I really like this story but let me tell you, Jarrod and Camille should be a story all by themselves. I am really feeling those two. I can't wait to see how you interact them within the story. They seem to have enough of a history for a story of their own. Great update. Keep it coming.
Author's Response: When I started this I thought that myself and I've been considering it in my head. But I've got four other stories that are really bugging me and I have characters all set for those two and even an outline for them both. The other two would involve Rielle's brother Chris and a woman who shall remain nameless for now and Alex Moore and someone he's known for a while. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 31/05/10 05:39 am
What confrontation? This should be interesting! I'm waiting for more interaction between Camille and Jarrod.
Author's Response: You'll see. It will be interesting. Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 31/05/10 05:30 am
I can't wait for the goodness to ensue!!!
Author's Response: Unfortunately the moist, hot, naked goodness is still to come. Have patience Grasshopper.
Date: 31/05/10 04:50 am
Wow, sounds like Tiffany really messed with his head. Hope his head is now clear and he's up to the challenge of a new relationship without bringing too much baggage as he's trying to get with Rielle. Great update.
Author's Response: You don't know the half of it. He and Rielle have more in common than he and the redhead. Thank you for your continued support.
[Report This]Date: 30/05/10 06:10 am
Thanks for the great update Junebug, I can hardly wait for Tiffani to realize what she had in KC, and come to find out Rielle the smarts to know a good man, when she finds one.
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Author's Response: It'll be a blast for sure. Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/05/10 04:19 am
KC, Rielle will be nothing like your ex, no need to worry about that. Let her make her appearance so she can see how happy KC is and isn't missing her.
Author's Response: Yeah, can't wait to rub it in her face that he is with a real woman.
[Report This]Date: 30/05/10 02:54 am
She shouldn't be worried, it's just a casual gathering!! Nice update!
Author's Response: You know how we women can be. Thank you bayoumomma. I'll try to post as faithfully as I can. Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 30/05/10 02:46 am
O.K. Like the picture of the orchids. Did you add pic. to the other chapters? Good to see the friend interacting with each other.Looking forward to find more out about K.C.'s ex-fiancee. Finally we see that somebody is getting some. :) Keep updating. Nice pace. Thanks.
Author's Response: Glad you like the pics, I went back and added a few pictures to some of the others but it can be a little time consuming. I think we should all get along.The fiancee will show up at some point in time. Thank you for reading.
[Report This]Date: 29/05/10 07:10 pm
Meeting Tiffany is most definately inevitable. She will probably realize that she made a mistake and want him back.
I hope Rielle tells himn exactly why she felt a need to drop his hand in front of her friends. I understand why, but she did it, but he's clueless.
You are very good at discribing scenery. Although at times, it didn't feel as though the characters wer discribing the scenes, which disrupted the flow of the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks Cholyn I still have to fine tune my style so I appreciate you keeping me straight. Yes we will be meeting Tiffani and Rielle has been out of the game for a while so she's forgotten dating etiquette.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 29/05/10 09:59 am
Thanks for the fast update. This is moving along nicely.I'm glad KC's ex was a major fool.
Author's Response: Wait until you finde out how big a fool she is.
[Report This]Date: 29/05/10 07:54 am
I am waiting for the hot, butt naked sex!!!
Author's Response: The sex is coming!!!
Date: 29/05/10 06:54 am
Oh how sweet, they've admitted to each other they want a relationship with each other. Loving how they roll togehter.
Author's Response:
I thought it was nice too. Lord knows they'll have enough stuff cropping up to create conflict between them. Let this be one thing that is clear between them.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 28/05/10 03:15 am
LOVE THE PICTURE. I like what you are doing with the story. Keep it up. Thank You!
Author's Response: Thank you for your continued support. I appreciate it.
Date: 27/05/10 01:43 am
Nice update!! Love a man that knows what he wants.
Author's Response: Confidence is sexy isn't it.
[Report This]Date: 27/05/10 12:15 am
This is good. I just read all of the chapters up until this point, and now can't wait for the next part. KC and Gabrielle seem good together, but I want to know why his mother hates the island so much, and what is she hiding. I'm also looking forward to seeing Camille at Jarrod's house, especially since she was acting all frantic when she was talking to Gabrielle, but was faking alooflness when she was invited.
Author's Response: Welcome, happy that you are enjoying the journey. K.C.'s mom plays her cards real close to her chest as we will see later but then so does K.C. to a certain extent. As to Camille, well girlfriend has issues.
[Report This]Date: 26/05/10 05:04 am
Great update. Glad KC seems genuine about his intentions toward Rielle. Can't wait until the party!!
Author's Response: I'm glad he comes off as sincere too. Getting ready to post so hang on.
[Report This]Date: 25/05/10 03:32 am
Looking forward to the date.
Author's Response: One update coming up.
[Report This]Date: 25/05/10 01:39 am
Thanks for another great update. I can't wait for the party either.
Author's Response: Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: 24/05/10 01:05 pm
Thanks for another great update. I can't wait until the dinner party either.
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoyed it thank you. Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/05/10 07:12 am
I've enjoyed their getting to know each other.
I can't wait for the party.
Author's Response: It should prove to be interesting. Stay tuned. Reviewer: Janetbd Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/05/10 05:47 pm
Wonderful update. I'm glad that she is going to give him a chance. I can't wait to see what happend with the break-up of his last relationship!!
Author's Response: Thank you bayoumomma glad you are still enjoying it. Into every relationship a little red head- ahem adversity comes.
[Report This]Date: 23/05/10 05:16 pm
Hi, I am really enjoying this story. And Thank You for the updates. It is nice to see that this story has some back one to it. Some substance and not a lot of fluff. Great Story.
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for sticking with me.
[Report This]Date: 23/05/10 07:20 am
Wonderful update! Your story reminds me so much of home.
I like Gabrielle and KC. I'm not a big fan of long distance relationships; but I see that you have Rielle considering it and being cautious with KC as a result. As any reasonable person should be.
I'm looking forward to reading more about the growing friendship and possible romance between KC and Rielle. Great job telling it!!!
Author's Response: Hope those are good memories Blue! Don't worry thinks have a way of working themselves out and after all of this there has to be some nookie some night! Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/05/10 11:36 am
St. Sebatians sounds like a wonderful place. I'm happy Reille put some cards on the table.
Author's Response:
Thanks for visiting the best island in the Caribbean, thank you for visiting. Gabrielle knows when to hold them and when to slap them down.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 22/05/10 09:05 am
So will there be a hurricane on the horizon, and I don't mean the sexual kind. lol
You seem to really like seafood, but then again St. Sebeastian is an island.
Author's Response: Who said anything about stormy weather? There will be enough time for fast food later trust me. Bon Apetit! Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/05/10 08:12 am