I think binky wish she never meet that man. This family is crazy binky spying and aunt v so sick hope she get better. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I know everything is chaotic right now. Just remember that all will work out in the end.
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Author's Response:
I know everything is chaotic right now. Just remember that all will work out in the end.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/03/11 05:29 am
I am truly impressed with Caesar, because I wouldn't get tested for people that treated me like road kill. I would get tested for man that didn't acknowledge my existence. I wouldn't care if he died, yeah I know I need to work on that. That's not very Christian like is it? Oh well!!! Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes, C is definitely a good person. And naw that's not very Christian-like, but trust me, I understand where you're coming from. No judgment on this end.
Thanks for the honest feedback!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/03/11 04:56 am
I love the YT clip!!!
Author's Response: It was my pleasure to post it. Luv your comment!
Date: 07/03/11 03:47 am
OMG !! There should seriously by a warning label for this chapter. WARNING: Content below should not be read in research labs, libraries, government buildings, or any area where voices should be used as a whisper. Now people think I'm really crazy. Poor Sun-Hee! Hope her eyes dont swell too much, okay.
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!
Thanks for another belly laugh, Minerva!
Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]Date: 07/03/11 02:28 am
You know...I have to be fair to Viera and say that she has a right to her feelings. Not that its Ceasar's fault....its not....but she has a right to feel the sting of that betrayal. Ceasar is the living, breathing reminder of that. Its not out of order really. However, she needs to take that up with her husband and Avalon. If memory serves, Avalon did say she set out to seduce Meleki, so the bone to pick is with them, NOT Caesar!
Author's Response:
You're so right, Flikchick. In fact, I went into the manuscript and changed it to read that it was his parents' fault instead of just her husband's fault. Let me change it online right now while I'm thinking about it. Thanks for the insight!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/11 02:04 am
wow now she want him to spy for him this is just plan crazy. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Crazy is the operative word when it comes to Blaine.
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 07/03/11 12:48 am
wow joh understand you don't want anything to do with her but you have a child on the way so you need to take care of your baby. I wonder what blaine is calling about now? thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Jon sucks! It's been such a disappointment in this story.
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Author's Response:
Jon sucks! It's been such a disappointment in this story.
Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: 07/03/11 12:47 am
You go subrina let that chick know you don't mess with her man and she better get that look off her face. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I said it once before, I'll say it again - Subrina don't play! lol.
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 07/03/11 12:41 am
wow i feel so bad for him. I get she upset because her husband was unfaithful to her but you need to let it go and get to know Caesar and for his siblings to get to know him. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Stepmom is only seeing her own pain. What about Caesar's?
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 07/03/11 12:39 am
Go Subrina!! She laid the smack on Mrs. Rokeni!! LOL
As usual I am loving this story! I am glad to see that Ricky is finally coming to his senses. It is a shame that he had to become HIV positive before he could get his life together.
Wow...just when you think there is no where left for Blaine to sink he comes up with something new... SMH
I also love the romance blooming between Avalon and Burt! :) I was disappointed in her that she would throw Subrina under the bus so easily. I do recognize that Vickie is Avalon's sister and I can appreciate that they feel some glimmer of grattitude to Blaine for protecting Vickie from her father, but it was just strange to me how quickly she blew off everything Subrina was working towards.
Also hope that Subrina realizes that getting pregnant intentionally is not going to help her cause with Ceasar once he finds out she lied to him. Hopefully she will also come to her senses soon!
I am loving this story and do not mind the length at all!!
Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Subrina don't play. lol.
And yes, it is a shame that Ricky needed this major wake-up call before he got his stuff together.
Blaine just a snake, so expect him to always seeking the low road.
Avalon was torn about taking the side of her sister over Subrina's mission. But that goes to show you how much she HATED their father. No worries. I'll snap some sense back in Avalon soon enough.
Thanks for commenting!
P.S. Special THANKS for commenting on the length of the story. I really needed that boost of encouragement today. Got a bad review from an impatient reader that complained about that very thing in another story. I think she expected that tale to be a quick read like most other romance novels. If she knew my writing style, she would have seen that I like to take my time on character development. All in all, I realize that some readers will get what I'm tryna do, exercise patience, and hopefully discover that the length was worth the wait. Others won't.
Thanks again!
Author's Response:
Subrina don't play. lol.
And yes, it is a shame that Ricky needed this major wake-up call before he got his stuff together.
Blaine just a snake, so expect him to always seeking the low road.
Avalon was torn about taking the side of her sister over Subrina's mission. But that goes to show you how much she HATED their father. No worries. I'll snap some sense back in Avalon soon enough.
Thanks for commenting!
P.S. Special THANKS for commenting on the length of the story. I really needed that boost of encouragement today. Got a bad review from an impatient reader that complained about that very thing in another story. I think she expected that tale to be a quick read like most other romance novels. If she knew my writing style, she would have seen that I like to take my time on character development. All in all, I realize that some readers will get what I'm tryna do, exercise patience, and hopefully discover that the length was worth the wait. Others won't.
Thanks again!
Date: 07/03/11 12:35 am
Oh please! Binky acts like she cant tell at least Ricky. He'd help her out.
More drama....
Author's Response:
Binky actually COULD tell Ricky, but she ain't. That sista too scared to mess up the sweet deal she got going on. And yes, there is definitely more drama ahead.
