

SHIT!! I need a cig too. Alfred Alfred Alfred!  Smh.  That Alfred is something else!! Lol. I need me an Alfred!!!  

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20 2013

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Trouble

Brenda.....Brenda......Brenda......Smh. Lol. This chapter right here was awesome!! 

I can't deal with Anne Finney!! Her ass need to be lock in a mental institution were she can commit suicide and DIE! Ugh she makes my stomach hurt. I can't. 

Can't wait for the next update!!

 



Author's Response:

Anne is truly a vile nutcase!  Yeah, more is coming!

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16 2013

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Coming Together

All I have to say is this!! Anything and anywhere you take this story I would love it!! I'm Team everybody EXPECT for Annie she can choke on a stick and die for all I care!! Lol.

Can't wait for the next update!!  ♥



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for that comment and for your support.  I'm letting my muse run wild.  I know I'm not going to please everyone because of the reviews I received, but I got to do what the muse says.  As for Annie, more of her devilment is coming up.  LOL

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

I like this. Alfred. is to cute. He a lil freaky. Lol 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 11 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

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Other Half has come out with their latest model. Jae finds himself owner of the most lifelike robotic companion yet.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 6404
Read Count: 5144
Published: September 12 2013
Updated: November 07 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Me like!!! More please!!  Lol 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 12 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

 

 

Short story about the strange love between two very different people.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6963
Read Count: 8513
Published: September 15 2013
Updated: May 15 2014


Title: Beneath Your Beautiful

Nooooooooo!!! I need more!! LOL 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16 2013

Title: Beneath Your Beautiful

Omgggg! So he is Hades??

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Love is kind, yet brutal. Warm, but so cold. Joyful, yet sad



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 18403
Read Count: 4302
Published: September 24 2013
Updated: January 07 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

OMG!! This is so good!! I need more!!! MORE!!!!!!!!! ヽ(^z90;^)ノ

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 24 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 27]
Summary:

It was an unusual arrangement. Like oil and water, they didn't mix. Throw in a confusing mixture of feelings, politics, and their tumultuous past and you get.... well I don't really know what you get. But you know what they say, all's fair in love and war. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 6901
Read Count: 5054
Published: September 29 2013
Updated: May 23 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Ooooooooooo!! I like this!!! More please!!! 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary: You took my virginity long before you penetrated me. Our souls, thoughts, and bodies dance to the same rhythm. No one knows or suspects anything. For our song is written in a silent key.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1840
Read Count: 1711
Published: October 14 2013
Updated: October 14 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Drops of Jupiter

I like this. It's really interesting. I'm looking forward to the next update. I don't think I said that right, but you know what I mean. Lol 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

Who knew the boy with the big dreams and kind smile would be her undoing. She may have fallen in love, but he fell along with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 4234
Read Count: 7643
Published: October 20 2013
Updated: December 04 2013


Title: Chapter 1: The Meeting

Im liking this. Great start!  Can't wait for the next update! 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

He's the world's most famous supermodel.

She's the church singer whose hypocritical lifestyle has been unveiled by one simple picture with him.

 

A story of redemption, love and family.  

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 26153
Read Count: 31587
Published: October 22 2013
Updated: October 24 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Whatever Happen's in the Dark comes to Light.

Ooooooooooo my husband is back!!! Lol. Im liking this!! Can't wait for the next update. 

If it takes your Muse a billion years to comeback I will still be here!! Lol.



Author's Response:

Uh.. David is mine LOL

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 97]
Summary:

Denise is a young woman who is on the verge of giving up on love. Never having love in her life she is wondering what is wrong until she meets Issac. Issac has been avoiding relationships for the past few years to support himself but is ashamed of telling someone what he does for a living. Will he tell her his secret? But will she tell him hers?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 35052
Read Count: 29405
Published: October 29 2013
Updated: December 08 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome update!! Then Isaac was singing my song Lol. And I agree with Pmgayles time for Denise to put it on him. Lol 

Can't wait for the next update!! 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.