Okay woman I was quite surprised but in the best way possible : ) Tristian and James with a tiny person should be interesting to say the least but I know they'll be able to do it together. I know my man will find some way for them to be together because he's not leaving her!! Great update missy and I can't wait to finish this amazing story!!
Author's Response: LOL! You know James was a stubborn heifer, now she's a pregnant stubborn heifer! Tristen is going to have to pull a BIG one surprise for James to even consider going with him to Paris, but there is still a high possibility she isn't going to agree to it! But you're right. Tristen ain't leaving James even if he has to throw her over her shoulder and have her kicking and screaming all the way to Paris, lol! Thanks for your review.
[Report This]Date: 31/12/10 11:34 am
i can only bowdown and thank you for updating! with this chapter my year ends on a very good note =) from the hotness in the beginning - i can easily imagine waking up like that every morning, lol! - to the little news heading their way. i'm so happy to hear your writing is back on the track and more is coming because as lovely it's to have a baby with Tristen - this complicates things a lot, lol! Thanks again for the update MJ - thank you so much!!! XD
& HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
Author's Response: LOL, Cassius. I don't know if you know this but you're my 100th reviewer for this story and this is my first story on VC that has reached 100 reviews! For some reason, deep down I knew you would most likely be that reviewer! ;) Woman, you know James ain't thinking about how lovely it is to have a baby with Tristen! Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed
[Report This]Date: 31/12/10 11:34 am
Love this so much! :) I cracked up at Tristen's eye twitching, lmao! I can pick that in my head.
But poor James. :( I want them to keep it together.
& ya damn hussy, good lord!
Author's Response:
LOL! You know Tristen is trying to control himself. He probably would have kicked down the door if James hadn't of opened it. James is pretty distraught and Tristen is too, but he's only holding himself together for James' sake. Tristen and James have to endure a few more punches, but you know love always prevails!
P.S. Fish with big-ass eyes. ;)
Reviewer: C.C. Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/12/10 09:13 am
LOL! The end was sweet! Loved the chapter and hearing Tristan's background was nice! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! :) More updates coming soon.
Date: 27/12/10 11:14 pm
Thanks for a great update. It is amazing that Tristan is hanging in there with James. He is an amazing man because any other man would have been long gone once they got out of the hospital. Thanks
Author's Response: Tristen is the kind of man that once he falls hard, he falls hard and he ain't going anywhere! It took James a long time to figure that out, but now that she's come to the realization that Tristen is here to stay, they can move forward together, but not without a few bumpy rides along the way. Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 25/12/10 03:21 am
WOW, go Tristan...you the man. Thanks for a great update.
Author's Response: LOL! A persistent man always gets results. I wonder who's luckier, James or Tristen.
[Report This]Date: 25/12/10 03:11 am
Great update. I am glad that Tristan is doing better. Thanks
Author's Response: Love heals all, lol!
[Report This]Date: 25/12/10 02:54 am
My goodness, Jame went postal on her mom..DAMN!!!! I hope that she gets trigger next...the f...ing bastard.
Author's Response: Sometimes, you gotta get a little violent to get your point across. She was only giving a message to Pearl for Trigger, but I think she added a few extra punches for the hell of it! :)
[Report This]Date: 25/12/10 02:49 am
Thanks for a great update. I Like Melvin.
Author's Response: LOL, Melvin is a fun character to write! Thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: 25/12/10 02:26 am
Woah. WTF is Triggers plan lol I am loving this story btw
Author's Response: Trigger's plan will be revealed very soon! Thank you! ;) Reviewer: aleebabes Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/12/10 01:03 pm
I will say it again..Trigger is creepy and Pearl isn't a mother. They really are scary people. Thanks
Author's Response: If you hate them now then wait until the upcoming updates, lol!
[Report This]Date: 24/12/10 05:38 am
Her mother should be shot for using her daughter to sell drugs. Trigger is really creepy. I was LOL at the office scene. Thanks
Author's Response: Yes, Trigger is very creepy and Pearl is very evil -- they are meant for each other. I remember laughing the whole time as I wrote that office scene. Mark and Yvonne are a trip! :) Thank you! Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/12/10 02:09 am
I thought that the beginning scene was funny when the encountered the turtle. As for her mother my goodness, what is her story? I like Tristan. I can't wait to read more. Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you! Pearl's story is going to revealed very, very soon. :)
[Report This]Date: 24/12/10 01:21 am
Aw, I love these two...but I have a feeling the road isn't going to be easy ahead...not to mention he might be leaving soon. LOVE the scene with her telling she loves him in French and him making her say it again.
