Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: October 10 2009

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I just love to read.




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The Devil's Ballad by Quills
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 41]
Summary:

 

 

 

His greatest gift....

 

He sits on the floor blanketed by dust, chipped paint and years of abandonment and waits. He hasn't to wait too long and soon Beethoven's Appassionata fills the air, the quiet and ominous arpeggios of the first movement, full of longing echoes through his very bones.

There is nothing else in this moment but the beauty of the melody cosseting him into a world unlike any he's ever known. The transition is gradual. Colors creep in from the edges of his vision turning his monochrome prison into a realm of diluted colors. The strains of piano chords ascend and descend skimming effortlessly over complex intervals with dexterity.

It is wondrous. Tints of violets, reds and greens wash over the gray coolness of his vision, giving him the ability to see color. Three months now she's been able to do this. Gift Cyvian with the impossible.

 

Will be his ultimate downfall...

In the ongoing war between Bloodletters and Werekins, demon mercenary Cyvian's allegiance is no one but himself. Having struck a deal with the Bloodletter king to keep the demons from his territory in exchange for temporary solace in his city, he does exactly that. But when that contract is broken, threatening the life of the human female he has vowed to protect, nothing and no one will stop him from keeping her safe.

 

(The amazing picture of my hero doesn't belong to me, but from a great artist on Deviantart!)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6650
Read Count: 4448
Published: November 30 2011
Updated: October 19 2012

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So they meet, and Cyvian scared her to death!!  I love it!!!

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Date: January 06 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Quills, I am hooked already!!!  I a a huge fan of paranormal stories, vampires, werewolves, demons doesn't  matter as long as the lead male character is hot!!!!  I can't wait to read more!!

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Date: December 02 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Damn, at least he was honest.  Thank you for another update Quills.  Me likey this story.

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Date: October 19 2012
Somebody To Love Me For Me by black_swan
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 15877
Read Count: 12327
Published: December 04 2011
Updated: August 02 2015

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Title: Chapter 2: Intro

I can't wait to read more!!!  More please!!!

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Date: December 05 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2

Ethan and Janet are perfect for each other, please don't let Ethan marry Anna!!!  Why does Ethan think that he doesn't deserve love and happiness?  Fallon is such a cutie!!!



Author's Response:

I know! Ethan and Janet ARE perfect for each other. Hopefully they realize this before Ethan makes a big mistake and marries Anna. Thanks for reading!

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Date: December 12 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Meet the Cast

I love the cast!!  Denzel, I love him!!

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Date: December 12 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3

First, I have to say that I love the actor that you have casted as Ethan.  He is a tasty morsel!!!  I don't like Anna, first of all you love a man that doesn't love you.  Ethan is scared to love, so what he wants is someone to ease his lonilness and to be a mother to Fallon.  Ethan you are hurting Fallon by marrying a woman that you do not love.  What lesson are you trying to teach her about love, marriage and relationships?  Wake the hell up Ethan!!  I love. love, love this story!!!



Author's Response:

Haha. I'm glad you don't like Anna! I don't like her myself, but yeah....hopefully she'll see that Ethan doesn't love her before her little heart gets broken.

And Matt Bomer IS tasty. hehe

Thanks for reading! <3

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Date: December 12 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5

I am so disgusted that her father is Lisa john for the evening.  My only hope is that she runs into Ethan and she asks for his help.  Because her ahole of father is not going to help.  That sperm donor is nothing but a punk b*tch!!  He momma is evil incarnate.  How can you throw your child out?  She made a mistake a stupid mistake but a mistake none-the-less.  I can't wait for Karma to pay them visit.  That ho Lisa needs to be shot point right between the eyes!!  Magic Mike just needs to be run over by a mac truck!!  Please!!

Don't make us wait as long for the next update!!!

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Date: June 25 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6

Ethan don't marry that ho Anna, all she really eants is your money.  Janet is who you need in your life, het love wouldn't be circumspect. Anna is a gold-digger eho is yrying to tske care of het famiky by using you.  Run, fon't walk away from Anna!  How dod Janet end up in that hotel where Ethan was?  I don't like Ethan's father,  can't stand Anna or her parents. Lisa is a bitch! Fallon is a cutie!!: Wake up Ethan! Dump Anna!!

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Date: August 02 2015
Journey (Book 1 - Devyn's Journey) by kwajeraspen
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, MD and into the life of Devyn McKnight. Jewelry designer and entrepreneur, Devyn McKnight, thought she was secure in the shell she built around her life, made of family, friends and her jewelry business but an unexpected encounter challenges all that she is and all that she believes she wants to be.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91963
Read Count: 104084
Published: December 11 2011
Updated: January 07 2014

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Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

Devyn, why are you having sex with Jason if you aren't going to return his feelings?  I know that you can't be this dense you have to feel that Jason wants more from you?   I don't get her Devyn, she is no better than what her opinion of rich people is.  Great update.  Erin still makes my teeth itch.



