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ME&U by Elizablu
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 586]
Summary:

 

 

Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 127263
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014

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Title: ME&U

Princess, is up to something and I can wait for Calico to figure it out.  I hope that Princess gets her ass stomped but good.  I love Mal it looks as if his Cocobean has finally given in and it was good.  I loved the flashback of Mary, Calvin and Junior if possible it made me love Calvin even more.  Great character development Elizablu!!  Thanks for another wonderful update.



Author's Response:

Princess is most definitely up to something and its not pretty. CoCo is slowly caving in and hopefully nothing happens to hinder it. Calvin was a good man, he had faults like everybody, but despite it all...he was a good man. Thanks for reading.

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Date: July 14 2012
Title: ME&U

Mary straight molly whopped Cayenne's crazy ass.  I knew that there was going to be a massive misunderstanding and that Mary would treat that ass like it was an infection in the human body and annihilate it.  Linette beat Princess and it was good.  Why is Calico so stupid?  Somebody needs to knock that child upside her head, to knock some sense into her head.  This chapter was crackalacking!!!



Author's Response:

Cayenne is an infection ain't she? Well, Mary sure was the antidote, lol! Thanks for reading.

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Date: August 21 2012
Title: ME&U

I need an update Elizablu, this story is amazing!



Author's Response:

More is coming. Thanks for waiting.

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Date: November 13 2012
Title: ME&U

Thank you, thank you, thank you for this amazing update.  Durbin the punk got his just deserts and I loved it!!  Will you give us a clue if he made it out of the forest or not?  Don't put my Mal in jail, he was protecting his Cocobean!!!  Bring on Francis's demise next, that ho works my last nerve!!

Can I just say that I love the Elliots?  They are some bad mother's shut my mouth!!

Freaking fantastic as usual Elizablu!!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.

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Date: January 27 2013
Title: ME&U

Pocahontas is dead, damn!  That made me so happy.now now it's time for cayenne to die!  bring on part 2@

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Date: February 11 2013
Title: ME&U

Yeah!!! I have missed Mal and Coco.  Please do update soon!  I love Coco she called the man New Dude, absol-fucking-lutely hilarious! I can't to see some dead MF starting with her momma and flowing down!

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Date: June 24 2013
Title: ME&U

Yay, Sienna Gray!! Elizablu you did that damn thang!! Mal is towering hunk of man  because hic CB was in trouble. I hope that she understands how he feels about her now. When is her human incubator going to die? Please make it soon. I love this story!!!

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Date: February 02 2014
Title: ME&U

Gotta love Junior, he gold that reporter about herself while destroying the camera. That is what happens when you harass people who are concerned about loves laying  stretcher being placed in an ambulance! So good!

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Date: July 04 2013
Title: ME&U

Why do the FBI want to talk to Coco?  WHat in the hell has Coco done in her life to gain a rap sheet that long?  I want to see Mal wreck that jail, do it Elizablu!!!

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Date: July 21 2013
In The Eyes of the Beholder by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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Lorilei Riley is a large black girl who was uprooted at age five when her mother marries and relocates to the small mostly white mining town of Appalachia.  She is the object of ridicule and scorn.  She immediately bonds with Micah Hamilton a young classmate who is also an outsider because of a large growth on his face.

Micah gets a chance at a normal life by having a surgery to remove the growth and Lorilei wonders as they both reach adulthood if Micah has remained with her out of friendship and loyalty or if a guy like him, could really come to  love a plus size girl like her.

 

In The Eyes of the Beholder is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Ugly Girls Need Love Too
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84367
Read Count: 80852
Published: September 29 2011
Updated: June 15 2012

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Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Micah has a good head on his shoulders, he is quite mature for his age and I love that about him.  Lei is working my nerves it would serve her right if he did find someone else.  If she truly believes that she and Micah are meant to be then why see other people.  I am glad that they are honest with  one another.  I just want them to be with each other when this story ends.  I want these two to continue to grow but grow in a way that they still compliment one another.  For them to be so young they have already had their love tested.  Please don't let them be torn apart. Brenda you are so awesome!!  You are a phenomenal writer!



