I love this newest chapter, but damn Subrina is going regret allowing him to plow her field without a coat. Love that man!!!
Author's Response:
I'm loving that man myself, chica. lol. And you're right once again about the regret Subrina is gonna have behind that decision.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/03/11 04:12 am
That was great, even if Subrina's happiness will be fleeting because once that bust happens Ceasar will not be happy.
Author's Response:
You're right. C will not be a happy camper when that bust happens.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/03/11 02:10 am
Wow that nice them going together looking at the land she brought and he thinking about making sure she has the dream home she always want. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I really love Caesar for being so good to Subrina and encouraging her dreams, no matter how fake it might be.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 20/03/11 12:12 am
I know some wont agree with me...but I kinda wanted to see how this all played out with her trying to get knocked up...LOL. Oh well guess I just love extra drama; like her telling the truth isnt going to be enough of an event.
Author's Response:
tee-hee. You're a trip, Minera. Psst (whispering)...I love extra drama too. :D
Thanks for the candid comment!
Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]Date: 18/03/11 04:03 pm
Glad she listen to Blinky and not go down that road. C man love her and having baby or no baby he still want to marry her. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I had to send SOMEBODY Subrina's way in order to get her to see the light on that issue.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 18/03/11 04:13 am
I am so glad that she finally came to her sense, he love a baby but he will hate when he finds out he wasw used. Great update!!!
Author's Response:
Yes, Caesar will hate being used like that...or WILL he? LOL!
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/03/11 04:09 am
Awesome update.
Author's Response: Awesome comment!
[Report This]Date: 16/03/11 12:28 am
That was so awesome!!!! I am glad that Burt told her not to get married, to bad he didn't know about to ridiculous plan to get pregnant. Disaster is coming and the fall out will be entertaining to say the least.
Author's Response:
If Burt knew about that plan, he'd probably take Subrina off the case ASAP. Real talk. And yes, the fallout of this mission is gonna be entertaining and so much more. I'm tryna get emotionally ready to re-write.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/03/11 03:41 am
Hmm...well...we'll see what the conversation is like between them.
Burt hit the gas for real!
Author's Response:
Burt ain't playing. He loves him sum Avalon. lol.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 15/03/11 03:19 am
glad that avalon able to talk to C before he went and ask bree to marry him before he know who she realy is. Wow so Burt ask Avalon to marry go avalon it your birthday lol. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Yes, this is definitely Avalon's day.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/03/11 02:25 am
I am still not feeling Subrina on this getting pregnant tip. It's wrong and he will figure out why you got pregnant once the bust happens. Subrina you are not thinking carefully. Once this goes down Caesar will doubt everything about your relationship and you. Mosst excellent chapter.
Author's Response:
Subrina ain't thinking right. She's thinking desperate. Unfortunately, so many REAL-LIFE women have traveled down this road before.
Thanks for your most excellent comment!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/03/11 05:18 am
Well least Ricky did something right for C man. Now Bree right when blaine found out all ricky done and his wife leaving him he going to realy get upset big time. Thanks for the update and said a pray for the japan people
Author's Response:
It's about TIME Ricky did something unselfish on Caesar's behalf. He hasn't been the best cousin over the years.
Thanks for the commenting AND for that prayer. U rock, wwefanforlife!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 14/03/11 05:09 am
Aww Ricky...you called her mama :)
Author's Response:
Yes, he did. It touched my heart too when he said it.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]Date: 13/03/11 03:21 am
Ummm...What!!! Did this chic just say she was going to intentionally get pregnant to keep her man. CLAWD HAVE MERCY!!
fyi...that wig thing aint no joke. I have had to send up a prayer or two when walking to work on a windy Florida day...lol
Author's Response:
Yep, Subrina was having a desperate moment in this post.
As for that wig thing, I have to make sure my faux ponytails are secure for that VERY reason. I don't mind the wind whipping my hair back and forth (suddenly thinking about that video from Will Smith's daughter. lol), but I don't want it to snatch it off. LOL!