Author's Response:

LOL....Don't hate Devyn....she's sscared, she's been through a lot and much is to be revealed; you'll have a better understanding of her soon. 

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Date: October 28 2012
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 30

That was so awesome! ! Devyn went and got her man abd is engaged to be married and a pregnant to boot.  Who will be Chris' s live interest?

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Date: January 07 2014
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25

William is an asshole and I really wanted Jason to knock the snot out of his father.  When are they goung to tell Christopher the truth about that ho Erin? I want Erin's family to lose everything.

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Date: September 01 2013
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29

She does now Jason, William proved his love for his children and then some.   Madeline is cray cray but so not so crazy that she didn't know what she did was wrong.   Please let William pull through! So good and action packed!

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Date: December 08 2013
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12

Devyn is so stupid, if you would have really talked to Jason you would know that he is not the one marrying that ho.   I love that dress!!!

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Date: April 29 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11

It is a shame that it alcohol to make Jason appear more human, but unfortunately it was lost on Devyn.  I have missed this story and I am so glad to see it's return.   When is the truth going to come out about that ho that Christopher is going to be marrying?  Forgive me as I forgot the characters name.  When are they both going to admit their attraction to each other?  I want Christopher to find true love and I want Devyn and Jason to have an HEA!!!

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Date: April 15 2012
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

Erin is such a ho, I really wish that Devyn would tell Jason what she saw.  Why is she so scared?  That doesn't deserved to be married into that family and Devyn can ;put a stop to that farce.  Christopher deserves to marry someone who really sloves him and it ain't Erin!! Great Update!!!

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Date: March 14 2012
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 26

Finaly Christopher knows but at the cost Jason's and his relationship. I hope that Devyn's conversation with her father helps her to overcome some of her issues and gets to apologize to Jason.  I feel so bad for Christopher becasue he feels so alone.  I can't wait for him to confront Erin and ask for his ring back.  I want her whole family to get the payback that they deserve.

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Date: September 29 2013
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27

It is about time that William woke up.  Looking forward to reading how Erin and her evil family get paid back. I hope that it's painful and last a lifetime!  Is that mean?  I hope that Devyn gets the closer that she needs from her father. I loved how happy he was to see Devyn it reminded me of my daddy. Thanks for this update.  Christopher is finding his strength and realized that Jason had done what he had always one and that was protect him. I hope that the next update comes quicker.

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Date: November 05 2013
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22

Erin, you are about to mess with the person forcing Jason to go in for the kill! I can't wait because we know that Devyn isn't strong enough yet to weather the impeding storm. Erin makes mmy teeth itch, I want her whole family to loose whatever they have left. Jasin that yoy are prepare for the hurricane of furry that is Erin because she's heading towards Devyn. Fabulous as always!

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Date: December 21 2012
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13

Finally Jason told Devyn that he is not the one engaged to the ho Erin.  Devyn is going to keep on denying her feelings and continue to push Jason away.  Why is she so afraid to love?  Jason is like a pit bull on pork chop he is not going to let her get way.  Thanks for the update, please don't make us wait as long for the next one.



Author's Response:

Pit bull on a pork chop....lol! Yeah, sorry for such a long delay in updating....I injured my arm and could not type; I tried to force myself to heel sooner but the pain was just unbearable. Next update will be quicker; thank for reading:-)

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Date: June 04 2012
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

Devyn gave into her feelings for Jason and it was good.  She's going to play it cool and casual good luck with that becasue Jason ain't having it.  Devyn is really stupid I wouldn't let a man deter me from my dream.  She dropped out and never went any where else to finish her degree.  How lame is that?  I have lost a some respect for Devyn now.

Great update, more please!!

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Date: September 10 2012
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

Devyn is finally admitting to herself how deep her feelings are for Jason but that heifer Lily will present a problem. How many ways must the man tell you that he isn't interested for you to understand? Why hasn't Chris been told about his cheating fiancee Erin yet? I have missed this story so thanx for the update.

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Date: November 09 2012
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20

When is Christopher going to find out about the trifiling ho that Erin is?  I am so glad that Devyn finally admitted her feelings for Jason.  I really like Christopher so please don't hurt him, maybe one of Devyn's friends can help Chris heal?

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Date: November 25 2012
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

Why did Devyn listen to anything that ho Erin said? Devyn you are twice the woman that Erin will ever hope to be or ever will be. Erin the ho has messed with the wrong girlfriend, Jason is about to get in that ass! Good times are approaching!

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Date: December 10 2012
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 23

First let me say that I am glad that you feeling better! I want Erin and her whole family to go down. I hope that the conversation she just had with *ason help her to withstand the coming storm.  That is confident. In Jason's love to tell him Erin and her evil. Mom confront her. Wonderful!

 

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Date: January 20 2013

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