Penname: guitarlovechild [Contact]

Real name: Roceial

Member Since: July 04 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio: I have a passion to read. I am a good writer, but I don't have the patience to sit down and write a story. A peom maybe but not a story, even though I have a million and one ideas.


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For Love and Football by Sade
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 489]
Summary:

 A Special Thank You to TokenBlackGirl for the AMAZING banner.

 One night in Vegas changes the luck of two strangers.

Grace is a good girl to the bone, though she loves her job as a teacher she wants some excitement and for her twenty-fifth birthday she wants to shed that good girl image. Not be predictable Grace but a sexy wanton vixen,so her friends take her to Las Vegas, where her life is changed forever.

Kevin is an NFL all star and all around player. He is in Vegas because he was told to lay low after sleeping with the wife of one of his team mates, he has to figure out a way to change his image and quick.

 Sometimes what happens in Vegas shouldn't stay in Vegas and in Kevin and Grace's case it wont.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 14996
Read Count: 61703
Published: June 07 2009
Updated: April 27 2013

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Title: Chapter 11: Meet the team.

LOL! Bitches are being through at him left and right.


Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

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Date: June 15 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Meeting Rina

Ooooohhh. Things are about to get nasty.


Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review.

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Date: March 25 2010
Title: Chapter 3: The Date!

OMG I think I'm in love! Why haven't you updated?


Author's Response: lol thanks for the review, Im glad you like it...life had me in a very very tight bind. Back now, expect more chapters and maybe a few more stories.

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Date: August 04 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Grace and Rina...Enchange words.

These people don't know Grace going to have them crying. Or give them a church girl beating.


Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I will try.

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Date: April 11 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Meet the Family

What in the hell, why leave something off like that? Are you mad at the world or something? Come back here and update, and maybe make the chapters longer. Thanks  ^__^



Author's Response: lol =)!

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Date: September 02 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Pregnant?!?

I'm lost whos pregnant?


Author's Response:

The reason why he was in Vegas was told to Grace when they went on their first official date, and that reason was that he cheated with one of his fellow teammates wife. She is the pregnant woman.

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Date: December 19 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Kevin and Grace's time.

I believe the sign of a good chapter is that it end with a climax ^__^


Author's Response: lol, that may be true!

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Date: December 30 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Oh no she didn't...

Why do you got all these bitches trying to get on this man's jock?


Author's Response:

we will have to wait and see the answer to that question, lol thanks for the review.

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Date: January 24 2010
You Give Me Something by ebnyobrien
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Always the odd woman out, Keisha Barrett, for once wanted to be the woman on the arm of the man of every woman's dreams.  Who knew a lunch date with her girlfriends could hold the answer to her dreams.

Ethan Carrington, British international businessman and confirmed bachelor, was tired of the lifestyle he had been living. Expensive cars, trendy night clubs, leggy models/actresses, and gold diggers were the norm until the day her meet her...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 22532
Read Count: 42348
Published: December 02 2009
Updated: September 26 2013

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

You good LOL! I really like the story, I look forward to Monday.

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Date: December 04 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm liking this very much

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Date: December 08 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Date

Well you know you did great with this story. So Have a super New Year and a hooray for babies that are not yours!

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Date: December 27 2009
The Guilty Heart by MorrisonJD
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary: Martha Jones' guilty heart keeps her from moving on with love...Can someone get through to her, or is she destined to be alone.

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Martha Jones
Classification: Crossover, Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Martha/Ten (Doctor Who)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 3419
Read Count: 1504
Published: January 16 2010
Updated: January 22 2010

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Title: Chapter 1: In Which Mickey Smith lets go

Wow! That was a way to start off a story. I liked Mickey too and you go and kill him. But I wonder where in the timeline is this story taking place?

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Date: January 16 2010
Title: Chapter 2: In Which Martha Jones Decides To Stay

The Doctor and Jack, I love them with Martha. If your doing this I might love you forever

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Date: January 22 2010
Retired
Bright Ōsaka Star by puertaobierta
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 373]
Summary:

 

Sara Richards lives in Ōsaka, Japan. She becomes embroiled in the drama and comedy of clashing cultures, traditional philosophies and modern ideas as she is reunited with the past. She struggles to navigate the tempestuous waters where East meets West and a love lost but not forgotten that may never be regained, while keeping her eye on the one point in the sky that can lead her the peace of dry land. Her Bright Ōsaka Star.

