Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: October 10 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I just love to read.




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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 359]
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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Take Me Please!
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 99741
Read Count: 100902
Published: March 08 2012
Updated: January 31 2013


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

Brenda, you are a goddess!!  Thank for this update.  Charlie has got it bad and Inga is fit to be tied.  Inga let go some, Charlie loves you he gave you the goodies and asked you to marry him.  Charlie is a good egg!!  Jared is a trip, don't you want your momma to be happy?  So good!!

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Date: September 04 2012

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 Feeding the Obsession

Brenda you are the shiznit!!  Charles Peterson you an asshole of the highest order, you tried to sell you children to get you own neck out of a noose.  Now you want to deny the woman that you abandoned the chance to be free.  I want him to be run over by a mack truck.  I am so glad that Fred called the sherriff on his crazy, selfish ass.  Charlie please don't push Inga away with your need to keep her near you.  Charlie boy do you love hard!!

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Date: September 10 2012

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 Desperate Measures

Damn, I was hoping that Charlie would get the chance to beat Charles.  I really wanted Charlie to beat down making him black and blue and breaking his nose.  I am glad that Inga is alright and is eager to get married.  So awesome!!

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Date: November 05 2012

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 Moving Forward

That was sweet, Charles is going to the hoosegau and Charlie and Inga got married.  It would be nice if Charles got shanked in prison, that would really make me happy.  I hate to see this story end but it was a great ending to magnificent story.  Thanks Brenda!!



Author's Response:

Thanks PM.  I just want to complete all my open stories before I begin another.  It has been a challenge!

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Date: February 01 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 21]
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Pretty rich boy Nikki Vera is bored of having everything he wants. When his friends dare him to sleep with Sam Rutherford, suddenly his life starts to become interesting. 

Sam Rutherford is mannish, rude, and violent. It's said that she's a gang member who's spent some time in juvie. Rumors true or not, she's not the type of girl to be messed with. Sam is more likely to break Nikki's jaw than give him the time of day. 

It's going to take all of Nikki's charm and even some help from fate for this to have a happy ending. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 689
Read Count: 3853
Published: March 11 2012
Updated: March 11 2012


Title: Chapter 1: The Bet

I don't know how I feel about this story yet, it has just started and I already hate each character that you've introduced. You have also thrown me off with how you've spelled Nikki's name. The male version is usually spelled Nicky and the female version is how you've spelled it. Since uou have spelled that you really need to make sure to use the correct pronoun, when you talk about Sam make sure you her,and she. I am hoping that by the end od this story that these characters have grown. Will the next chapter be Sam's point of view? I would love to know why she was beating the snot out of that guy with her lunch tray? How will you let us know why she looks like that? Will it through her having nightmares or will she be seeing a therapist? Just curious!

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Date: March 11 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Inspired by Brenda 1257's Take Me Please! challenge



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5313
Read Count: 3619
Published: March 15 2012
Updated: March 19 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

In my humble opinion Sarah is a bitch who has no respect for others.  I hope that she grows as a human being as this story continues.  But I love Sam and his brother Max is a hot mess. Love those two, Max is hilarious!!



Author's Response:

Lolz! I wouldn't say a bitch, but she's definately self involved and a bit naive so hopefully this will be the wake up call she needs. Glad you like the brothers, and thank you for the review tis much appreciated.

 

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Date: March 19 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am already in love with Dr. Sam, more please!!!

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Date: March 15 2012

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[Reviews - 177]
Summary:

 

Marisol Smith left in the wee hours of the morning but her heart and mind won't let her move beyond the time she spent with Grady James Halpern. Part two in Mari and Bear's sorta kinda love story.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Southern Gents
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 9583
Read Count: 18363
Published: March 16 2012
Updated: May 01 2012


Title: Chapter 9: Love Actually

Mari, that is a nice way to tell Bear that he is going to a daddy.   That was funny she threw up on his shoes!!!  Shaw turns out not to be such ass, at least for a moment.  This was marvelous!!!!

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Date: May 01 2012

Title: Chapter 8: Soul Food

Scribe I have truly missed this story!!   Bear has got it bad, Marisol has the cure.  Go get your woman Bear!!!  Next time can we get a longer update?

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Date: April 30 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Gone Baby Gone

YOu are right I really don't Mari or Paul they both make my teeth itch!!!  Mari makes me angry because she would rather be a ho then risk her heart and Paul is just an ass!!!  I do like that he apologized as well as stating that, "I love my brother."  I can't wait to see how these two meet up again!!!

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Date: March 18 2012

Title: Chapter 7: She's Having A Baby

Yes, I knew it!!  Grady boys were potent and she didn't stand a chance!!!  Right now Mari is shell shocked, but do hope that goes back to get her man!!  Grady would make a great daddy!!

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Date: April 04 2012

Title: Chapter 6: The Devil's Advocate

She's preggers, yes!!!!  Shaw is such and should be skinned alive!!  Just saying!!  Love , love, love this update.  I can't wait for her reactioned when she finds out that most definitely she's having Bear's baby.  Oh yeah, that reaction will be the stuff of legend!!  I can't wait!!!

