The chemistry between them is so real. Enjoying the story.

So glad to read an update! I missed this story. Glad James is going with Tristian.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I apologize for not updating soon enough. :)

I cannot wait unitl your next update

pleasure

luv the personailty you have created for James and her friends

Loved it!! Hope they can make it work but I suspect his mom is gonna cause drama.

Author's Response:

That's a good prediction, Baha! Adele definitely might cause some drama and stress, which wouldn't be good for James in her fragile condition and Tristen might have to put his moma in her place.

I really want James to give Paris a chance, at least over there she would be from her crazy ass incubator her and ball and chain.  I want James to truly know happiness.

Yay, you updated!  James should be asking how soon can they leave. I'm so glad she said yes. They have been through so much, please don't let anything or anyone interfere with their trip. I hope the next chapter will come very soon.

*Bows* She's baaaaack! LMD is baaaack! Whoop-whoop! Girl I was about to start rocking in a corner if I this had not been posted. I've gone long enough without that hunk Tri... I mean, Tristen and James were oh so missed. (Wink-Wink!)

And thank you Jovan!

Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Uh huh, I'm sure you missed Tristen and James very much, Roniqua! They surely missed you especially Tristen, LOL. Thanks, lady. :)

so excited you updated this story i loved it and can't wait for more.

I really missed this story. Thanks for the update. It was worth the wait!!

Update update Update lol i love this story 

Author's Response:

Thank you! More updates coming soon. :)

The sex scene was good except the following disturbed me so diminished the pleasure I could have found in it because my believability of the characters was weakened, hence authors intent for erotic effect was more apparent to me then my involvement in Tristen/James:   In the pool James takes off her shirt and skirt, how she managed that in water is also weird but she would have to be steaming HOT and just after a few kisses from Tristen to change to this behavior; whereas, in her immediate prior moment there was no indication of a strong passionate arousal!  After Tristen lifts her out of water and sits her on edge of pool wall and pulls down her bra a little.  James shields her breast with her arm and anxiously looks around worrying someone might see them.  This makes no since because, why did she go through all that trouble to so brazenly take off her shirt if she's shy about him seeing her breast,  voluntarily taking off her shirt (and skirt/slip) was clear indication she wants him to see and touch her breast. James is a young woman not a fickled 14year old girl.  So all these actions appeared as writer's gimmicks to affect me the reader; which would normally be okay except the writer gimmickry was obvious, so instead I became irritated, because the writing had fallen to such amateur ploys.    

Also, what happened to Tristen since the last time we saw him in the hospital all broken up and in excruciating pain.  There is no buildup to this sex scene, last time they were together was in the hospital and even as a extremely sick/broken man she wanted nothing to do with him sensually nor romantically.  So for me I needed to see an interim relationship (even of just close friendship) to accept this sex scene.  Also, James did not strike me as the kind of person who would condone to making out sitting on the edge of the pool wall of a strange public pool, which is probably also dirty and very late at night.  This whole scene just didn't add up.  So although the sex was written erotically well to evoke sensual effect of the reader I was turned off due to the lack of believability of characters. It felt more like a cut and past from any of the strictly erotica literature I have read and enjoyed, which do not seek to tell a story.  So I'm not a prude nor overly critical.  Its just that Missus James, your writing of this story had been exceptional in skill until you got to this sex scene, which appeared almost like a cut and paste from the basic sex erotic literature.