Author's Response: It was lots of fun writing James' 'je t'aime' scene to Tristen, but there is going to be some rocky times ahead for them. But for now, it's time for these two to spend some time together. ;) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 24/12/10 12:59 am
God, i'm such a freak and can't wait for the next update, lol! i'm really really that happy that James didn't bolt and told Tristen how she feels too. i hope James sees how much she has grown and changed since meeting Tristen...but i can't shake off the feeling that things are running too smoothly, you know? Trigger & Pearl have been quiet for some time now...plus Tristen's leaving...!? i've completely forgotten that. but one step at the time - first is making sure my life support is working when i read the next ch because i sense buckets of ice-cold water is not going to cut it, lol!
thanks again MJ! take care!
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, Trigger and Pearl have been a little quiet, but Tristen and James really need this time to strength their bond. This is what I call "the eye of the hurricane" because it's calm and smooth now, but the storm is far from being over. Trigger and Pearl will make their appearence soon, but first James has to go punish Tristen, lol! As for Tristen's leaving, I think Tristen has a thing or two up his sleeve to ask for an extension. :) Thank you! Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/12/10 03:44 pm
punish him good james!
Author's Response: LOL, you know she will! :D
[Report This]Date: 23/12/10 08:24 am
love the story.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 23/12/10 07:59 am
Tristen reminds me of this beautiful guy at my school thats from Germany....well the way he talks does..
AAAAAAAAnd I'm happy that James is realizing that she's not a monster because of her past.
Post soon please!
Author's Response: I know a handful of foregin guys, so I use how they talk and interwine their native language as inspiration for how Tristen speaks. :) European guys are so much fun to listen to, lol! Yes, James is definitely moving past the fact that she isn't a monster and she is a human and most importantly a woman who deserves a chance at love like everyone else! Thank you! Reviewer: meekalone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/12/10 06:26 am
I've just started this story today and I'm looking forward to catching up. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading my story and I hope you enjoy it! :)
[Report This]Date: 23/12/10 06:04 am
One of my favorite chapters so far. I love how Tristen is so open and honest with James about his life. She feared telling him she loved him, but eventually told him which is a big step for her. She deserves happiness even if it might not last forever since he will have to leave in 5 weeks but who knows maybe she will go with him, maybe she won't but I think this experience with her loving Tristen and being loved by Tristen will open James up to other adventures and things.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you, Jovan. :) Yes, James finally telling Tristen that she loved him was a HUGE step for her and really opens up for more character development. I think Tristen would most likely ask for a little more time to stay in America, but you never know, James decide to go with him to France if he asked. Thank you! Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/12/10 05:35 am
She said it back to him. YAY! He was not going to stop until she came clean with her feelings. Now what will happen with him having to go back home soon?
Author's Response: Yes, Tristen is a persistent man! But that's what makes him so loveable. :) He knew the feelings were there, she needed a little push. As for him returning home, that will definitely be discussed in the next update! Thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: 23/12/10 04:47 am
Cute. They're getting into a rhythm.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, they are finally get into the groove of things! Took them long enough. :)
Date: 23/12/10 04:44 am
So glad James admitted to her love for Tristian!! I love the banter between them both! Awesome update
Author's Response: LOL, thank you. It was a long time going but now that they've both admitted their love for each other, it's going to be a fun bumpy ride. Yes, their playful conversations with each other are fun to write! ;D
[Report This]Date: 23/12/10 04:36 am
I enjoyed the update very much! Glad we got to see a softer side of James. But what are they gonna do about the impending distance?
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, finally James lets Tristen really see the softer side to her. Love is contagious. As for Tristen's departure, that will definitely be covered in the next update! :) Make he can persuade someone to give him a little more time. Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/12/10 04:03 am
I loveeeeee this story!!! It sorta reminds me o Holiday Heart..in away. This chapter was exceptionally hottt!!
Post soooon please!!
Author's Response: I haven't seen that movie in a long, long time, but I can kind of see the similarities in my story and that movie. I'm glad you are enjoying my story. :) Thank you! Reviewer: meekalone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/12/10 09:05 am