this family is f*cked up on so many levels.
Author's Response:
This is true. They are a 'special' bunch.
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Reviewer: grumpirah Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/03/11 02:20 am
omg i hope ricky didnt'do what i think he did to C ex wife i proably wrong. His father has leukemia wow that so sad. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
You'll soon see what Ricky did or did not do.
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Author's Response:
You'll soon see what Ricky did or did not do.
Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: 28/02/11 02:10 am
No surprise with Rae, but with Ceasar's birth father and all that? Hmmm. Didn't they all kick him to the curb not so long ago? Now, suddenly, they can give him the time of day?
Author's Response:
Yes, they did all kick C to the curb. Things change when folks suddenly NEED you for something.
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Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 28/02/11 12:08 am
I feel you Pmgayles.
As for his so called father family call they have some real nerve to all of a sudden remember he has another kid.
C man will help becuase that is the kind of guy he is. Especially since he didn't forgive Rae and now she is gone he will blame himself.
Author's Response:
You're on point with your assessments, Dimples. Very sharp!
Thank for commenting!
Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/11 10:25 pm
I knew that Ricky crazy ass was going to kill Rae!!! I would feel bad but I can't seem to work up the sympathy.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Ricky is crazy alright. He's about to get a little bit more crazy before he gets his mind right on some things.
Thanks for your continual support!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/02/11 09:12 pm
wow I understand why C feel the way he does but we have to learn to forgive people it hard very hard but it will easy the pain in our hearts. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Forgiveness is definitely liberating!
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 26/02/11 02:13 pm
Ricky has HIV, and feel bad for him. That shit happens when you engage with risky behavior with a ho. He had know idea what that ho Rae had been up to when he dipped his stick in her. Rae is about to die becasue Ricky is going to kill her when he sees her.
Author's Response:
Wow! Can't tell you how close you are to what's about to go down next. lol. Very astute of you.
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Author's Response:
Wow! Can't tell you how close you are to what's about to go down next. lol. Very astute of you.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/02/11 04:56 am
well what can i say rae and ricky had this coming.
Author's Response:
Yes, they did.
Thanks for commenting, Grumpirah!
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 26/02/11 04:40 am
I am so disappointed in Avalone, I though that her committment to seeing justice done in Leesha's death was important to her. She told Burt what asking for his assitance because she knew that she messed up with Bree. I love Bree, he's cool people. So love this story!!
Author's Response:
I have to admit, I am a bit disappointed in Avalon for what she did too. No worries though. Things get better between the two women.
Thanks for loving this story so much!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/02/11 06:06 am
Subrina make a point by you lying doesn't make thing right. She need to tell the truth and understand she just want to help those who been in such pain because of blaine over the years. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
So true.
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Author's Response:
So true.
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[Report This]Date: 23/02/11 02:11 am
Now I am confused, what was this meeting about? Did Avalone give Victoria the heads on the impending bust? I hope that it helps to repair their relationship. Great but short chapter.
Author's Response:
Pmgayles, that meeting started out being Burt and Subrina's way to reunite the estranged sisters with each other and also their mother. It turned out to be a meeting that caused the women to develop a secret pact to protect the identity of Daddy Clooney's killer.
And no, Avalon didn't give Victoria the heads up about the bust. All she did was agree to keep the secret about Blaine killing their father.
Hope that cleared up any confusion. Thanks for the input!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/02/11 03:19 am
I understand that they were in a bad situation and Blaine "delivered" them from the abuse, but that should not give him a pass to in turn treat Victoria and others "badly" (to say the least of his actions)!
Your writing has been a nice journey this makes me frustrated. Girl get us out of here PLEASE
Author's Response:
I don't think that it should give him a free pass either, but Avalon and Victoria sure do. Their father was just horrible to them.
Sorry about any frustration you're feeling about the recent turn of events. As soon as my offline schedule lets up, I'll start posting more frequently. In the meantime, please continue to enjoy the other wonderful authors on this site.
Reviewer: Love to Read Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/02/11 02:24 am
well glad the sister got to meet their mother and they going to keep that secret among themselfs. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Yep, they decided to keep that secret. I don't necessarily agree with it, but I understand it.
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 21/02/11 02:17 am
I think she revealed the secret since her mother let her know she didn't know their father was doing the nasty things he did to V and glad the s.o.b is dead. I know avalon has good heart and happy that blaine did what he did to their father but let not forget he turning someone daughter mother sister into a hoe making money off them and two wrongs don't make a right. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
You're so right about Blaine. He definitely hasn't been an angel over the years, even though he did take care of that abusive father situation.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 21/02/11 02:16 am
i understand why victoria is upset the abuse she had to go thu with her father and her mother alive all that time didn't come help them out it hurt big time. so what is she going to say to them? thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Yes, Victoria was understandably upset. She felt abandoned by their mother. She's about to learn WHY their mother left them.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 21/02/11 02:12 am
This is BIG!! All kinds of crazy is going to come from this.
Author's Response:
You're so right, Flikchick! Stay tuned, there is so much more drama to come.
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Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 21/02/11 12:21 am
hmm, i don't get it. even if blaine did do them a 'favor' by killing their father, he still treats her like crap. and that's not healthy for anyone.
Author's Response:
It's not healthy. But remember Victoria doesn't know what a healthy relationship is, outside of the one that she has with her sister. Thus she was a prime candidate to get bogged down in yet ANOTHER toxic relationship.
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Reviewer: grumpirah Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 20/02/11 08:16 pm
i can see victoria's standpoint. she was the one who took the brunt of the consequences of her mother's actions. avalon didn't b/c she was protected by victoria. so i can definitely see that all won't be easily forgiven between vicki and lauren.
Author's Response:
Yes, when it's YOU that did most of the suffering, its a lot harder to forgive others. Not impossible, just harder.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/02/11 07:18 pm
I agree with you. Getting pregnant while undercover is NOT the way to go. She should wrap up this case QUICKLY so the damage will not be that great and let the chips fall where they may.
Author's Response:
DirtyDiva, I so agree with you. But Subrina made that choice. Now she's gonna have to live with the outcome of it.
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Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 20/02/11 04:20 am
I'm just waiting for this meeting now.
Author's Response:
We all are. lol. A secret will be revealed therein. Stay tuned....
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Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 20/02/11 03:08 am
wow i still can't belive it her mother is alive and well. i'm glad she want to meet her daughters and that she want to talk to them. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
It's going to be quite the family reunion. Stay tuned...
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Author's Response:
It's going to be quite the family reunion. Stay tuned...
Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: 20/02/11 02:13 am
Awesome!!! When that bust happens it will be extremely hard on Ceasar and Bree.
Author's Response:
Yes, THEY will experience the brunt of pain from this case.
Thanks for reading along with us!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/02/11 01:45 am
Why would Victoria and Avalon want to reconcile with a mother that completely abandoned them to that sick monster?
Wow...what a revelation!
Author's Response:
Keep reading. That question and many more will be answered.
Thanks for reading with us!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 19/02/11 06:53 am
Awesome!!!
Author's Response: Your comment is awesome too! :)
Author's Response: Your comment is awesome too! :)
Date: 19/02/11 03:51 am
omg so caesar mom and aunt mother is alive and she the one own the ranch they wen too talk aobut crazy. I mean to think your mother is dead and find out that she not wow. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
This is definitely a bittersweet moment for C's family.
Thanks for reading along with me!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 19/02/11 03:37 am