Thanks for reading along with us!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/11 03:08 am
Blaine is responsible for the horanch, I knew it!!! Blaine is evil and I can't wait for his day of reckoning. I am glad that Leesha is still alive and theirs a baby. Karianne is still a crazy, jealous shrew and I don't trust her at all. I can see Suprina quitting the FBI after the truth comes out about Leesha still being alive.
Author's Response:
I can't see Subrina staying with that agency after all this is over either.
Thanks for reading along with us!
Author's Response:
I can't see Subrina staying with that agency after all this is over either.
Thanks for reading along with us!
Date: 05/03/11 11:39 pm
Baline is crazy, when is he going to be put out of all of our misery? Binky is getting just what she deserves, I don't blame Jon for doubting that her baby is his. Binky is a ho, just like a her grandfather is crazier than a road lizard. I thought that I had already read this chapter. Hot dog, me likey!!!
Author's Response:
Soon, Pmgayles, real soon. Just hold on a little longer. I need to wrap up a few other things before I bring the whammy down on Blaine.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/03/11 11:31 pm
I wish that I could work up some sympathy for Binky, for but I can't. She is reaping what she sewed and I am waiting patiently for Blaine to do the same. What happened to Ricky did I miss something. I am going to have to go back read 78.2 again. Snap!!!
Author's Response:
I don't feel as sorry for Binky as I probably should have either. Shrugs. It'll be alright.
Thanks for commenting!
Author's Response:
I don't feel as sorry for Binky as I probably should have either. Shrugs. It'll be alright.
Thanks for commenting!
Date: 05/03/11 11:26 pm
Ok...Im not sure if Im happy about Pyro gettin fired, I mean he's kinda, ''Do me and mines wrong & Im gon kill you and set your 'a' on fire'' but Im glad Ms Vickie is kickin him out. Ms Avalon & Burt in love YAY!! Umm...Ricky Im not sure about anymore, cause one minutes here the next ?? Thanks 4 the update.
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!! I get tickled everytime I read that Pyro nickname.
Thanks for the laugh!
Reviewer: QuetQuet Signed [Report This]Date: 05/03/11 06:12 pm
Wow glad that the one is alright and that she kick blaine to the curb too. Good she going to be with C man he going to need her support to get thu this with his aunt and seeing his dad. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Yes, some things are starting to work out for C's family in a good way.
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/03/11 06:02 pm
OMG this stuff crazy they going to put this woman in the grave with all the dram they putting her thu. I hope she alright thanks for the update
Author's Response:
I feel sorry for Victoria on one hand. On the other hand, I don't because she sowed into this craziness.
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/03/11 06:48 am
Oh No!!! Poor Victoria...I hope that after she recovers from this, she finds the courage to actually leave or kick out Blaine and his foolishness.
Author's Response:
Dcphoenix1, Victoria is slowly but surely getting up enough courage to do what needs to be done.
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Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: 05/03/11 02:33 am
That was good. I wonder what that noise was? Was it gun shot? I so love this story!!
Author's Response:
That noise was Ricky attacking Blaine.
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Author's Response:
That noise was Ricky attacking Blaine.
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Date: 04/03/11 04:35 am
Yeah nut one and two are crazy ahd hopefully they don't kill each other yet lol. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I personally don't care if they kill each other. Sad, but true. Both are them are getting on my nerves. Especially Blaine. But for the sake of the story and certain caring readers, I'mma let them live a little longer.
Thanks for commenting!
Author's Response:
I personally don't care if they kill each other. Sad, but true. Both are them are getting on my nerves. Especially Blaine. But for the sake of the story and certain caring readers, I'mma let them live a little longer.
Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: 04/03/11 02:52 am
Yea, Ricky has gone coo-coo for cocoa puffs. Lmbo he popped Pyro good, well least he laid off the alcohol & became smarter with his dumb decisions. Bree, Miss Avalon & Burt had to be listening on this day smh. Thanks
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!
And yes, this was the perfect day for the bug to be working. tee-hee.
Thanks for the belly laugh!
Reviewer: QuetQuet Signed [Report This]Date: 02/03/11 07:20 am
oh crap stuff is about to hit the fan. Ricky want to take over blaine spot as king of the P ranch. Thank goodness joh don't have the diease but what wrong with people not making sure to wrap it up everytime crazy. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Ricky DID wrap it up. The condom broke, remember?
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 02/03/11 04:11 am
There is no honor among theives!!! Blaine is lower than a slug, Ricky has gone and lost what was left of mind. This story is getting better and better.
Author's Response:
tee-hee. You can be so animated at times. lol
Thanks for sticking with the story!
Author's Response:
tee-hee. You can be so animated at times. lol
Thanks for sticking with the story!
Date: 02/03/11 03:51 am
Oh no Blaine can't have a stroke until he get his butt kicked!!!
Author's Response:
lol. Just keep reading. You'll see what's becomes of Mr. Evilness.
Thanks for following along with the revisions.
Author's Response:
lol. Just keep reading. You'll see what's becomes of Mr. Evilness.
Thanks for following along with the revisions.
Date: 01/03/11 04:56 pm
wow blaine there you go he better hope that bink not HIV postivite or it about to get even more crazy at the P ranch. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
All I can say is that Blaine's luck is running out fast.
Thanks for continuing to comment!
Author's Response:
All I can say is that Blaine's luck is running out fast.
Thanks for continuing to comment!
[Report This]Date: 01/03/11 03:16 am