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Title: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

Aww, snap!!! Noel is admitting how she feels to herself.  Why is she marrying a man that she does not love?  I was at least thinking that she had fallen out of love, but hell she had never had those feelings for Evan.  So stupid!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 12:26 am

Title: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

Please tell me she didn't make love to him and then let him go to marry this other man? Nice update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/10 11:28 pm

Title: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

If she ends uo getting married to that loser I will scream!! hurry with this update!! (says the one who can't do it herself!)

Loved it..as always!

Reviewer: KKMonroe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/10 09:27 pm

Title: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

So good.  I look forward to what happens the next morning, but I fear they both may end up broken hearted.

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/10 09:13 pm

Title: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

awmann I don't think I want to know what she did. At All.

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/10 09:08 pm

Title: Chapter One: You Glow

You pulled me in immediately.  Such tension!  Can't wait for more!

 

 

Reviewer: jaydee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/08/10 03:16 am

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

Thanks for a great update. Not sure she is still agreeing to marry Evan when she has strong feelings for Matthew.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/10 12:07 pm

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

This is really good.  Noel doesn't really seem to want to get married.

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/10 04:33 am

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

Poor Matt...so heart sick over this beautiful ebony woman. I wonder does she eeven realize how much he loves her or is she clueless as she kinda seems.

I hope she does not marry Evan...he does not seem like her type..too possessive and suffocating...maybe I am pre judging because I want her to realize how much Matt loves her..

I am loving this story sweetie and I cannot wait to see where it leads us...excellent job excellent!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/10 02:19 am

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

Oh this is getting GOOD... I love the chemestry between Matt and Noel, and I can't wait to find out why she wants to see him the night b4 her wedding, I wonder if she is starting to feel for Matt what he feels for her.

I already don't like Evan, not only his he a JERK, but I have a feeling that its either her father wants them to marry b/c he's "The RIGHT Guy" or Evan is just marrying her to get in good with Dad.

Please don't be long with more.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/10 01:10 am

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

What the heck is wrong with Noel??? Can't she make up her mind about which man she wants??? Evan seems kinda pushy. Hope she knows what she's getting into. Great update!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/10 12:40 am

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

Is she going to marry Evan or is going to go with her feelings for Matthew?  Please say the later.  She didn't seem to happy to see Evan, me thinks that she doesn't want to marry him.  This may be a marriage that her parents want, not one of love.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/07/10 09:36 pm

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

Her fiance doesn't sound like he is a very nice person. I'm wondering if she called him over to tell him she is not going through with the wedding.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/07/10 09:19 pm

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

I don't like Evan. I love Matt. Noel needs to get real! I love this story, if there is no HEA I will get on th first plane to The US and have words with you!  :)

Reviewer: KKMonroe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/07/10 09:14 pm

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

I'm really liking this story so far. I'm liking the buildup that you have going and can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: LoveisPudding Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/07/10 06:21 pm

Title: Chapter One: You Glow

I like this start so far Renee, I can't wait to see where this story is going.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/07/10 12:13 am

Title: Chapter One: You Glow

I like the buildup going on in this story.

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/10 06:05 pm

Title: Chapter One: You Glow

Renee, your know your evil for only gracing us readers with one delectable chapter.

I"m a lil mad at you for this X-D

You have to update with 2 more next time X-D

Reviewer: brightnova01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/10 08:41 am

Title: Chapter One: You Glow

Interesting start. Hmmm, can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/10 07:40 am

Title: Chapter One: You Glow

I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Reviewer: Aimee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/10 07:00 am

Title: Chapter One: You Glow

I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I can tell this is going to be a good story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Love the characters already!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/07/10 12:52 am

Title: Chapter One: You Glow

Very nice job. Cant wait for more.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/10 12:27 am

Title: Chapter One: You Glow

I will cry, I know I will!! You have the gift, girl!! Love the characters. Matthew's mother is sweet. I like that lady..and I will cry...crying now!!

Reviewer: KKMonroe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/07/10 10:57 pm

Title: Chapter One: You Glow

Nana I love it!!!

Already compelling , sensitive and complex. This is not going to be just a simple love story..just the fact that he fell in love with the woman who tokk care of his mother so wonderfully on her last days ..makes you want to know them better...

I worry what will happen with their connection after his mom dies or if she get smarried..so many things complicated their coming together that you left with an insatiable desire for more more more...

Great beginning sweetie...I love the whole set and cannot wait to see how you weave this beautiful little tale!!

Thank you Na Na ....you are my FAVVVVV..!!!!!!Great job sweetie...

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/07/10 10:54 pm

Title: Chapter One: You Glow

I love it Renee! Looking forward to the next update and milestone.

 

 

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/07/10 10:52 pm

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