I agree, short but sweet. Loved the update.

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He's going to break down those walls. Nice update!!

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Thanks....

This was good. It's nice to see him slowing and down. As a result, she's starting to relax more around him. Of course, now she can't ignore the effect that he's having on her.

I'm just wondering how this meeting with Donovan Williams is going to affect them.

Love the story. Can't wait for the next update.

Just found this story....

WOW!!!! For a first time this really has me sucked in...

He really does have his work cut out for him...

I can see how he let some stranger talk him into not marrying her... He's in his early 20s and he is about to start living his life long dream... Not saying its right...

HELL NO!!!

Its not right and he is going to have to go thru hell and high water to make it right... But the offer of all that money, endorsements, etc etc... How many young guys, no matter how in love they are, do you know are going to say to hell with what a professional athlete's agent says and follow their own heart???

Not many have that maturity... All they know is that this is it and they don't want to screw it up... Stupid way to think but just think about how many times this actually has happened...

Probably more than we know...

I hope she doesn't make it easy for him to come back... I hope he really has to work hard and prove that he loves her no matter what... She deserves at least that much and so much more...

GREAT STORY!!! Can't wait for the next update...

Loving this story already.I see that Taylor is going to be a tough nut to crack. Matt has a lot of work to do. Good luck Matt.

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He about to go all out in winning her back. The apology had better be sincere. Even if it is she still needs to keep him at a distance for a little while longer after all it took him eight years to come back and make things right!!

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Awww how cute they are. Yep, Matthew was an idiot for giving up Taylor. Most men are...

I just found this story. Wow! It's wonderful!!The reviews are on point for the most part.

I also agree that Matt came at that all wrong. I also agree that I really don't like how their friends seem to be pushing Matt along like its all ok. Look at what he did, and look at why he did it. He let some virtual stranger to Taylor come in and talk him into dumping her because she was black. To me that speaks to his character. That's who she is and it's nothing to be ashamed of, so then the question is, was he? Career or not, if he really loved her, even the suggestion that he should get rid of her on those grounds should have been a personal afront to HIM. That's tantamount to saying she wasn't good enough because sge was black. Yet he did it, without question I might add. Which also blatantly says he cared more about his career than her anyway.

If he could do that to her after knowing and sharing all that they had the majority of his life, then yeah, Taylor needs to take her time and evaluate him in a completely different way. Personally, I think he has some serious stuff to explain. When he tells her thats how she's going to take it, and how she should take it. Honestly, how can you take it any other way. There's no way to clean that up because that's exactly how his manager meant it.

Good story!

Well, at least he's learning...I'm glad he eased up on her...I do believe that he loves her...but the problem is he's going to have a hard time making her believe that he does and ever did...she's still harboring so much anger and pain from his rejection...it won't be easy to convince her to believe and trust in him again...he had to find out the hard way that allowing other's opinions to rule your life will only leave you unhappy and alone in the end...he has a steep hill to climb...I hope he's up to the task...

I'm sorry I didn't see this story earlier...but I'm so glad I found it...I can't wait to see what happens next...this promises to be very interesting...

Looking forward to the next update soon...

Ooooh what a sweet update. He finally told her sorry. I'm glad he decided to slow his roll. She needs time to get use to him again.  He did her wrong but she needs to stop being so high strung and calm down. It seems those therapy sessions have not helped her . They have to work together so she needs to try to deal with him professionally and stop acting childish.

Author's Response: Yet again, I'm going to take your advice to heart.  It's time for her to get it together.... Thanks.  Hopefully I'll be able to update........

I really like this story...wonder why Matt called the engagement off...sounds like Taylor is far from over him...the man put her in therapy for goodness sake...this was a fine start...

Off to read the next chapter...