Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ahhhh this is amazing! I'm gonna do a rain dance or something in the hopes that you'll update this soon, because this is one of the best stories I've read on here so far. The way you write your characters is phenomenal. They're all so flawed and honest, so HUMAN. It's what makes your stories soo addicting. I've read all that you've put up and I'm obsessed. Your writing inspires me to work that much harder on my writing and perfecting my craft. Thank you so much!
That being said, I need to vent about this story.
Okay, I have a HUGE soft spot for Chase. I mean, I definitely appreciate that the two of them weren't intimate while he was in high school (for a while I was worried they would cross that boundary), but after graduation I was initially hoping that would work out for them. I was both surprised and pleased when she actually went ahead and gave Jack a chance. I didn't think they would end up together. When I saw how well they for each other though, my heart immediately went out to Chase. How awful would it be to see someone who has become your world, begin a relationship with your (seemingly) insensitive brother? I would die. Okay, no I wouldn't, but still, I hope everything works out for Chase (maybe he'll find his own chocolate shorty @ Harvard?). *fingers crossed* I really hope Jack wasn't responsible for the pics. I was just starting to like him.
Personally, I think it was that blonde girl Ashley. She's been trying to get Chase's attention for some time now, and I think it killed her to see how much in love he was with Lila. I get that's frustrating, but I didn't appreciate the fact that she got all in Lila's face at the beach. She's still a teacher, and you blondie didnt really know what was going on. I would have had to lay her out. Lol.
If the blonde's not responsible, I definitely think the Grandma might be to blame for the creeper photos. Something about the way she was grilling Lila rubbed me the wrong way... I could be wrong, but I've got my eye on her.
This story is so good, please please PLEASE update soon. I'm in love.
Reviewer: CelestialChild Signed
Date: May 05 2014