Penname: Blessed Soul [Contact]

Real name: Gabrielle

Member Since: November 19 2015

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Wife, mother, daughter, sister, granddaughter, niece , cousin and future Civil Engineer. The sky is the. Limit for me now. I love to read and write, i'm thinking about posting some of my work here on the chamber.



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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Truck never expected to get a visit from Wynne, his  estranged wife of two years. Wynne harbors some secrets of her own. Will they let go of the past, live in the present, and hope for the future? "I came back, I came back for you!" Wynne shouted teeth bared eyes wide.  He didn't move, stood like a mountain before her, his eyes cold and hard. "I never asked you to."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2998
Read Count: 729
Published: May 23 2018
Updated: May 23 2018


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I👀 like😀

Author's Response:

Hi Blessed Soul! 

Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28 2018

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

True love never dies.  John McBain and Evangeline Williamson

 

 

https://youtu.be/5SXPMxLDuXw 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Jovan (One Life to Live)
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1910
Read Count: 10583
Published: July 12 2018
Updated: July 13 2018


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

True love 💘 never dies😀 I like this👍😀

Author's Response:

Thnx so much.  My first try at writing a story.  Really appreciate that you took the time to respond.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12 2018

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I👀 guess he thinks he saw👀 a ghost 👻 more please😀

Author's Response:

Wow! Another respond to my first story.  Oh my! Thnx so much.  A ghost indeed, not a ghost but questions still remain. Let's see how things progress.

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Date: July 12 2018

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

They go to couples therapy😀 she makes him grovel some, he slide back in to quickly😕 I👀 love this story😀👏👏👏👏👏 Nice job!

Author's Response:

Thnx for your comments.  Hope that you read and enjoy the final chapter. Hint, hint!

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Date: July 13 2018

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Beautiful😍 very well written👏👏👏👏👏 Thank you!

Author's Response:

Made my day.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 13 2018

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I👀 know this is your 1st story. I👀 hope you have more to share. I👀 love your style of writing💕 Thanks for incorporating me into your story. You have made my day😀

Author's Response:

Glad that you liked the little shout out to you.  My first attempt at writing.  I don't think that readers understand how much the writers appreciate reviews/responses.  Befire when I read stories on this site I tried to leave a review each time if nothing more than "Thnx for the read."  Now I know how much that means to a writer.  Thnx again for reading my story.

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Date: July 13 2018

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Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

They have not seen each other for over 20 years.  What happens now?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Other
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: None
Series: Past, Present and Future - NCIS
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6771
Read Count: 17009
Published: July 15 2018
Updated: July 26 2018


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Nice update👍😀

Author's Response:

Glad that you liked the update.  Treachery at every turn.  Just watched "Equalizer 2" and treachery hit close to home.  Now my story doesn't seem so far-fetched.

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Date: July 20 2018

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I👀 love this story and I👀 want it to continue but my mom is about to give birth any time now. Then we are taking her to Florida for her recovery so I👀 won't be on the chamber. I'll check d4; back every now and then just to see👀 if you posted an update or blessed us with another story. Thank you for this story your previous story and all future stories😀 Until next time keep writing because you are good at it😀👏👏👏👏

Author's Response:

All the best for your mom.  Still haven't decided whether to end it with the proposal or not.  Just glad that Margie and Jethro will be together.  They both deserve some happiness.  Thnx for reading my stories.  Really appreciate that you take the time to respond.

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Date: July 20 2018

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (REVISED)

I👀 like it! I👀 must admit I'm probably not going to watch NCIS or NCIS New Orleans again since Abby and the Black British guy is no longer there and my girl Sonja is gone from New Orleans😢 but I'm ready for Jethro Gibbs Saga😀👏👏👏👏

Author's Response:

Thnx for the comment.  I agree that the departures of Reeves and Abby put a damper on things.  Did like the quirky fill-in forensic scientist though.  And with Vance disappearing in the final episode I don't know.  Had this story rolling around in my head and thought to put it to paper.  Gibbs has never met a woman like Margie.  I haven't disclosed her real name yet but it will come soon.  Nothing too outrageous I just have not decided on what to call her.  A work in progress.  

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Date: July 16 2018

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I👀 love 💘 it! Please keep them coming😀 Whomever"Martha" turns out to be...she's already dangerous😀👏👏👏 in a good way😀 Jethro has met his match. Nice update!

