This is great, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: tostsi Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/01/15 04:08 am
Will there be an update soon? I realize that this has not been updated in over two years but I like what I read so far and would love to read the rest.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed




Date: 01/11/12 07:57 pm
Where is the rest of the story. Who is the crazy person Michael was talking about? Does Gabriel work for this company? Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed




Date: 18/07/12 04:22 am
I haven't read the other story yet but I guess this was Gabriel. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed




Date: 18/07/12 04:13 am
I like her friend Mike. How lucky is she that another friend has bitten her a job. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed




Date: 18/07/12 04:08 am
Great update. Glad that Lane got from underneath her crazy parents. To bad her brother is still stuck there. She gave her brother a really cool gift. I was also happy that Lane us a successful writer. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed




Date: 18/07/12 03:59 am
How can a parent treat her child that way? Just sinful parenting. I really hope her father isn't as crazy as his wife. The best thing Lane's mother ever did for her was take her to the psychiatrist. She seems to be very kind and a cheer leader for Lane. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed




Date: 18/07/12 03:49 am
Poor Lane her mother is just mean. So for the guy at his brother's wedding he seems lost but determined not get married. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed




Date: 18/07/12 03:42 am
Good cast. Thanks
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Date: 18/07/12 03:16 am
Are you going to update again?
Reviewer: anne Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/12/11 09:57 am
There is nothing wrong with a fine man coming to the rescue of a sista in distress! Yes for a fine man!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/10/11 03:25 am
I can understand your mother wanting you to suceed, but to call you a loser, I can never forgive someone for that! I am glad this is only a story....even though I know someone in the world has actually been treated like this by a parent! I think it is called mental abuse!But I am glad she has a friend in the Doctor and she is going to help her.
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Date: 15/10/11 01:52 am
Ok, the start is kind of strange, but I guess I can work with this....I am giving you the benefit of the doubt.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed



Date: 15/10/11 01:35 am
I really love this story! When will you update? And who is the blue-eyed hottie? ;)
Reviewer: fruit_candy89 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/02/11 05:21 am
Lane's parents are worthless!!! I am pulling for Michael, she should give him a chance.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/12/10 04:49 pm
Loved it. Hope to see where this story goes....hmmm, is she gonna end up with ole blue eyes or Michael???? What's the deal with ole blue eyes anyway???
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Date: 04/05/10 01:41 am
Thanks 4 updating! Really love this character :)
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Date: 30/04/10 10:39 pm
Yes I have missed this story.
Lane do what you have to do.
Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]Date: 30/04/10 06:38 am
I am loving this story. Who was the hottie?
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/02/10 04:28 am
I really miss this story. Please update
Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]Date: 15/01/10 01:30 am
I'm really liking this story.
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Date: 20/07/09 03:35 am
Wow, I would cut my mother out of my life if she said that to or about me. Looks like the doctor and her brother may be her cheering section.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed




Date: 20/07/09 02:37 am
Thanks for the update. They meet at last.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed




Date: 11/07/09 10:21 pm
Thanks for a great update. SO is he the guy from the earlier post? I mean her friend Mikey? Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed




Date: 11/07/09 10:13 pm