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[Reviews - 38]
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  I was broken when he found me,damaged goods..My name held no meaning when shame fit so well in its place but he saw me, the real me, that little thread I held onto and kept in a box hidden beneath my chest. He knew my flaws and instead of running in the opposite direction he ran towards me hitting me dead on like a sledgehammer .He licked my wounds, allowing my scars to heal before peeling back each layer of myself to devour and claim, he brought me unspeakable pleasure using my body as his canvas.Many would of considered him a monster, a killer, an evil man. His Name was Nickolai  Harkov with the Russian Bravta and he was the man I fell in love with.

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     I was the second in line to lead in the Harkov Bravta. The hardcore exterior I portrayed made me who I was a lethal and merciless killer . Darkness nearly overtook me, until I stumbled upon Tiara. She didn't know it but she was my light that pulled at the vessel beating beneath my rib cage. She made me question life, before her nothing matter, but now I would do anything within my power to be with the woman that gave me a reason to live.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8575
Read Count: 9783
Published: July 15 2015
Updated: July 23 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh Nick, it seems you're going to have to make major amends for the sins of your father to have your woman by your side. I'm liking this story so far and I can't wait to see where you take it next. Update soon!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading my naughty thoughts!! i'm so happy and humbled!!! more is to come i promise!!

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: July 16 2015

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[Reviews - 470]
Summary:

While returning home to Chicago from a business trip Anika Wallace and Hunter Sterling IV find themselves the only surviors of a plane crash on a South Pacific island. There's no telling when they'll make it back home or if they ever will make it back home for that matter. One thing is for sure they're going to have to learn how to get along their survival is depending on it.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:No
Word count: 54201
Read Count: 121653
Published: August 12 2015
Updated: March 02 2017


Title: Chapter 27: DAY 44

I love this story!! This is a MAJOR turning point for both of them. Hunter wants her, but he wants to help her heel from that douchebag's hurtful words.  Anika for knowing that Hunter is making an effort to show her a different side and let her know that she is attractive. Hopefully, she'll open up more sooner now that she knows Hunter's intentions. Oh yeah, where was Hunter sleeping if Anika couldn't get in the tree house? I bet he let her think he was sleeping in the tree house, but came down at night to watch her. I'm not going to lie, I did miss Mohawk in this update. Good job.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: April 03 2016

Title: Chapter 36: DAY 61

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon. I absolutely love this story and everything about it. I need to know what happens  between this cute budding family of Hunter, Anika & Mohawk. Also how Mr. Sterling is going to deal with his wife while helping the Wallace boys and grandma out. Amazing story. I cannot wait to see what Anika said about who called her a dalmatian and Hunter's reaction. Update ASAP.

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Date: March 19 2017

Title: Chapter 1: DAY 1

I really like the premise of your story.  I have a feeling Anika is going to surprise the hell out of Hunter in many ways. He's already got a sneak peek with that little prayer he said for her grandma and brothers. I am excited to see how the story unfolds.



Author's Response:

Hunter certainly has a lot of maturation to do and should  be  thankful that  there's  somebody on the  island with him and he's not alone. Hearing  Anika's prayer is going to help him realize that there are bigger things at stake here.

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Date: August 12 2015

Title: Chapter 22: DAY 36

I am so glad Hunter and Anika are becoming closer and working together to survive on the island. Hunter is growing in ways that he should and not being a selfish, egotistical jackals like he was before the crash. Self-realization and reflection are both powerful and life-changing. I wish Anika would share a little more of herslef with Hunter and she is, it's just at a slower rate. Mohawk is just too adorable. He really is like their  child. I hope he gets to come back with them if or when they get rescued. Am I the 200th review for "200 Days?" If so yay me and yay  you for reviews of an awesome story.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: January 17 2016

Title: Chapter 33: THE TRIP 2

This is one of the best stories!! I love reading about their relationship growing on the island, but I love seeing what their professional relationship was like too. Sterling, is the stereotypical spoiled brat momma's boy. Anika, bless her heart. She's just trying to do right by her family and those she is helping. I am so glad Giselle and her croonies met their fate. If she'd survived instead of Anika, Hunter and Giselle would be dead in two days instead of surviving all of these months with Anika. Great update.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: June 14 2016

Title: Chapter 36: DAY 61

OMG. I am so excited for the next chapter!!! Please uodate sooon. I absolutely  love this story. I'm glad Mohawk is going back with them!!

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: March 02 2017

Title: Chapter 36: DAY 61

Please update. I love all of your stories,  but this one grabs my heart. I am eager to know whats going on with the Twins, Nana, Mr. Sterling, not necersarily his jag of a wife, but how he deals with her!!! Hunter and Anika's relationship is changing in a positive  way and I want to see how this little family, including Mohawk, carry on along the island. Once again, please update!! Puh-leeeeeeze... I'm begging like Jodeci.

