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Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

Yayyy her father is getting help!!!! you know what would be sooo baller is if Sergei was some awesome like undercover agent and saves Sunshine from Nikolai..hahha i have no idea why i hate Nikolai so much but he grosses me out! Anywho nice update! :)

Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 11:12 pm

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

Nikki is definitely under the Sunny spell but also appears that Sergei is too!!

I don't know what I think yet. I understand Sunshine can help change Nikki but I want her to be young and have fun and enjoy her life..not be responsible for transforming this criminal.

Yes he seems to be softening but if Pops gets help and stops gambling will he reslly let her go..I am not sure he will..especially as hooked on her as he is becoming.

I really like the way he is treating her with care and tenderness but ugly Niki is right at the surface threatning to come out at any minute and when that happens...what happens with Sunny. I think she is already kinda of taken aback from all he represents now!

I love this story sweetie..keep doing that thing and I am praying for snow!! lol

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 10:39 pm

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

I'm glad her father is getting help. Let's just hope he  an actually do it. :(

Sergei is getting attached to Sunshine and I don't know what to think about that. Hopefully it's in more of a big brother/little sister type of way because I like him.

But I know Nikolai wouldn't hesitate to eliminate anyone that he feels is a threat to him, especially when it comes to Sunshine. 

Thanks for the update. ;)

Reviewer: Giselle Simone Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 05:51 pm

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

Great chapter.  It was about time that jackass did what was best for his kids.  Sunshine will be very happy to know that her father is going to a meeting.  I am enjoying Sunshine and Nik. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Reeshemah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 05:19 pm

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

Great update! Please keep it coming. Love that Pops is trying to get his act together. Poor Sergei is clearly in love with Sunshine. If Niko sees that picture he has, he'll go berserk.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 04:43 pm

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

oh good, some effort on pops part.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 04:23 pm

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

Growth! I loves it.  Wondeful update, wonderful wonderful!

Reviewer: bana05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 04:12 pm

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

I'm glad that dad decided to go for help. Sergei worries me, he is obsessing over her it seems. Nikolai will have a fit if he sees that picture he keeps carrying around. I like Nikolai and Sunshine, granted it's a horrible deal but he cares for her.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 03:13 pm

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

I so happy to see the father is getting help!!  Nikkolai and Sunshine are very good together.  Now I hope their relationship grows into something substantial.  Awesome updates

Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 03:09 pm

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

It's about time that Jake did something for himself. Looks like tough love may work for him.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 01:53 pm

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

I was good to see that pop attend a meeting,  Thanks for the update. 

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 01:24 pm

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

Yet another beautifuly done chapter, and her father is trying. Yay!

Reviewer: DarkDecember Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 01:13 pm

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

This story just gets better and better. I love Nikolai and Sunshine together, but I'm worried about Sergei and his foolish self running around with that picture.

 I'm glad Sunny's dad is trying to take the first step towards changing and getting help.  Thanks for writing this story. Love it!

Reviewer: Tootall Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 12:15 pm

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

This is a sad thing to say; BUT I HOPE IT SNOWS!!!

Hopefully We'll have another chapter today.

 :::))))

 

Reviewer: Tracy Reynolds Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 12:14 pm

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

I am really loving this story. I like the fact that a softer side of Nikolai exists for Sunshine. Also I hope her father is truly sincere about getting the help he so desperately needs. I can't wait to see how this story unfolds for all the characters especially Nikolai and Sunshine.

Reviewer: Christina Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 12:03 pm

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

I am happy to see that Pop has gone to his first meeting.  I hope that he keeps it up.

Nikolai and Sunny seem to be getting closer.  I wonder will he get her a cat :D  LOL!

Sergei is pining for her I hope he does not make a mistake and allows Nikolai see that picture of him and Sunny and Benji that would not be so good for him.

The gardener I bet will not be sleeping on the job again but then he is being replaced soooo.

Great update as always can't wait for the next one.

Thanks!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 09:08 am

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

Sergei might want to take that picture out of the mirror and put it away.  Just like Niki showed Anatoly that he knows everything, he could see that picture and Hell would break loose. Niki is definitely in love with Sunshine. I hope his love does not turn to obsession.  Darla, Darla, Darla.........what trouble is she going to cause.  I hope mister Jacob Jones finally get the help he needs.

Reviewer: Lovelybears Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 08:26 am

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

What a nice turn of events. This chapter is just filled with hope.

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 08:17 am

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

wonderful story!

Reviewer: yummy954 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 07:26 am

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

He was 1/2 hour late for a meeting?????  Unheard of. LOL.  Sunshine is turning is life upside down already. I love it.  I think Nikolai needs Sunshine more than he knows.  She is humanizing him.

It looks like Sergei has a photo of Sunshine?  If so, I hope he is careful with it around Nikolai...actually, I think he should keep it hidden.  Nikolai is SUCH a jealous man.  He had the gardner beaten for sleeping. Nikolai will do worse if he knows that Sergei has her photo.

Sunshine called her brother in the last Update, but she didn't seem to care about her father.  I am glad to see in this Update that she does care about it.  Yes, he has not been the best father, but you cannot turn off love like a faucett.  And Alcoholics Anonymous...great.

I can't wait for the next Update!

Nyeesha

 

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 07:20 am

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

Sunny is falling for Nikki...hmmm I do not know if that is a good thing

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 07:12 am

Title: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

Every chapter makes me love this story, more and more. 

Nikolai is so sweet with Sunshine.  And she feels very open with him...so he opens up to her.  He is a hard man, who is actually making himself open and vulnerable to her.  I love it.

I like the part about Nikolai's tatoos.  It reminds me of that Italian actor Viggo Morenson in the movie, Eastern Promises (good movie, btw). 

Thanks for the Update.

Nyeesha 

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 07:12 am

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

I absolutely love this story! I especially like that you update regularly!!! Thanks a bunch!!!. Now, on to my critique. I find it particularly interesting that despite Nkolai's obvious nepharious attributes, he has somehow endeared himself to Sunshine. It seems like there is a bit of Stockholm's syndrome floating around here. It will be interesting to see what it will take for Sunny to stop ignoring her instincts about Nikolai and what she will do to get herself and her family away from him.

Reviewer: lovely1974 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 07:12 am

Title: Who they are

Yaay an update! I'm glad to see that Nikolai wants to protect her from some of the realities of his life, but I wish he'd look a little closer at what he's doing to her life. I want to root for theem, but I can't as long as it feels like he's using her. Excellent writing to leave me so conflicted. 

Reviewer: Karnythia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 07:11 am

Title: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

I picked up this story from a link a few days ago, and I'm already so in love with these characters.  I usually don't follow stories that aren't finished (I can't stand the wait!) but your story sucked me in from the first chapter and I haven't been able to stay away.  The way you write, especially how you draw out personalities, is amazing.  Thank you so much for sharing your talent on here.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much  for your  kind comment!

 Because I'm curious/nosy, would you mind telling me where you found the link?

 

Thanks, 

Reviewer: H Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 07:10 am

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