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Title: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

Oh man, she is in love with him and about to marry Evan.  They made love and she is going to marry Evan?  Oh man.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/09/10 06:19 am

Title: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

I am loving the way this is developing...I love the back story...her attraction to him...falling fo him and wanting him.

I was suprised she agreed to marry a man she does not really care about and it did not surprise me that she gave into her feeling for him.

I hope she did not mary the other man after their night of passion that would be heartless, stupid and chicken...she seems like none of those things.

I cannot wait for more...geat job sweetie!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 04:42 pm

Title: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

OMG please don't tell me that Noel went ahead and married that TOOL after she and Matt made love the night b4 her wedding... Noel you know that your HEART is with Matt, why take the COWARDS way out and marry a man you don't love just b/c your Parents Arranged it.

I so hope that I'm wrong, but I have a feeling that I'm not.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 06:16 am

Title: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

Interesting update but what the heck is Noel doing??? She needs to make up her mind about what she wants.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 02:19 am

Title: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

Just caught up and I love the way the story is being told it is different and I like it.

It is something there btwn Noel and Matthew it between the lines of what they say but it is great.  Just me babbling

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 01:49 am

Title: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

Awe man did she still get married? Loved the update cant wait for more.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 01:13 am

Title: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

Aww, snap!!! Noel is admitting how she feels to herself.  Why is she marrying a man that she does not love?  I was at least thinking that she had fallen out of love, but hell she had never had those feelings for Evan.  So stupid!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 12:26 am

Title: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

Please tell me she didn't make love to him and then let him go to marry this other man? Nice update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/10 11:28 pm

Title: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

If she ends uo getting married to that loser I will scream!! hurry with this update!! (says the one who can't do it herself!)

Loved it..as always!

Reviewer: KKMonroe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/10 09:27 pm

Title: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

So good.  I look forward to what happens the next morning, but I fear they both may end up broken hearted.

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/10 09:13 pm

Title: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

awmann I don't think I want to know what she did. At All.

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/10 09:08 pm

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