okay were is the rest
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed
[Report This]Date: 30/06/11 10:04 am
I like the start so far, I have a feeling that this story is going to be a wild ride.
Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 14/06/10 05:32 am
I guess my question is, why do Donaven and her mother hate each other so much? And if her brother disliked her so much, why would he invite her on tour with him? I'm hoping its because its been six years, and maybe he's had some time to think and realize thats his only sister. Also, maybe he's grown up and matured some. Maybe Donaven has also.
This looks interesting.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 14/06/10 02:30 am
Excellent start. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: 13/06/10 09:01 pm
definitely off to a good start, can't wait to see more.
Reviewer: acorn Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/06/10 10:19 am
Interesting start. Can't wait to see where this story goes.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 13/06/10 07:52 am
I like the start of the story. I like the main character and her mother sounds crazy. So she is going to be hanging with her brother. I can't wait to read about their reunion and the tour. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 13/06/10 03:50 am
There isn't much love in this family. I can't wait to read more about them.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 13/06/10 03:09 am
I am liking how this story is starting. Who is the asian hottie? I am in love and lust!!! Of course I do love Columbus Short, boy does is name fit him. I am looking forward to the first chapter. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 13/06/10 02:31 am