Author's Response:

We wil leave her as "Margie" for the moment.  She has many layers.  Thnx for the comments.

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Date: July 17 2018

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 (REVISED)

Nice!👍

Author's Response:

Thnx.

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Date: July 18 2018

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Robert was working for the enemy😕 She can't turn her back on anyone, who can she trust😕 I👀 hope she survive. It's time for her to get out of the game for good😌 Nice👍😀

Author's Response:

Thnx for your continued support.  Robert's treachery is only the beginning.  We shall see how things progress for Margie and Jethro.

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Date: July 18 2018

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Nice👍 update😀 I'm pulling for Margie.

Author's Response:

Thnx.  I won't delay in resolving the outstanding issues.

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Date: July 19 2018

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I👀 can't wait for the wedding😀 You continued, good for you and me and all your readers😀👋👋👋👋

Author's Response:

Thnx for the review.  Yes I continued.  Had a bit more to say for Margie and Jethro.  The wedding soon to follow.  Working on another story about these two and not certain if I want to do a series or stand alones.  Once again thnx for the review.

Hope that everything went well with your mother.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24 2018

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

SUPERB!!!😀👏👏👏👏

Author's Response:

Thnx.  So glad that you liked it.  It seemed a good place to end it.  Perhaps we will see more of Marge and Jethro. I had a good time writing about them. Oh and thnx again for the recommendation.  I saw it on the chat screen on the home page.

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Date: July 27 2018

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Evangeline survived the gas poisoning and now must find a Life after the Storm.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Jovan (One Life to Live)
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 20985
Read Count: 20493
Published: July 24 2018
Updated: August 21 2018


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

No, work won't be enough for them😀 I👀 can't wait till they see👀 each other again an realize they're living in the same city😀 I👀 wonder will their paths cross working on a case together😀 LOVING IT!👋👋👋👋👋

Author's Response:

Thnx for the comments. Evangeline and John both have some more self-discovery before they can move forward.  I don't know about the "work won't be enough for them".  You know some people make work their life.  Don't worry, I don't plan that for these two.  Stay tuned.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 28 2018

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love it💕

Author's Response:

Thnx.

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Date: July 30 2018

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Dang! John is opening up completely in that letter😢 I hope she gives him another chance🙏 Nice!

Author's Response:

John needed to release all of that toxin in himself to really make a fresh start.  As to Evangeline giving him another chance.  To be continued.

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Date: July 30 2018

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It was time for her to move on. Start fresh somewhere new 😀

Author's Response:

Yes she did need a new start.  Love the chemistry between her and Todd.  He will support her in her endeavors.  Thnx for the comment.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27 2018

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Another great story 😀

Author's Response:

Wow, what encouraging words!  Thnx. For some reason I gravitate back to her last scenes on the show and just want to explore what her life could have been had the writiers allowed her to continue.  She started out as a fierce young woman who seemed to have diminished by the time her character ended.  Evangeline has so much to offer and it's time for her to enjoy life and have what she wants after she gave all of herself to everyone else.

Off my soapbox now but I want to give her 'love and happiness'.  We all need that some time in our lives.

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Date: July 27 2018

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I👀 love how they met again😀 those blind dates were horrible, but they tried though😀 I can't wait to see👀 what happens now😀 Nice update😀

Author's Response:

Thnx for the review.  They have much to resolve.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02 2018

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 29]
Summary:

 

“Good things come to those that wait.” Taylor wasn’t good at waiting, Thomas didn’t believe in good things. Together they travel on a journey only their souls could navigate, together, finding each other…in due time.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9697
Read Count: 2776
Published: July 25 2018
Updated: February 27 2019


Title: Chapter 1: Every Breath You Take

Nice 😀

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27 2018

Title: Chapter 2: You Make Me Feel Good

So they started off as F×ck buddies😀 cool!

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Date: November 06 2018

Title: Chapter 3: Trip

Girl!! Trip was song at my birthday party by my mother... You have great taste in music 🎶 I👀 hope she don't mess things up with Christian, that man is a walking wet dream😀 please kill him off first before she do something with her EX! Nice update😀

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Date: November 06 2018

Title: Chapter 4: Somebody Else

Thomas thought he had Taylor at his beck and call but she said " Hold up wait a minute " not today 😂😂 Christian is understanding but she better not show him that gift from Thomas😕 Nice update 😀

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Date: December 06 2018

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