Author's Response:

Lei realizes that they have been together since they were five and that they need to expand their horizons.  She doesn't want any regrets yers later.  She's not saying, sleep around, she's saying that both of them need to meet other people and not be worried that the other one may get jealous.  She has made a commitment to Micah and hss promised fidelity.  They are going to be together and he's going to come and see her as much as he can, but she feels that this with strengthen their relationship.

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Date: October 22 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I don't like that Beth heifer and I don't trust her either.!!!  But I am so glad that Micah went to Richmond they needed that time together.  Brenda, I love all of your stories!!! Micah looked really tasty in those pics that you added.  Yummy, Yummy!!!

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Date: December 09 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

That was sexy, Micah wrote is name Lei punany!!  I am so glad that he told that tramp Jessica that he didn't like her and why.  What a simple ho Jessica is and I know that her life will lonely.  If it isn't her life should be.   Thank you for another amazing chapter Brenda!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, Micah has staked his claim.  Jessica just needs to go on somewhere and get a life. 

More to come soon!

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Date: October 20 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Ronald Riley is off his rocker he deserves to go the prison where Bubba could make him his girlfriend.  Lei needs to inform the school in Richmond about her father.  As a matter of fact, she should get an order of protection.  Ronald at wrapped to tight and she will be by herself in Richmond.  That is a bad combination.  I am so glad that Micah at the spot lazered off, and I am also happy that Lei went with him.  They needed that time together!!  This story is amazing!!

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Date: November 05 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Ronald is that lone roach that is seen still lolly gagging across the floor wihen the lights come on.  Sara Lee is a hot mess, I love her.  Candace I would think that you would be less judgemental, with the way you were judged when you married Joe Bob.  I am so glad that Beanie broke Teddy Lee off a piece.  I was feeling bad for the man, Beanie is just plain mean to the man!!

Fabulous!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Beanie was being mean and Candace told her so.  Candace took Tina for the night and encouraged her sister to treat her husband better.  She's the big sister and Beanie does listen to Candace.  More to come soon!

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Date: October 29 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Looks Can Be Deceiving

That was good, Micah is going to grow up fine as hell.  I do hope that some other little ho doesn't try to turn his head.  Me likey, can't to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  More is coming next week.

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Date: September 29 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Miriam is a hoot!!!  Robert is crazy, Joe Bob should have called the sherrif and had Robert arrested.  But it appears that Joe Bob put the fear of God in Robert so maybe he won't be back.  I wonder will any sparks fly between Beanie and Teddy on Thanksgiving?  I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

LOL!!! Beanie and Teddy????  You're beginning to know me.  LOL  Remember though that Ma Miriam is inviting Annie over and will try to play matchmaker.  More tocome soon!

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Date: October 03 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I am so glad that sparks flew between Teddy Lee and Beanie!!!  Why would Annie think think Teddy Lee a grown man would be attracted to her a child?   Miriam is mighty happy about her sons Teddy Lee attraction to  Beanie, I am so excited.  This story is amazingly real and it brightens my day when I see a new update!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, Miriam is happy.  Those two will have to work out some issues though (Teddy and Beanie)  More to come soon!

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Date: October 05 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Kids can so cruel, I am waiting for the *itch Jessica to get knocked and drop out of school.  I don't understand why the teachers have never said to Jessica or her father for the way that she treats the Lorilei and Micah.  Why has Candace never gone to the school to talk with her teachers?  Micah is such a cutie!!!  Beanie and Teddy Lee need to do that damn thang already!!!  This is so good!!!



