Wow...shit that was good!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/12/11 02:24 am
I liked it but she was stupid. She should have just fucked his brother or best friend then left.
Reviewer: Chigirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/05/10 10:00 pm
First story I'm reading on The Chamber and it was moving and powerful. Read it with the song in the background and it was so eerie how the lyrics would synch up just in time. Gave me a chill.
Go 'head, girl. I see you
Reviewer: AspireToWeariness Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/04/10 05:31 am
Love this !!! Just so moving and powerful .
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/03/10 05:51 pm
This was a really good one shot...I love the song..Mind you I was listening to the song on my Ipod while reading it before I realize that it was a song fic..
It would be nice to see what happens with the kids but I agree that it's better to end it here.
I would love to read any other stories you have this one was great!!!!!
Reviewer: Renee Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 02/03/10 11:48 pm
Wow! That was powerful! I loved it!! It is ironic that she killed him just as he had decided to take her back...
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: 02/03/10 09:59 pm
Throughly enjoyed it! You know I love the name Dillinger. And I must say, I agree with Annie. I give you my love like that and you defile that, I'll bust a cap in your ass! LoL. I'd love to see more of this story so get to writing!
Reviewer: vintagenarcissa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/03/10 04:44 pm
Nice work! Home girl's loev did turn into obession. She really took to heart the whole, 'If I can't have him, no one will' scenario.
Thanks for the great read!
Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed [Report This]Date: 02/03/10 02:02 pm
Amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/03/10 03:15 am
Loved the story but sad that she killed the cheaters and seemed to lose her mind in the process. Her love bordered on obsession. Wished she'd just left the sucker and thought of her kids though. I'm really sad for the kids as they now have no father or mother.
Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted to continue to show what happens with the kids but I felt that it would be better as a one-shot. It's a sad situation for them. Thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: 02/03/10 02:02 am
good story, but Uma isn't beautiful.
Author's Response: Yeah, that was the point. I chose that pic because of the way it made her eyes look, I mean it's like the 80/20 rule in fiction. Thanks for reading it!
Date: 01/03/10 10:09 pm
That story was like so good because you always think things like that but people really never will say what they really feel but you put it out there
Author's Response: Thanks! Reviewer: Giavanie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 01/03/10 09:14 pm
That is just so sad. Ana lost her ever loving mind over loving a man more than she loved herself. Did anyone in the see the signs? Her friend Tammy? That ass wad agent?
Author's Response: They all saw it, but she wasn't willing to give him up.
Date: 01/03/10 05:06 pm