Oh I like so very much so far. 

What does "dyrka glupaja" mean?

Nikolai does not seem like a very nice man but I guess business is business.

Ok, her father is a straight dumbass that is all I have to say about that one. 

When they were handing out common sense he was too occupied with playing craps to get in the line.  Hell he should have been in that line twice.

He is suppose to be taking care of his children not the other way around. 

Loved the update and story going to read more.  

Thanks for sharing.

I heart Sergei, he's such a sweet heart. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this story is going to go. The ending was sad, the poor thing started her day on a happy note and has ended it on a sad one. I had a feeling that her father wouldn't get upset about her whoring herself out to pay his debt.

I like the pace of the story, it's not rushed or two slow. You seems to be more focused on unfolding the plot than giving the audience cheap thrills. I think when this story really gets going it will take off. 

Thanks updating!

I had a longer review but I lost it, so this one will be short.

I really like the characters. I like how you gave the brief synopsis of Nikolai's past and he belief in proverbs and sayings. He wants Sunshine to chase some of the darkness out of his world, but he could just as easily chase the light out of hers.

Sunshine is handling this situation the best way she can. She was smart to ask him the terms and how long she would be in his "service". She has also handled the situation better than most women would have.

Sergi, poor Sergi, I really like him, but I can already see him falling in love with Sunny and vice versa. Although, I could be wrong and she really falls for Nikolai.

Nikolai through Darla out like she was nothing, so I'm pretty sure she'll return to bite in the butt.

I feel her pain. I thought her dad was going to tell her not to do it too. What is Antoly up too? I don't know if he can be trusted , why would he want to take care of her know? He has to now that her still being that close to Nikolai is going to cause a lot of troube. I like how generous Nikolai is. Loved the update!!

Me likey. Can't wait to read more.

This story is awesome! I don't mind her age like some of the readers. Yeah, she's young and he's thirty-one, bt she's legal and mature for her age. Besides, I think she'll give Nikolai as good as he gets. I'm concerned for poor Sergei who may fall for her as well. Hope Darla doesn't cause any trouble, but she probably will because she's too stupid not to.

Nice story so far..

Nik is so intense for Sunshine but is it a passing thing.  As least Sunshine is no innocent flower and it seems that she ecan handle herself.  She seems wiser beyond her years. 

Sergi seems to like Sunshine and I can see a conflict there already.  I like Drama so bring it on. 

I also hate to see when parents are not responsible and they baggage have to be taken up by the children. 

Update Please  

Welcome, Onimosity. Kudos on taking the plunge and posting your first story!!!

I love Sunny's spunk. She had her future planned before her dear old pathetic father ruined it. Her father is sick. He is an addict... addicted to gambling.

And yes, he's despicable, too. He isn't above "leasing" his only daughter out to save his own sorry hide. Actually not even to do that but to sink deeper into debt. That was truly sad. No real remorse. At least Sunny is a level-headed realist and sees what she's working with... a perfect lose-lose situation, unfortunately.

He is her father but a lost cause, intent on continuing to drag them down. Sunny should only be concerned about her little brother, Benji. Her father should be on his own.

Nickolai is an odd contrast between cold hard brutality and warm gentle caring. Seriously, he could have dumped Darla without a pot or a window... or simply killed her. Luckily he seems to like Sunny's fire and sass or else I see BIG trouble ahead. There probably still will be, as Sergei seems to like her, something that could be very dangerous for both of them.

I'm enjoying reading your story and look forward to regular updates.

Good Luck!!!! 

Very caring father!

ok i wanted to say you have some wirtten skills girl. i love this story and how you feel all the emotions in it.  i feel for sunny hear she is so a good smart girl but has a father who has a brain of  a 5 year old. i hope he grows up. love the story and that mobster he evil but dam he hot lol. thanks for the updated. i think these two going to fall in love with each other.

I love the story, Her dad is just so weak!! can't wait for the next chapter.

What a great story. Nikolai is intrigued by Sunshine because of her innocence. I love to see where you are taking this story. More please!!