Penname: Lemondrop [Contact]

Real name: TY MINTER

Member Since: June 06 2015

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Retired
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 239]
Summary:

Ethan West has never been one to control his wolf, he let his instincts rule and they never failed him. Until his wolf insisted on marking Mia Kane as his mate. Maybe it wouldn't have been so bad if Mia wasn't a human. Ethan despised humans and taking one as a mate was the last thing he wanted to do.

Mia Kane should be living her best life, her music career took off, she won a Grammy for best new artist and she was selling out arenas all over the world. Life was perfect except for the fact that she tragically lost her family in an accident the night of the awards show. When the whirlwind was over her best friend and manager Elizabeth Jones forces her to take some down time at her parent's bed and breakfast. When Ethan shifts and bites her, her life takes an unexpected turn for the worst.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 28478
Read Count: 67119
Published: January 22 2018
Updated: July 08 2019


Title: Chapter 13: The Return

I want you to know that I love your writing and think you are very talented. I always want to give positive and encouraging feedback. But, I don't think I can read this story anymore.  Ethan is manipulative and controlling, an abuser. And abusers don't turn into lovers, they turn into killers.  I know this is fiction, but I can't do it.  I do wish you the best.



Author's Response:

Hello! Thank you for your kind words and I respect your decision to not continue reading the story. Hopefully the next one I write will be for you! :) 

Reviewer: Lemondrop Signed
Date: July 09 2019

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 47]
Summary:

Nayely Polite and MJ Park have many things in common: dead parents and group homes.

When their stories converge, an indestructible connection tethers these two together in ways they'll never understand. Even when they spend years apart, trying their best to steer clear from one another, Nayely and MJ will soon realize that there's no escaping the hold life and death has on them.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 100841
Read Count: 50785
Published: September 07 2018
Updated: June 08 2021


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really love this story. It is well thought out and written.  My heart bleeds for Nayley and I understand MJ was hurt, but the fact he can't put himself in her shoes for one moment is frustrating.  He should at least listen to what she has to say.  So far I think he is a little self centered, but we all were at that age.  I hope he redeems himself.  I can't wait to the next update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for commenting! I know this is a late reply but believe me, these two have a lot in store and some work to get to!

Reviewer: Lemondrop Signed
Date: September 14 2018

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Hope you enjoy the new chapter!

Reviewer: Lemondrop Signed
Date: October 02 2018

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I love this story! I’m sad that Khalil abandoned Nayely too.  I just MJ is nice to her when he comes to. Can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking around!

Reviewer: Lemondrop Signed
Date: November 03 2018

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am so glad to see this story updated! I check this sight everyday for this story.  I can’t wait till MJ and Nayely meet face to face. I hope she gives him a taste of his own medicine.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying the ride!

Reviewer: Lemondrop Signed
Date: December 04 2018

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

WOW!!! That is all I got. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Lemondrop Signed
Date: December 11 2018

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: Lemondrop Signed
Date: January 21 2019

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I really miss this story.  Please update.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support! I miss writing this story as well and look forward to what's next.

Reviewer: Lemondrop Signed
Date: March 13 2019

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love this story. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Lemondrop Signed
Date: April 06 2019

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Merry Christmas to me! So glad to see an update on this story. I can’t wait for more!

Reviewer: Lemondrop Signed
Date: December 27 2019

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