nice! first thing i thought of after reading this (and re-reading..lol) was Waiting for Godot. confusing at first, but if you pay attention you'll see what's really going on :)
Reviewer: jojo83 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/07/13 11:25 pm
Confusining at first but it comes together at the end. Loved it :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading Tibby, I'm glad that you liked it.
Date: 05/03/10 04:36 am
Fantastic! Amazing - absolutely loved it! Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and I'm glad that you really liked it.
Date: 24/02/10 11:44 am
whoa
Author's Response: Hahaha thank you for reading and making me laugh.
Date: 23/02/10 11:48 pm
This was written really well. I was surprised by the ending. I think you are supposed to double space when another person is talking. Other than that, that was really good. It was very interesting too.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading Flicker and Sparkle, as soon as I saw the odd commercial I had to write a story based on it. Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/02/10 06:57 am
Story's start is abit confusing for me but I'd like to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Thank you for ready and yes the stories a bit confusing because the whole thing is basically a metaphor.
Date: 23/02/10 05:36 am