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]Date: 13/03/11 02:44 am
This chapter highly disturbed me being a public health worker. WRAP IT UP!!!
Author's Response:
I concur.
Thanks for weighing in on the issue!
Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]Date: 13/03/11 02:27 am
Blaine is a trip, calling Vickie telling a lie about loving her and wanting her back. Blaine Vickie is awake now and in control of her faculities. I am hope that Burt keeps an eye on Blaine because he can't be trusted. I don't want him to try to kill Vicki. Loved the new chapter. You are so awesome.
Author's Response:
You got that right! Vickie is WIDE awake now. About time, don't you think?
Thanks for the AWESOME comment, Pmgayles!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/03/11 01:28 am
HAHAHAH!!! I have a whole new appreciation for golf now. Man, no wonder Tiger Woods had all them chics going crazy for him. FORE!!!!
Author's Response:
There you go again with that wonderful wit. LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!
Thanks...tee-hee...for the...tee-hee...laughs!
Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]Date: 13/03/11 12:53 am
Holy cover-ups Batman!!! I was not expecting that. Well Im very glad that she isnt dead. Karianne needs Jesus; I mean seriously why are you so stuck on someone who isnt interested in women...lol Im loving the interaction with Ceasar and Bree.
Author's Response:
Holy cover-ups Batman? LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!
As for Karianne, she's simply delusional.
Thanks for the laugh, Minera!
Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]Date: 13/03/11 12:45 am
wow I understand why she torn now at first it like take Ricky down for what he did to her best friend and other women but you feel like he has HIV so it like he getting his punshiment for all the wrong he did.
Glad C man able to get close with his familys and that he getting to know them. I hope he forgives her too and they stay together. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Wwefanforlife, S is definitely torn these days when it comes to Ricky. At this point in the story a lot of us are probably just as torn.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 12/03/11 11:59 pm
Its going to hurt him like hell, but he'll forgive her. He'll forgive them all. Avalon is in on this to a large degree hurself now.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that everyone is on one accord about Caesar eventually forgiving Subrina. That shows me that yall are really paying attention to how much he loves her. I was trying hard to give their love enough depth/roots to withstand the storm that's coming their way.
Thanks for commenting, Flikchick!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 12/03/11 05:44 am
Wow glad that his family change their mind and going to get to know him better and he want babies with subrina that so nice. Hope they have lot lot babies lol. Thanks for the update
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you like this change in C's life. I wanted to give him more family ties since the ones that he grew up with are rapidly falling apart.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 12/03/11 04:55 am
Subrina you will have a long hard road of getting Caesar to forgive you. She is going to feel some pain but hopefully he will forgive her but she will have to work for it. Thank you for the chapter.
Author's Response:
You called it right, as usual. Subrina is going to feel some pain behind all this deception. Just know that her pain won't last forever. This story WILL have a happy ending.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/03/11 04:42 am
Subrina, you need stop with crazines. God didn't allow you to get pregnant for reason. You being pregnant is not going to mitigate Caesars feelings of betrayl when the bust happens and he finds out who you are. He is going to suspicious of anything you do and say afterwards. You needs to allow to feel of those things. Great chapter!! I love this story!!
Author's Response: Subrina's craziness will come to an end soon in the most usual of ways. Thanks for continuing to love this story so much!
Date: 10/03/11 01:46 am
well glad everything alright with C man and have to respect him for doing what he did for his father. Most people would told that family to shove it but he stood up and want to make sure dad was ok. thanks for the update
Author's Response:
I'm really feeling C for what he did too. That good deed was quite admirable.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 10/03/11 01:31 am
Blaine is pure evil, and I am waiting for the time of his retribuation to arrive. Ricky, is evil to but I think that his evilness is a direct result of Blaine's influence. Most excellent chapter.
Author's Response:
You're on it - Ricky's evil is due to Blaine's influence. Had he been raised by someone like Burt, his life would have been soooooo different. Different in a good way.
Thanks for this most excellent comment!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/03/11 06:26 am