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Title: Chapter 15.1

i dont agree with caesar because if he knows any thing about bree is that she dont'  like people treating her like she some prize and that just not going to give even kind heart C man a change so he better make it up to her big time. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Caesar doesn't know Bree's ways yet, but he's about to learn them quick and in a hurry. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/11/10 01:46 am

Title: Chapter 14.2

ok i like C man but i dont like any man beating on a woman to see who going to make her his lady that is just rude and childesh on so many levels. i have a feeling that she going to find out about this and not going to like it one bit. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

You and these 'feelings'. Too funny.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/11/10 01:43 am

Title: Chapter 14.1

please don't let caesar go to jail to hit ricky for what he said even thu i love to see that. first and formost bree  is grown woman and she dont' belong to any one yet and ricky and caesar need to know that but i think her and c man need to be together. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

C and B will eventually end up together. This is a HEA romance after all. However, they are gonna go thru some rough spots before that happens.

Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/11/10 01:40 am

Title: Chapter 15.1

Caesar shouldn't have called Ricky. That was a wack move in my opinion



Author's Response:

I agree that it was a wack move. Now they both gotta get their faces cracked. lol.

Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/10 01:40 am

Title: Chapter 14.2

Blaine makes my stomach churn. What Victoria sees in him, boggles the mind. I wonder how they ever hook-up? Was he some-type of male gigolo?

Author's Response:

What Vickie sees in Blaine will be revealed later in the story. Hopefully that will cause you to understand her a lot better.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/10 02:29 pm

Title: Chapter 14.2

Is Ricky retarded?  She don't want you!!!  Excellent updates.

Author's Response:

LOLOLOL!!! Ricky might be a little slow. Loving the energy you're bringing to the story.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/11/10 05:19 am

Title: Chapter 14.2

Love the updates!  Not sure what Bree will think if and when she finds out they were betting on her.

Author's Response:

You'll see Bree's reaction very soon. It ain't gonna be pretty.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/10 04:38 am

Title: Chapter 14.2

ewww blaine makes me want to throw up..Awesome post love this story

Author's Response:

Yeah, he gives me that throw-up feeling in the back of my throat too. Hang on, Izzylove. It/Blaine gets worse.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: IzzyLove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/10 02:48 am

Title: Chapter 13.2

Why is Ricky so competitive with Caesar?

Author's Response:

One word - jealousy.

Thanks for the comment!

 

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/11/10 06:25 pm

Title: Chapter 13.2

Subrina, wants her some caesar!!  i want her to have some.  Bring on the hot but-naked sex!!

Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!

Thanks for the laugh, pmgayles!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/11/10 03:17 am

Title: Chapter 13.2

Great update!! I have a feeling Subrina isnt going to be able to resist Ceasar for very long.

Author's Response:

She's gonna definitely try. Can't say how successul she's gonna be though. tee-hee.

Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/11/10 02:22 am

Title: Chapter 13.2

wonder where she going heading too ? i hope C follows her they make a cute couple and i think they can be soul mates. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

I agree that they are soul-mates. They just don't know it yet. But they will.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/11/10 01:56 am

Title: Chapter 13.1

she doing her job very well getting some info from the girls and starting to gain little trust in them. i think some of those girls know what happen to her best friend and not saying anything. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

I think you're right about some of those girls. Won't say which ones though. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/11/10 01:52 am

Title: Chapter 12.3

Looked for your update to be posted on Friday. I know how real life sometime will over ride our plans. Hope you had a good weekend. Looking forward to the next update. Love the story by the way. Surbrina is my sheero. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.



Author's Response:

I had a BUSY weekend. But it's all good. Things are starting to even out now though. Subrina is my Shero too. lol

Thanks for leaving so many comments!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 02:17 pm

Title: Chapter 12.3

Great update!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/10/10 04:30 am

Title: Chapter 12.3

Loving this story. Bree is fabulous.  Cesar is a gonner.



