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Title: Chapter 43

The emotion in this chapter was so overwelming.  It took strength for Fredrika to talk about the attack to Rielle.  Rielle was giving more insight about the family.

 

I was suprised that Fredricka wants to go back to St. Sebastian after all this time.  Maybe she is ready to face the past so the hold it has on her future will lessen somewhat.  

 Colton is in protection mode:first and foremost, he has to make sure that Fredricka is ok.  Then he has his sons to consider.  Colton is a very strong man who loves his family.

Racial indenity is a very tricky subject and I LOVE how you handle it June.  I don't get the feeling that Macus and KC are trying to 'pass';  I get the feeling that people see KC as a white man, and some can not except that he is biracial.  Even though he met Rielle's multiracial family, he didn't know how she would react.

I'm giving Marcus a chance right now because his whole family is in chaos and he is going to go into protection mode just like his father.

Uncle Frank is a good dude.

I can't wait for the next installment!

chel 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey Chel,

I have to say that I am pleased with the chapter. Goodness knows it took me long enough to get here, but now it seems to be flowing again.

You are in my head with that assessment of the situation. Marcus will come around eventually. I think we know where everyone stands and that is in support of a woman who was traumatized as a young woman and has never come to terms with the event.

I think that K.C., Marcus and probably Danni as well never had issues with race until they got older. You hit the nail on the head and K.C. might explain his position a little better after some time has passed so that Rielle can understand.

Thanks for reading, enjoying and commenting Chel. I really appreciate it.

 

Reviewer: miquerida Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 03:14 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I kinda agree with Marcus on the issue of being black. Did he really need to tell? I'm still trying to figure the big deal about the breach of trust issue. Has he denied that he was Black or seemed like he favored one race over the other? She wants him to trust her but can't seem to handle the truth. I think Rielle has made a mistake in her judgement.



Author's Response:

Hello Love Drama

Imagine your man keeping the fact that although he looks white he is half black from you.

Imagine that you are also half black and he has met your nice non-judgemental family and he still doesn't tell you.

Imagine that he is going to introduce you to his parents and when you meet the family half of them are black including his mother.

Imagine you have been thinking all along that  he is white and you are nervous as all get out that said parents will not like you because you are not.

Suppose Rielle had done the same thing? How do you think K.C. would feel?

Rielle has a right to be angry that K.C. didn't trust her and the fact that he virtually sprang this on her is not cool. Let him swallow the pill, spend time with his mother and get his stuff in order.

I'm glad you offered your opinion and thank you for reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: Love Drama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/12/10 11:13 pm

Title: Chapter 43

Right now I think Reille have been trying to find a reason to push KC away since the beginnning of their relationship. She now have found it. She is scared because she has never loved or been in a relationship this deep before.

When she gets home I hope her freinds and family can help her see, what she is trying to do is wrong.



Author's Response:

Hey Dimples, Thanks for hanging tough with me.

Rielle's brain has found an out but her heart and body are on a different path. She is fighting a losing battle against love though.

Her Mom is already bing the voice of reason and Frederika being the lady that she was helped too. She'll be doing a lot of thinking on that long, lonely plane ride home and even though she did a good thing in telling him to support his Mom it was hard.

Thank you for reading, and reviewing I appreciate it.

 

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/10 06:58 pm

Title: Chapter 42

where have you been?? Please post soon I love this story.

Author's Response:

Hey Tam14611,

I wanted to put out something that I liked, that made sense as well and it just wasn't flowing cause I had a few other things that kind of took over. Needless to say I worked it out.

Thanks for reading, enjoying, missing and commenting. I really appreciate it.

 

Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/10 05:14 am

Title: Chapter 1

Hey I miss this story...

 Please update soon....

thanks



Author's Response:

Hi Ms40, I got some inspiration last night watching Sex In The City so I will be posting soon. I haven't forgotten Rielle and K.C. or their friends and family for that matter.

Thank you for reading, enjoying and commenting.

Reviewer: Ms40 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/12/10 09:03 am

Title: Chapter 25

Yes, he is VERY romantic. I like how he's wooing her. Thanks for posting this story.

Author's Response: Hey Suprina yes K.C. is one in a million and Tiffani was a fool for messing this man over and now he is giving his all to a woman who appreciates him and vice versa. Glad you are enjoying the story and keep reading. I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/11/10 02:14 am

Title: Chapter 23

Yeah, he should have told her sooner.

Author's Response: Hey Supreme One the fact that his family is well off ok wealthy isn't something that he really dwells on and he probably didn't want to bring it up and ruin the vibe he had going on with Gabrielle. I am with Chris on this one because money can mess with a person's head. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 21/11/10 02:11 am

Title: Chapter 15

That cooking scene was adorable! lol

Thanks for commenting!