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Date: January 30 2018

Title: Chapter 36: DAY 61

Update? Please! This is one of your best stories and I re-read it often. I need to know what happens between everyone.🙄

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: July 28 2018

Title: Chapter 36: DAY 61

Has any inspiration hit for this story? It's one of my alll time favorite stories. Please update when you get inspired. It is very well.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: February 14 2019

Title: Chapter 36: DAY 61

Update? This is a fabulous story that should be continued! It's one of my favorites.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: March 28 2019

Title: Chapter 36: DAY 61

THis is one of my all time favorite stories. I hope inspiration hits for you to update!

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Date: July 20 2020

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[Reviews - 433]
Summary:

 

Thoroughly revised and reuploaded!

 

Willow Carter is a plus-sized girl with lots of attitude and very low self-esteem. When her mother and oler sister force her to jog to slim down for her sister's wedding, she is attacked by a madman and rescued by a savior. But just because a man saves your life doesn't mean you should trust him. Soon she throws herself into a thrilling game of cat and mouse that brings more pain than pleasure and puts everyone she loves in harm's way.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 90171
Read Count: 301966
Published: October 04 2015
Updated: April 17 2021


Title: Chapter 15: Breaking and Mending

Man oh, man. I loved this chapter!! So many emotions on everyone's parts. Oh Bas! These two were finally making good progress with each other until he was summoned by Juliette in the last chapter. I'm glad Willow went over to check on her boyfriend, since that's what people in relationships do for each other. It makes me sad for Bas that because of his past and obligations  he seems as if he doesn't deserve any type of love. Because of that, he's rejected Willow and her love despite her willingness to love him until recent revelations about his job. I'm also glad Farrah came to her senses and realized she was a candidate for the "Bridezilla" tv show. Yay for Willow getting to be in the wedding AND picking out her own dress. I can't wait to see her in the wedding...unless something happens to her. That Jasper, oh man. Is it wishful thinking that he acutally come to genuinely like Willow instead of hurting her? His disdain and hate for Bas and orders for Juliette make that doubtful. I can't wait until Bas finds out that Jasper is messing/kissing with Willow, the ish will definitely hit the fan.  Is Willow still going to be jogging in the same park? Will Jasper be her new jogging partner OR her date to the wedding. Oh lawd. I know school just started back and you updated, but dag nabbit, I'm going to need you to update quickly!! Thanks. Oh yeah, I absolutely love this story, one of my all time faves! That is all.

 

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Date: January 05 2016

Title: Chapter 24: A First Time for Everything

I NEED am update ASAP!!! I love these two just as much as Sugar and Chef. 

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Date: January 21 2018

Title: Chapter 16: Show and Tell

Ahhhh!!! I adore these two. There chemistry is the stuff dreams are made of. I am glad Jasper got dealt with by Bas. I like Isa alot, she seems like the annoying, yet loveable little sis thay bas never had. Why hasn't  Bas's dad punished Juilette for her wrongdoinga? I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. I know Willow's sis isn't  foing to be the happiest about her sis getting back  with the man that broke her heart, but it's  not her choice. I'm  eagerly awaiting the next chapter! !!

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Date: February 23 2016

Title: Chapter 12: Guest of the Hour

I'm so glad you brought this story back. I really love Willow because I can relate to her on so many levels.  In an early chapter Willow said they needed each other and they do. The initial attraction was sizzling and they're love will be explosive!! The way Sebastian handled  her little friend at movie night was awesome. The raw emotion Willow had when she found out about the little game Simon and his friend played made me actually cry for her. The fact that Bas proved a point that he's into her and, unbeknowst to her, that he killed Simon for her is a deeper level of love, commitment, and protection of her. They are lucky to have found each other that fateful day in the park, otherwise they'd still be miserable. I can't wait to see if Bas' background is still the same. I love this story!! Update with a quickness because I'm eager to see the new twists and turns develop. I hope you bring "Baby It's Cold Outside" back too!! Yay for revamping an already awesome story.



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much. I am so happy that you can relate to Willow and her struggles. I think being able to identity with a character in a story is one of the most powerful things a reader can experience. Knowing that someone relates to my characters is an overwhelming thing for me too. In the first posting of this story, Sebastian was mysterious and sexy, but he wasn't fleshed out in the way I wanted him to. Their relationship was too isolated for it to be a big part of Willow's life. I felt like I had to make him meet her friends, her first lover, and her parents to show him that she is an innocent pure woman with a life full of people she loves compared to him who doesn't have anyone at all even if his parents are both still alive. I am glad you enjoyed those new additions. And Sebastian's background has changed significantly and I decided to introduce it in later chapters though and not just introduce it in tiny flashbacks. BICO is next on the list to be revamped from head to toe and I think you will definitely enjoy the new changes to that one!