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Date: April 04 2012

Title: Chapter 5: A Family Thing

That was hilarious and I am so happy that bear knew that his brother had something to do with Mari's swift departure.  Love it!!!  Please let them reconnect!!

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Date: March 23 2012

Title: Chapter 4: Music and Lyrics

So Paul realized what a mistake he made, but will he tell Bear what really happened and what he said to Mari to make her leave?  I think not, Paul is nothing but a punk!!!  Shaw was just introduced and I already hate him, but hell I hated when I knew that he left her stranded in Klan Country.  Shaw is an ahole and should be beaten down like the low down dog that his truly is!!!  More please, yeah I know I'm greedy!!

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Date: March 20 2012

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Summary:

 

Nadia of West Mississippi found out she was a princess but her kingdom was in Japan,the crown jewels were stolen,her knights were thugs and the family was only treated like royalty.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: With Love,Demeter
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 6537
Read Count: 2616
Published: March 17 2012
Updated: May 29 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Father

What a way to find out who your real father is, how could her mother lie to like that!!  Why did she cheat on husband?  Great start!!!



Author's Response:

Many questions and answers will be revealed! *holds up hands to the heavens*

Thank you so much for reading. 

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Date: March 18 2012

Title: Chapter 2: His Duty

I absolutely love stories with Asian male and chocolate honey!  More please!!



Author's Response:

AM/BW are my favorite grouping because I'm in love with Asian culture. Mixing a black woman in the situation just makes it more interesting. 

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Date: May 30 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

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There is nothing like the love of a man for a woman, of a child for its parents. But it’s those that are willing to risk everything for this love that survives. Will a prince waiting to inherit the kingdom let himself fall for a peasant or will he marry someone he doesn’t love for the sake of his kingdom? “You can sacrifice and not love. But you cannot love and not sacrifice.” – Kris Vallotton



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9247
Read Count: 8704
Published: March 19 2012
Updated: November 05 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Me likey, please keep going!!



Author's Response: Thank you I'm kind of still debating it but chances are I will

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Date: March 19 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 615]
Summary:

 

When rockstar Adam Brand makes a racist remark during a drunken magazine interview, it becomes an international headline.  Within hours his PR Agent concocts the perfect plan to revive his rapidly sinking career before it’s too late, but will Adam be able to pull it off?

 

**** STEREO has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 922
Read Count: 90707
Published: March 24 2012
Updated: August 30 2014


Title: Chapter 3: "Remember that this isn’t real. It’s just business, Adam.”

Adam has it bad, and he's not ready to admit.  Shaun is really in denial, but at least they will both get something out of this.  I hope that Shaun doesn't get hurt!!!  Great update and it was funny as hell.

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Date: April 28 2012

Title: Chapter 1: "My dick is sort of like a white supremacist."

Adam is an ahole, but a sexy one!!  I love Katie, but Adam is stupid!!  I can't wait to see who they are going to use to make him seem non-racists.  More please!!

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Date: March 24 2012

Title: Chapter 14: 'How to Land a Rockstar in Thirty Days'

What did Shaun expect? Celia is going to go behind her back and talk to Adam, isn't she? I am so glad to see this update.

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Date: March 10 2014

Title: Chapter 2: “I need to know how the hell you manage to make it down any fashion runway alive."

Adam is in denial, he was checking her out when they Celia's office and he's loving her smell now.  He is so gone, he won't know what hit him.  I am not sure how I feel about Shaun's friend Celia, she knows the girl can't walk in heels. Adam is still an ahole I hope that he can redeem himself.

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Date: March 30 2012

Title: Chapter 4: “You actually live in this shithole?”

Mr. Brand your can't help but put your foot in it can you?  This is going to be bad when the truth comes out, I would hate for Sean to loose out on love.  Please tell me that there will be a happy ending?!  Love this story!

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Date: July 01 2012

Title: Chapter 5: Rule #1: When In Doubt, Tell him “No”

This won't end well,  Shaun is developing feelings for Adam and he won't react well to being used to jump start her career.  Thanks for updating!!

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Date: November 29 2012

Title: Chapter 6: Rule #2: No Booty

Damn, what is Veronica doing back in the picture?  She should some where snorting coke and throwing up good to maintain her skeletal frame.  Adan and Shaun are so cute together.  Please don't let Adam fall for the bananna in the tail pipe when he talks to Veronica.  Great update, but please don't make us wait as long for the next one.

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Date: December 29 2012

Title: Chapter 13: Rule #10: No More Games

Damn, Celia sent that article in for her.  Why does she hate Adam?  If I didn't know better I would think that she had feelings for Adam and he shot her down.  Adam's father is an asshole, how could he sleep with his sons girlfriend and feel no guilt?  That ho Veronica had the audacity to cry like Adam hurt her feeling when he told the truth her and his sperm donor.  Shaun Adam is going to hate you and there is not way around that.  You did use to keep your job, that is wrong no matter how you slice it.  I don't see HEA for this story!  Your muse may surprise me.

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Date: September 27 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.