Author's Response:

Like a lot of kids, Lei doesn't make a big deal about Jessica because she doesn't want her mom coming to school and bringing attention to her.  Lei tries to handle her own business when dealing with Jessica.  At first, she was Micah's protector so she focused on that.  Now that Micah has had his surgery, she no longer needs to be his protector and their roles have changed.  She's now insecure because she feels that he doesn't really need her anymore. 

Beanie and Teddy Lee hotness is coming up!

 

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Date: October 07 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Teddy Lee threw down the gaunlet and made Sabrina put up or shut up.  I loved it, it is heart warming to see to Micah fighting for Lorelei but I just hope that she truly believe that he loves her and only her.  I want her to know that she has her heart and no one elses.  I don't want her to push him away with her consistently doubting his feelings for her.  I love this story!!!

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Date: October 08 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Beanie, you might as well give it up sweetie, you don't stand a chance.  Just let go and let God.  Teddy Lee is the man for you and he wants to be take care of you so let the man.  Teddy Lee gives you some good loving, so enjoy it. 

That little hozebel Jessica hs some nerve it is not for you to understand why Micah loves Lei.  You know that he loves her so leave them alone, he don't want your skinny ass.  Mind you business please!!!  This update was wonderful, as usual!!!



Author's Response:

"hozebel"  LOL!!!!   You're too funny.  Yes, Jessica mind your business.  Me thinks that she's all up in Micahs business cuz she wants some of that.  Not a chance, girl.  More to come soon!

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Date: October 10 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I am so has remained so grounded and has never forgotten where he came from or the people who supported when he was that scarred and terrorized little boy.  I am so disgusted by Mrs. Greenley and I am wondering how Meredith is such a nice and unbigoted teenager?

I love Sammie so now I am starting to get a soft part Ronald Riley.  I am hoping for redemption at gun point.  Also some jail time where he can begin to understand how Candance felt when he would beat her.  I want his ass tagged everyday while in prison.  That would bring a smile to my face.

I am also proud of Lorilei for telling her how she feels.  Ronald doesn't deserve her love or her respect.  Keep your head up Lei, you have all the people that you need in your life,  You don't a sperm donor whom constantly berates you.  Your momma loves you and your papa loves they each think that you a beautiful.

Get gun Lei and make Ronald piss himself.  I would love to read that!!



Author's Response:

LOL you want Lei to get a gun!  That sounds more like Sabrina, pregnant and all.  That's why the sheriff was on standby. 

Ronald has some issues and if he wants his daughter in his life, he is going to have to make some major changes.

 

More to come soon!

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Date: October 13 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Micah is very mature, and knows what he wants.  It's sad but true htat Lorilei doesn't trust inhis love.  It was only a matter of time before he would tire of her doubts.  I hope that it's not too late.  Lord, he shut the door in her face, that was omnimous!!  This just gets better and better with each new chapter.



Author's Response:

Micah is tired.  He knows what he wants, but he wants a woman who is confident and secure.  Lei had better get her act together!  MOre tocome soon.

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Date: October 16 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Brenda you are the awesomest!!!  Micah is making sure that Lorilei knows who she belongs to.  Not that I am condoning teen sex, but Lorilei go head and break that boy off a piece.  I just wish that they wouldn't be separated with her in Richmond and him in New York.  Micah really shouldn't put off school,  He'll still be young enough to model after he graduates.  I so love this story!!



Author's Response:

Well I had to wait until they were eighteen....and they are in love...so it's coming up in the next chapter for sure!

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Date: October 17 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Wow, Ronald is finaly dead!!  NOt that way that I had anticipated his death however, I had been hoping that it would have been at the hands of Joe Bob or maybe the sheriff.  Can't say that I feel sad, but I hope that this doesn't cause Lei to push Micah away.  She is better off, now I didn't really beleive that he was honest about getting help.

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Date: November 26 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I loved this story, Brenda I hate see it end.  However I am choosing to believe that you will give us an sequel with Lei and Micah having some babies.  That would be so awesome!!!

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Date: June 15 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.