Such a good story! I loved Brianna and Seth's journey...good work!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: 04/06/15 04:07 am
Ahhhh...Sethie is faling...Bree stood her ground and got her man to give up other women to just be hers...such a good book...I like how they got to this point
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: 04/06/15 12:05 am
Ahhhh...Sethie is faling...Bree stood her ground and got her man to give up other women to just be hers...such a good book...I like how they got to this point
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: 04/06/15 12:05 am
I so don't like man-whores like Seth so I still hope in trying to get Bree, Seth finds himself wanting her only...we'll see!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: 03/06/15 11:50 pm
I so hope Bree will bring Seth down a few notches. She needs to hold tight to the goods that he is so sure he'll easily get.
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Date: 03/06/15 11:24 pm
Go Bree Bree...Seth's not used to being dismissed...he's met his match!
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Date: 03/06/15 11:00 pm
This fucking rocked!!! Amazing! You wrote the shit out of Seth's character. It was fantastic!
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed




Date: 03/06/15 05:03 am
Great story! Really enjoyed reading it!
Reviewer: shadow Signed




Date: 08/07/14 04:19 am
This was a really good story. There were a few things in this story that did not roller from the first story. Davia's ring in the first story was 3.5 carats and in this story it was only 2.5 carats. Loved, Loved, Loved Mama Pat !
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Date: 18/02/14 06:42 am
Lol I love Seth! So...just out of curiosity, do black women love their men to go down on them but they don't give head? Cause that's what i gathered from both, Davia's and Bree's, stories lol. Btw, how come the white guys talk like they're black?!?
Funny stories though. Finished reading Davia's yesterday and of course had to continue with Bree's.
Reviewer: Mariposa-12 Signed [Report This]Date: 26/10/13 02:14 am
Well written and I loved this story. Made me laugh out loud more than once and I really wanted the story to keep going. Glad Brianna was able to meet Conrad (does he have his own story?) as she continued with life A.S. (After Seth). Thank you for sharing with us.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: 27/03/13 07:49 am
You write GREAT characters! They are so full of life and personality!
Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed




Date: 02/09/12 06:06 pm
Awwwwww I love this story! Thank you for writing it :)
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Date: 03/01/12 09:29 am
This is a KICKASSSSSS read!!!!!
Thank you for posting it. Hope we get an update in the lives of Seth and Brianna.
Question: Are these people real and is it you? Or Are they imagined cause if they are in fact real you make them seem as though its real and it is you your writing about.
a new fan,
Kim
Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous




Date: 24/12/11 12:52 am
Really good story!! I just LOVED it! ;)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous




Date: 01/01/11 03:49 pm
I just love this story.
Great work.
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed




Date: 20/10/10 05:35 pm
Could you please put up charater pics?? For visual effect, it would really be appreciated!!!
Reviewer: TinyTim Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/10 03:59 am
Ok waited to finish the rest before I commented. This story really had it all and put you on an emotional roller coaster and I was really happy to take this ride! This is real talented writing here!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Anonymous




Date: 07/05/10 07:39 am
You know what I'm not a vindictive person but; Take that Seth you bitch ass! Go Brianna!!!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Anonymous




Date: 07/05/10 05:18 am
I haven't commented before cause it was all good. But oh no that son of a bitch didn't!!!!!!!!!! Girl you have made me so mad I could spit nails and s**t!!!!!!!!!! He is going to have his work cut out for him and he is going to have to beg for months, lose his hair, his job every f**k to make this right!!!!!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Anonymous




Date: 07/05/10 04:45 am
I like this girl keep the panties up a little longer. Please let her forever cure him of his whorish ways and anoint him with the honey of love. Or something like that. Wait on second thought let her get the older brother and one of her friends can cure the whore!
Reviewer: June Anonymous




Date: 21/04/10 04:12 am
Hi,
This story was really good! Thanks for the story!
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Date: 22/12/09 09:08 pm
Hi,
This story was really good! Thanks for the story!
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Date: 22/12/09 09:08 pm
I've read all of your stories, but this one touched me the most. It made me happy, sad, angry, understanding and forgiving. I think Seth and Brianna are the two characters in your stories, that grew the most and learned alot. They earned their happy ending. Good story!
Reviewer: Lovelybears Signed [Report This]Date: 17/11/09 01:43 pm
I hope they do not get back together. Unfortunately I know they will. It made no sense for him to step out on her, after chasing her telling everyone he was commited to her and her only. He doens't want to get married ever and he knows she does then he should have ended the relationship with her and moved on back to his man hoish ways.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed




Date: 05/11/09 10:15 pm