i like sergei

I like the way this story is developing.  Sunshine is learning to stand up for herself, even to Nikolai.  A strong-minded heroine.  Sergei is still a sweetheart.  And though Nikolai can be a bad ass, I like him so far.  Anatoly is trying to put Darla in his pocket or vice versa.  Will that effect Nikolai and Sunshine's relationship?  And I also like how Sunshine thinks of her brother's future.  Is there anything she can do for dad.  She will be gone and so will Benji.  Her father is already drinking.  If she doesn't think of something, he may drink himself to death.

Good story...great Update.  Can't wait for more....

Nyeesha

ok i'm glad she stand her ground with him most girl like me proably skaing in her boots but she let him know who she is and what she expects. very well written now  i see hot mobster can be sweet when he wanted to be i think she brings that out on him and it nice to see that. it just sad what she going thu with her father you think he wise up a little but then bam he does something crazy. thanks for the updated.  love the story i'm adddicted to it lol.

I love this story soo much so far. I do not want Sunny to lose the attitude that she has. I love how you did something different with this story. I love how you took the main character and made them use the power that they normally have over the person who wants them, instead of making Sunny bend to his will, you let her see the light at the end of the tunnel.

I was wondering if Nikolai is her lover or Sergei? The person who she is going to fall in love with?

Wonderful update. Seems Nicolai may already be a little in love with Sunny. Already he is making concessing for her that he has not made with his other women.

As for Anatoly, I don't trust me.I feel like he's plotting and waiting for Nicolai to slip up.

Sunny is such a strong girl.  More important, her mother who is no longer alive, gave her daughter alot of wisdom in the short time she had with her.  I love that knowing she could not avoid going to Nikolai she decided that she would go on her terms.  The terms were so smart.  It looks like Pop is taking up the bottle full time and getting Benji out of the house as much as possible was awesome.  I thought Nik was falling for her in earlier chapters, but I'm sure is is now.  I love this story.  Nice update.

Ms. Sunshine is no push over weakling..I like that very much. She may be 18 but she is more mature than may 30yr olds. She knows he wil take her and it will either be on her terms or his..I like that she is making it on her terms.

I think Nik is so going to fall in love with our Sunshine but I also think Segei will also..it will be interesting to see who will win her heart and what they will be willing to do to capture it!

I love how you are weaving this story sweetie...it is excellent!!I can barely wait for more!!

This has become one of my all time TC favorites.

I think Sunshine is such a likeable character, and Nikolai loves her already, despite the fact that he doesn't realize it. Darla is such a bucket, and I can't wait until she finds out that she's not only been replaced by a much younger woman, but also one that is so different from her. 

Fantastic job, and keep up the great work. 

XLNT update! I'm intrigued, definitely....I think Sunny is trying to make this as much as a normal relationship as she can to take away the feeling of beeing Nikos involuntary conkubine. I think this is very smartly done by her. I also think she would never have agreed if she thought she'd have to sleep with someone she wasn't attracted to. She does not have this problem I think. I'm curious about the rest of their terms and conditions though. Keep 'em coming!

awesome story. i really like it and where it's going. but i feel bad for sergei. he just seems so sad. i know sunshine isn't supposed to end up with him, but it would be nice if he found love or some sort of happiness. update soon

This story is the bomb! I love it. I'm a bit worried for Sergei's sake. He may end up falling for Sunshine and get himself killed. Or maybe if Nikolai casts Sunshine aside, Sergei will be there to 'comfort' her. I hope your muse continues to kick your butt because this is definitely one of the best stories on the Chamber.

Darla's a mess. I feel that she will cause problems for Sunny down the road.

But what really had me grinning was the maid. When she said--

“Something I learned from Mr. Andreovich: The feet you step on on your way up belong to the asses you kiss on your way down.” Priscilla slapped her and Darla fell hard to the ground. She held her cheek in shock. “You should have acted like a lady and maybe you’d still be here.” Priscilla turned on her heel and led her army away.

 Those words are so true. What attracts Nikolai to Sunny is her humaness. There a sparkle in her her eye that Darla lacks. Sunny ia also compassinate, something Darla lacked. Although Nikolai doesn't know it yet, I feel Sunny has the upperhand.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

OMG!!! I am so tired of her father that is a selfish SOB...He ruined her mother's life with his schemes and get rich quick ideas.

He selfishly wanted to hock the bracelet since he would not get enough at the pawn to go and gamble it away because that is surely what he would have done.

Then when she tells him that Nikolai wants her to be his until all his debt and any occurring debt is payed he says for how long...then he doesn't understand why she is upset.  Like she said she is the only one in this looking out for herself and Benji cause she definitely can't depend on her father. 

Nikolai said he would not break her well I would say he is off to a pretty good start but I have faith in our girl that she is strong and will make it thru.

Darla I can see right now it going to be problems for Sunny...I don't know how and I don't know when but I think she is going to be a problem that is if Sunny takes the alternative....which in this case I can't see her not doing so because again like she said there are other lives at stake other then her father's now.  She can't even take the bracelet pawn it and make a run for it.  Nikolai has gotten her in his sights now and I don't see him being a man giving up so easily.

Sergei is a sweetie I hope he is careful with Sunny I see him falling for her you see how anger Nikolai got when he thought that she had touch him.

At least Sunny can continue her education but she has to come back to him every night. I wonder will he move Benji in as well so she can at least have contact with her brother as for her father at this point in time I don't care cause he has a problem and he has drug his family down with him.

I can't wait for the next update which I hope is soon.

Thanks for sharing.