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: October 06 2015

Title: Chapter 24: A First Time for Everything

Update? 

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: January 31 2018

Title: Chapter 24: A First Time for Everything

Between Sebastian and Chef, I don't know what to do with myself. They are both tall, dark, mysterious, handsome, and both know what they want. And Sebastian wants Willow. I'm glad he finally  glad he opened up to Willow about his past. I'm glad they're moving in the right direction as a couple!! I love this story and Sugar Mama. I hope you had a great Thanksgiving break!! If you could find and a Sebastian or Chef, it'd be greatly appreciated. Thanks for the update :)

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: November 27 2017

Title: Chapter 26: Battle Half-Won

 I'm so glad you updated  this story. I love these two just as much as Sugar and Chef! Good for Willow for explaining why she doesn't want to have a baby right now, but she knows Seabstian isn't going to stand for it. He and Willow are having a baby...this baby! I love how Willow has become.more confident with herself within this relationship and even when they were separated. Sebastian has a head strong woman on his hands that's doing everything to make this relationship right, including calling tjebsperm donor to set up a meeting. I am intrigued to see what they come up to blackmail  the organization! Updateagain...soon.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: July 12 2018

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

This is a brief story about revenge. The prey and the victim's names are not included.



Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 471
Read Count: 4830
Published: October 05 2015
Updated: October 05 2015


Title: Chapter 1: The Captive

Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Hello, I posted this scene because I wanted to see if readers would be interested in this story. If so, I planned to write the entire story after I've completed the one I'm currently invested in. I was surprised by all the great responses, and I thank each and every one of you for enjoying the scene. I shall return with a more fleshed out story, from beginning to end, in the future. Thank you again. ~ Virginia Gilbert

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Date: October 06 2015

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[Reviews - 85]
Summary:

Isabella "Izzy" Salvatore is just like any other first grader who likes to draw and color pictures and is living the happy carefree days of childhood. However some of Izzy's drawings are not so happy and carefree some are just really dark and twisted.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Psychological
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 27153
Read Count: 7089
Published: February 07 2016
Updated: November 26 2016


Title: Chapter 1: ELEPHANT TRUNK

Ugh. I'm so gad Izzy is seeing a therapist!!! I wwnt through  something similar with a student. Its absolutely  haeartbreaking to know that something like this is happening and two adults are doing it, one being a parent that is supposed to love and cherish her. I want to take her myself and make sure nothing happens to her. Kids this age are supposed to be having fun, making friends with other kids and just being kids. Oh I hope Luc goes the legal route first BEFORE whooping the landlord like the MMA fighter he is.

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Date: February 07 2016

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Summary:

It's gonna be a bumpy road!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 31436
Read Count: 43009
Published: February 08 2016
Updated: March 05 2016


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I knew Dylan was behind Hilary's visit. He's  in insecure, manipulative SOB trying to weasel  how way to folding out about the competition and hope to beat them.  I want to know the real reason  Hilary  left him for Dylan. Probably because some type of arranged family marriage or something.  Ugh. Reuben may need counseling to officially get obver Hilary. Amelle is great!!

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: February 13 2016

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Summary:

 

Of all the women that Riccardo Cappella would fall for he would have never thought that it would be Alise Turner. The petite caramel beauty owned the most popular bakery in town For Goodness Cakes; is kind, smart, easy going, and has a great sense of humor. The only problem is Alise is partially blind and Riccardo knows that his father and brother will take full advantage of that.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 8655
Read Count: 20454
Published: June 10 2016
Updated: November 03 2016


Title: Chapter 2: SNAKES

You my friend have catpured Alise's visual impairment perfectly. Working with all types of students, I can tell you that you would do my VI specialst proud. To be able to be a functioning member of society and contributing to it by baking goods for her community. Go on with your bad self Alise. I hope Ricky and his brother get something figured out to put those slimedog family members down. I feel bad for Ricky's mom, hopefully he can help her find herself again once the monster and his spawn are taken care of. Great update. 

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: June 14 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 241]
Summary:

The Universe has a funny/morbid way of completely turning your life around.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:Yes
Word count: 92790
Read Count: 32403
Published: December 29 2016
Updated: June 21 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love that this story  is in the metroplex!! Poor Clark.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: January 14 2017

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So many emotions and feelings going in this  chapter.  I think Gabriel's wife did to him  what Dena is doing regarding the Clark situation thatd why he is so guarded. Carolyn cracked me up.  Clark, Dena and Gabriel, i don't know ehat to do with them. On a side note,  Deeo Ellum is so much  fun! Great chapter and story.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: February 04 2017

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