Author's Response: Hey Supreme One I know I am a frustrated cook who will be serving dry turkey this Thanksgiving to my poor family so someone has to be able to cook around here. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it very much.

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Date: 21/11/10 01:14 am

Title: Chapter 11

I hope Gabrielle goes out with K.C. I like the chemistry between this couple.

Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response: Hi Supreme One, I think they make a nice couple too. As for chemistry it will get hotter. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/11/10 12:31 am

Title: Chapter 9

WP Syndrome? Never heard of that ailment. tee-hee!

Author's Response: Hey Supreme One don't be coy you may never have heard of it but I'm sure you've experienced the phenomenon for yourself. We will leave a little something to the imagination...for now. Thanks for reading, enjoying and reviewing.

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/11/10 11:50 pm

Title: Chapter 8

You ain't the only one hot flashing. lol

Thanks for keeping it good.



Author's Response: Hey Supreme One, glad you liked it when I wrote it I was literally hot flashing so that was for real. Thank you for reading, enjoying and reviewing.

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/11/10 11:48 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Single ladies in the house indeed. Look forward to what you will have them get into. Especially with some hot new man on the island. lol

Author's Response: Hi Suprina, time to cut loose and enjoy. I won't get them into anything too bad hot men included. Okay I'm lying sexy trouble is afoot. Thanks again for reading and reviewing I'm happy you are enjoying the island interlude too.

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/11/10 01:11 am

Title: Chapter 4

Yeah, I wouldn't mind living on St. Sebastian...in the winter. lol. GA heat can be sweltering enough in the summer.

That Tiffani sounds like an no-class act. Can't stand when women cheat on a good man. They are too hard to find as it is without heifers like Tiffani messing with their hearts.



Author's Response:

Hi Supreme One, St. Sebastian is very special unfortunately even on this paradise there will be snakes and I mean the two legged kind.

Rielle is no fool and Lord knows K.C. is grown and sexy. Tiffani's trifling behind is a thing of the past for him and he is all too ready to move on with his island beauty. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 



Author's Response:

Hi Supreme One, St. Sebastian is very special unfortunately even on this paradise there will be snakes and I mean the two legged kind.

Rielle is no fool and Lord knows K.C. is grown and sexy. Tiffani's trifling behind is a thing of the past for him and he is all too ready to move on with his island beauty. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/11/10 03:48 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Hmmm...I see we have a few mysteries at hand. The mystery of why his mother left the island. The mystery of exactly HOW is mother helped to changed his father. The mystery of what these 2 handsome friends are gonna do on the island.

Hmmm....

Thanks for posting this story. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Hello Supreme, we have lots of mysteries that will come up and have to be solved as Rielle and K.C. get to know each other.

Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/11/10 04:04 am

Title: Chapter 2

I like the abundance of details that you give. The pics are nice too. Very nice. Makes me wish I lived on an island. Sigh.

Rielle's friends are a trip. Hope she don't let them get her into no trouble.

 



Author's Response:

Hey Supreme One, detail seems to be my specialty. I don't know why but it is what I do. Glad you like the pics also something I do.  

Island life is nice until you have to worry about a hurricane and your are sitting on an island in the middle of the Caribbean Sea believe me that is not fun. I have made the island as eco friendly as possible and I wished we all lived like this.

Rielle's girls are the sisters she never had and they all look out for each other.

Glad to have you on board and thank you for reading, enjoying and reviewing.

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/11/10 03:04 pm

Title: Chapter 1

We aren't already at the good part? lol. I like how the story started off.

Thanks for sharing your talent with us.



Author's Response:

Hello Supreme One. The good part is yet to come as you will see. I'm glad you liked the start and thank you for reading, enjoying and reviewing.

Welcome to the islands. I offer you a drink, virgin of course. Don't want to get you drunk before you can finish reading.

pina colada

No copyright infringement intended.



Author's Response:

Hello Supreme One. The good part is yet to come as you will see. I'm glad you liked the start and thank you for reading, enjoying and reviewing.

Welcome to the islands. I offer you a drink, virgin of course. Don't want to get you drunk before you can finish reading.

pina colada

No copyright infringement intended.

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/11/10 02:55 pm

Title: Chapter 42

Well. That was very intense. It was a secret that he keep but hopefully this will not bring there relationship to its knees. Good job. Keep updating. Nice picture as always.