Author's Response:

It thrills me to know that you're enjoying the story so much. Hopefully I can keep up my momentum and keep the enjoyment factor going.

Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment!

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 06:19 pm

Title: Chapter 12.3

That kiss was hotness!! Showed Topaz not to mess with her. After laying that kiss on Caesar, Subrina better watch out he is going to be after her. Look forward to the chase.

Author's Response:

You're so right about Caesar coming after Subrina. It's on now.

Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 03:26 pm

Title: Chapter 12.3

Go Head Suprina put it on him!!!  That is that hobag skeezer gets for stalking and being despectful to Suprina.  Great updates you are spoiling us with all of these updates in one day.

Author's Response:

I like spoiling readers. You guys spoil me with your comments, so it's a win/win situation all around. :)

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 06:31 am

Title: Chapter 12.3

well dam lol that was one heck of a kiss lol but glad she put that skinny hefa in her place and i do hope that caesar goes after subrina too. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

That kiss pretty much seal their fates whether C & B know it or not.

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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 05:46 am

Title: Chapter 12.3

Get some rest.

That last update was the BOMB!!!!!

Hope your day is better on Thursday that it was today be well



Author's Response:

Thanks for the encouragement, Anon. U rock!

P.S. Yes, my Thursday got better. Hallelujah!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 04:33 am

Title: Chapter 12.3

Go Bree Go! I am loving the fire between her and Caesar.  I can't wait to see what happens between them.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying yourself so much, Paula. Stay tuned. There is more drama to comes. Lots more.

Reviewer: Paula Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 04:24 am

Title: Chapter 12.2

cheating who this chick topaz and why she said he was cheating? i first thought that caesar was single? love how he caught her so sweet and very sexy. mmmmm same taste in ceral intersting too lol. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Topaz ain't got all her marbles, so you have to excuse her. She considered C a cheater because she still thought they were together, despite the fact that he told her he didn't want her no more. But that's how it is with some folks. You might have broken up with them, but they haven't broken up with you yet. lol

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 04:04 am

Title: Chapter 12.2

Ohhh snap all hell is about to break loose!!  I loved him running down the aisle to catch Subrina before she fell!  :)

Sorry to hear you had such a rough day!  Writing is deifnitely a way to escape the madness!!



Author's Response:

Ohhh snap indeed! lol. I'm glad you liked that scene so much.

Thanks for being so understanding and for leaving a comment.

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 03:32 am

Title: Chapter 12.2

WOW!!!!!!!!!

I was hoping you would post an update today.. Thank you

This is a really good read. Thank once again for taking time out of your everyday life to write this story.

I know that I am just one of you many fans. I will just have to learn to have more patience.

You really are gifted when come to writing. If every you decide to make it a side job, please let your loyal fans on the site know. I would most certainly purchase your books.

Subrina has so much style, class and grace. She is hard working very independent. Yet has more strength that her family will never see. Except for her grand mother, she knows what a blessing Subrina is. Topaz seems to be sorry to say but a chicken head. Do not let our, yes our starlet below herself and come down to Topaz’s level in the grocery store.

Caesar does seem to different from slime bucket Rickey. At first I will admit I was a little bothered by him being attracted to Subrina. Even more so by her attraction to him. As I take a closer look at the story he may just come in handy. No pun intended, he is a handy man.

If there was ever any trouble Caesar would more than likely be able to help Subrina before her fellow officer were to arrive. As I reread the stories from beginning to end, LOL. I love how you introduce each and every one of them.

Thank you for giving us (your fans) this wonderful story to read.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your patience and understanding, Anon. It's very much appreciated. That chicken head comment cracked me up. lol

Thanks so much for such detailed feedback. It really makes my day!

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Date: 28/10/10 03:19 am

Title: Chapter 12.1

Thanks for a great update.  Isn't she concerned that they may read her emails? 

Author's Response:

She's using her special Blackberry for that, Divsionred. That device stays locked and hidden away.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 02:40 am

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