Jacob and Darla... not a good combination.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

this was a great update. thank you very much

Awesome chapters! Thanks for the quick updates!

Dad hasn't changed any. He stops the drinking but not the gambling. He had to know Nikolai wasn't going to just give in theat easy. Nikolai dosn't just care for Sunny I think he is in love with her. Sergei is too close to Sunny right now for me, someone is bound to get in trouble or hurt from this. Great update!!

Another great chapter!  Pops tries to pay off his debt with Nikki's own money!

They are so hot together!

Awww Sergei is sooo adorable...like i always say he just make sme feel tingly inside...which may or may not be because you casted the very sexy sean faris for his character and i love him hahahaha. i feel so bad for jacob! i hope someone knocks of Nikolai!!!!!!!

this is a wonderful story! my only "feedback" - post more chapters at a time!! I love where you are going with this story - keep up the good work.

Great update!!! So Pops is at the bar were Darla works!! Wonder what is going to happen there. Awesome story look forward to more.

Paw

LIke Whoa!

Why is his dumbass waiting for Herschell in a bar of all places...Herschell has the true addiction to alcohol so he will probably not go into the bar and now he has met Darla just Darla.  This man seems to never make wise decisions.

More and more I am liking Nikolai...he let her go to the party but she had to be escorted by Sergei which he does not understand that he is allowing them to get closer and closer cause Sunny does not take no for an anser when it comes to having him do stuff...and Sergei may as well hang it up on the point of her not touching him she does not do it on purpose to get him in trouble but because she is just a touchie feelie kind of person...and she does not know that Nikolai does not allow touching.

This was a great update like always.  Thanks

Whoa...Nikolai...not Nikki...was downright scary in this update...I believe he truly does love Sunny...which may or may not be a good thing for her...his type of love involves possession...obsession...manipulation...blind jealousy...and yes rage...it is always simmering right there underneath the surface...he will do anything he has to do to keep her with him...for always...I don't believe for a minute he has any intention whatsoever to ever release her...deal or no deal...he says he trusts her...but he cannot trust...not even his beloved...in his twisted way...he believes he is protecting her...when in reality the one she really needs protection from is him...his is a possessive love...life has taught him to hold on tight no matter what to what belongs to you...and it may be his own undoing...he tries to shield her from the dark side of his nature...but the longer she spends time around him...she is seeing evidence of dark Nik...he has to learn that Sunshine is not his to possess...she is her own person...he has no idea what healthy love looks like...and if he keeps it up...he's going to suffocate her...that's why he seized the opportunity to prey upon Pops...Nikolai is a studier of human nature...it's like he's omnificent...he sees everything...he knows Jacob's greatest vice is his gambling addiction...so he uses it to his advantage to hold onto Sunny...

And Sergei better be very careful...like I said...Nik sees everything...he will not stand for Sergei pushing up on his 'woman'...I fear for him more than I do for Sunny...she's a beautiful bird trapped in a gilded cage...Nikolai's prisoner of love...I love how she reminded Nikolai that she's essentially still a child...who should be having fun and looking forward to the rest of her life like any normal teenager should be doing...

Great casting of Herschel, BTW, I love Steve Buscemi...

Uh-oh, I smell trouble...Darla...just Darla...and Pops...interesting twist...

Great update as always...excellent work...and what a e-page turner...

Ok, so I don't hate the dad anymore he is trying.  Please keep writing.  Love this sotry