nice update, thanks!

Nikki need to stop playing and deal with that boy. Forget Sunshine she will forgive, but that boy is getting out of line.You got me all excited when I read this story, shame on you.

You keep me on edge with these cliffhangers!! Nikolai is losing patience with Darla and Jacob.  Sunshine is playing a dangerous game with Sergei's life.

Please, please update soon!!

oooohhh...

I absolutely love this story.

And this Post is my favorite by far but I'm Biased as this Part took place in Antigua my wonderful home town.

Now Sergei I love him but he is really irking nerves. Darla she is up ti no good now. And I feel Sorry for Anatoly because he might find him self at odds with Nikki trying to save his brother.

Nikki and Sunny i love these two together.

Can you spell T-R-O-U-B-L-E???  ::)))

Can't wait until the next chapter

This isn't one of my favorite chapters only because there wasn't much of Sunshine in it and Darla.. Ugh. She should just cut her loses and be grateful that he left her with something. I wonder what will happen with Sergei. He seems so determined to win her affections and Niko seems determined to keep them. Whatever the case I hope he is smart in his pursuit since we know how dangerous his boss can be. Jacob .. Makes me sick. Its a shame that it took this much for him to fix his problem. I know most addicts have to hit rock bottom once or twice before they can help themselves, but he's had too many. Any who, I should say that I'm an addict also.. Addicted to this story! LOL I check back like everyday for an update. Pitiful I know LOL

There is something about Sergei That isn't right. I used to think He had a crush on Sunshine but now I believe He is the one truly obsessed with her. I wonder what will happen when she tells him, that they are friends and nothing else. He could prove to be more a danger to her than Darla.  And even though Nikki is a dangerous man he does love Sunshine perhaps he see that danger in Sergei also. 

Sergei is starting to get on my nerves.  He just won't listen. Nikolia stood in his face and said because of his friends he wouldn't beat him to death.  He has made up his mind that he will do what he wants when it comes to Sunshine.  I used to feel sorry for him, but now I feel like he is diliberately trying to make Sunshine depend on and have feelings for him.  I wish she would talk to Nikolia about her going to those meeting and her feelings regarding her fathere's addictions.     Nikolia is a dangerous man, but he has shown in so many ways that he loves and cares for Sunshine.  Sergei should just respect that and back up.  I love Sunshine, but I can't figure out why she doesn't see that Sergei feels more than friendship for her.  I am glad that Sergei thought enough to let Nikolai know that Darla is around Jacob.  He knows that he has to look out for her.

Nikki is working a nurve!  Always asking her is she’s his.  Well duh, you bought her didn’t you, you asshole!  What else is she supposed to say?  For a moment there, I was tolerating [if you will] Nikolai’s sad story which made him less of a monster and it was also easier to accept her fate b/c he wasn’t abusive and yes I’ll admit that I believe he loves her but with this last chapter, I think this ‘agreement’ is taking its toll on Sunshine.  The light is slowly dimming from her persona. Her captor (who swore he wouldn’t break her) has enslaved her for sex and the man that gave her life withholds the key to her freedom.  How messed up is that?  She’s barely a young adult. She should be having fun, going to campus parties, chilling with friends or going on real dates with her boyfriend instead of catering to the lustful whims of a gangster. Urgh. Punk. Lol

Sergei (shakes head), what are you doing man…touching her leg?! Aĭ yi yi ! I really like Sergei though; he’s sweet and genuinely cares for his friend. How can he free himself and Sunny with a possessive boss riding his back? Nikolai’s obsession may cost people their lives…maybe even his own.

Darla is a bitch, probably a dead one by now.  I loved it when Herschell called her on her shit.

With all that said, I must commend your talent with this dark fic.  The dialect of Nikolai, Sergei, etc is believably of Russian descent.  You’re doing an excellent job with the characters especially Sunshine; she’s my favorite.  Her strength, intelligence, humble nature, and love for her family is awesomely portrayed here. As for the Dark One or Beast, you’re doing a fabulous job with him as well.  Loved the scene with Nikolai voicing his threat to Sergei…that was straight up gangsta.

Can’t wait to see how this all plays out.

Great job!

This chapter gave your trouble. Great build up to the sure fast surprises in the story to come.

Nicky just gets scarrier and scarrier O__O; good god!

Its bad of me to anticipate what he does to that Darla X-D

Sergi is definitely writing a check his ass can't cash. Maybe someone should point out to Sunny that Sergi thinks of her as more than a friend and could get himself hurt if he things don't change.