Author's Response: Cimmy1, Somebody on their knees might not be a bad idea. Happy to know you like the pics. Thank you for your input. I appreciate you girl. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18/10/10 06:38 am

Title: Chapter 30

WELL! That was HOT!!!!!!!  Very nice. Nice food usage. Chocolate covered indeed. Waiting for the next update. Thanks

Author's Response:

Cimmy1, you threw me for a minute until I realized you were in chocolate heaven. Glad you enjoyed it you know food is my second love. Thanks for reading an reviewing and stick around.

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/10/10 02:26 am

Title: Chapter 42

It's a tough situation for all:

Rielle found out that her white boyfriend is biracial; she loves him but that's a biggie to keep from someone, esp. since he shows no visiable signs of being biracial.  I know they will work it out though.

KC found out the truth of his mother's previous life in st. sebestian.  It seems like his mother has a lot of healing left to do. Which brings his father in because his main goals is to protect his wife and children.

Marcus lashed out.  His mother is hurting, which makes his father hurt.  His brother is hurting, therefore he would want to lash out at the person who he precieves is hurting KC.  I don't think that Marcus is a bad guy at all; he is watching his family hurting and he wants to stop it.  I'm sure that once Marcus and Rielle get to know each other better,, he will see her as the good woman she is.

I'm glad that Uncle Frank came with some insight; it helped me to see how everyone got to this point.

GREAT chapter and I can't wait for the next installment!

Chel



Author's Response: Hello Chel, I'm so glad you are still enjoying the Island Interlude gang. Rielle and K.C. have a lot to talk about but will either one be open to the other's point of view? It sounds like Marcus has made up his mind already but Uncle Frank is trying to be the voice of reason. Thank you for input as usual you know I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/10/10 09:22 am

Title: Chapter 42

Marcus really needs to mind his own business. KC brought a lot of it on himself by not telling the so-called love of his life that he was bi-racial. I hope that he and Rielle stay together but I think she is going home alone to see if he is worth it. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hello Jai03, Marcus is just being a good brother and you can't blame him for that. Imagine how much their family has been through because of who they are? Money does not insulate you from racism as K.C. told Rielle. Hopefully K.C. will be able to communicate better but he is a man and we know how they can be. Thank you for your reading and also your input I appreciate it.

Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/10/10 04:10 am

Title: Chapter 42

See people like Marus need to mind their own business if they don't know the whole story. With his view she should just get over it because KC is rich and treat her like a Queen makes me want to reach through the computer and punch him in the face.

I would love for Gabrielle's brother to develop a relationship with KC sister. That would be awesome to have KC go through what he is going through with them sleeping together. I know waaaayyyyyy off topic, but it still will be cool.



Author's Response: Hello Dimples. As I said to Bayoumomma I can see both sides of this situation. How would K.C. take it if the shoe was on the other foot? It would be interesting to see. Chris and Dani hmmm you know that idea has been running around every since Rielle and K.C. came off the yacht. Not off topic believe me. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/10 10:35 pm

Title: Chapter 42

I would have to agree with  Marcus. It is out in the open talk it over and move on. He did not commit a a crime. Nice update.

Author's Response:

Hi Bayoumomma, I come down smack in the middle with this one (Must be the Gemini in me.) This is not happening to Marcus and it would be interesting to know how he would react if put in a situation like this. K.C. and Gabrielle will have to work out these issues but yes at least all of the cards are hopefully on the table. Thank you for reading and reviewing I appreciate your opinion.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/10/10 06:50 pm

Title: Chapter 41

I don't see why he couldn't share with her, especially since he knew she was bi-racial as well. Great update.

Author's Response: He definitely could have told her but I think when Rielle didn't ask him any questions he kind of forgot about it. When things are sweet you don't want to think about anything that will ruin your buzz. Thank you for your support bayoumomma I appreciate it.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 03:30 am

Title: Chapter 41

I wish there was emot-icons I could use to convey my shock at all the revelations.

But why do I have a feeling that the relevations are just beginning. . .

Damn girl, you are writing your arse off!

Can't wait for the next installment!

Chel

 

 

 



Author's Response: Hey chel, I am glad I could give you a thrill. There are a few more things we don't know but will find out soon. I wish I was writing something else off, I like my ass! How about if you say I'm writing my stomach off or my thighs, wait no the one breast that I have left! It may take a minute or two for me to post another chapter. I thank you for your support as usual girl. Love ya!

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 12:05 am

Title: Chapter 40

WHOA!

Now that's a cliffhanger!

LOVE Walt Willey and Beverly Johnson!  GREAT choices for KC's parents.

Can't wait for the next installment.

chel

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response: Hey Chel, wait until you meet his brother and sister and Uncle Frank. I think you'll approve those choices too. Next installment manana. Thanks for hanging tough with me girl, I really appreciate that.

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/08/10 11:40 pm

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