 

Fabulous Banner by Music!!!

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 72940
Read Count: 168010
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: June 27 2012

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Title: Chapter 7: Roku (6)

Nice, I don't know if Yuki is really trying to make it work with his, since he seem to always be thinking about Sara. Yeah the parents are coming I can't wait.



Author's Response:

I know right? But what do you think is going through Kaoru's mind? That is what I would like to know.

Thanks!

:)

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Date: May 01 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Hachi (8)

I like Darren Percy, even thought the whole name thing confuse me. I really like Kamir and hope Yuki doesn't do anything stupid. Kaoru is getting her indepence on that is what she doing. I look forward to when the grandparents meet up.

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Date: May 08 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Sichi (7)

Don't give gold coins to cats. You are not a cat and I want to give you all the gold coins for this story. I really like Kamir, sidenote have he paid for any of these little outings yet?



Author's Response:

I think he paid for the first lunch and I'm pretty sure the second, definitely the third. However the Aquarium...everyone is keeping their mouth shut about that one.

:)

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Date: May 06 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Ichi (1)

Do more woman, please! There is so few Asian/Black stories out here.


Author's Response:

So true. I am a whole hearted supporter of Basian love.

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Date: April 09 2011
Title: Chapter 4: San (3)

This is so cleverly written, I'm enjoying myself. I hope you will keep on writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I will continue to plug away, I promise. :)

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Date: April 14 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Yon (4)

Ooooohhhhhhhhh! An Indian man, look at you going international with your men. They both Asian though -__-. I like it, make me love it next time.



Author's Response:

International Love! I love it. Thanks! :)

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Date: April 20 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Go (5)

Finally the showdown. As with the couples I want the unusual story line. I want Kamir/Sara and Yuki/Kaoru. I know not alot of drama right? WRONG! There is more drama then love affair drama. Good job on the chapter and updates, loving it.



Author's Response:

Girl, you got me thinking... Thats all I can say.

Thanks! :)

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Date: April 22 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Kyu (9)

People are thinking that Kamir is there to stay, but Yuki and Kaoru is right. He will be going back to India, but they think Sara needs a man now. Sara don't need a man now she need to get over Yuki properly and Kamir is helping her. I think that Sara and Kamir is having fun and they both know it, I hope I'm right. Kamir is not going to fast, because they are both adults looking for fun and friendship not everlasting love. I enjoyed this chapter a little too much, I hope the comment is not too long.



Author's Response:

Not at all! I like your comments. Thank you. Yes, Kamir and Sara are definitely just kind of floating along. Wonder how long it will last. Sorry for the tardy reply.

Thanks.

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Date: May 16 2011
The Lightning Scar by Reckless Runaway
Rated: Teen or Above
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Summary:

Zora McQueen only wanted one thing... to go to Hogwarts. It wasn't until she got there that she found out she would be in for the adventure of a lifetime. Who knew meeting a messy haired boy with a scar on his head would lead to so much trouble?

 

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 101074
Read Count: 91442
Published: May 28 2011
Updated: February 15 2014

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Title: Chapter 10: I Open at the Close

I like it, but I wonder when is the real fun going to begin? When is going to go to Hogwarts? Remember you have at least one person waiting.

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Date: September 04 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Hello and Goodbye

I like it. And I'm happy that you are still writing it. I know school is a bitch, but keep on writing.

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Date: October 21 2011
Title: Chapter 12: The Unhappy New Year

I wonder are you going to keep writing this story? I really like it and this is the second Happy Potter story I read with a black girl in it. And the first one I read didn't finish either.



Author's Response:

Could you tell me the title of that story? i might have read it....

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Date: May 03 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Sweetling

You took your sweet old time with this one didn't you? I like it and now I know not to give up hope on this story getting updated. Right?



Author's Response:

I don't like to give up on stories. Especially one so close to me as this one. The time in between chapters might be long but there will always be an update of some sort. Whether it is actually a chapter or just a note depends on my life scheduling. I had been nursing this partiuclar chapter for months now. School always comes first for me, so this story had to be put on the back burner. A lot of planning and figuring goes into this story because I want it to be good for you and my other readers. 

Now that I actually have some free time there should be more updates. 

Thank you for sticking around. 

Reckless

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Date: May 11 2012

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