OMG! Is it Bree's mom or grandmother that just had a heart attach?
Great update and I am glad the looser got bounced and the fellow loosers too since they don't have a brain of their on to disconnect from Ricky dumba$$
Happy writing
Author's Response:
It was Bree's mother.
Happy Reading!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/02/11 01:43 am
See Ricky continues to make my a$$ ache. He is nothing but a punk a$$ biatch that needs a hand talking. I am glad Clark and 3 others are quiting the P-Ranch because unbeknowest it is about to all come crashing down and yes because of that bia Rick...with his special needs self.
Bree and Caesar never stop amazing me with their passion.
Bree girl don't you leave your man's house cause of Rick especailly now that we know that Rae is suppose to be bringing her tired gold-digging a$$ to the party yeah there is definitely going to be a story to tell but I don't think it is going to be apporopriate to tell children and grandchildren and Rae I am sure has nothing on Bree when it comes to A$$ WHIPPING TIME. Bree would wipe the floor up with Rae tired behind.
Great update. I was laying down reading that is why the last update was not review in full but I just had to set up for this one.
Great update
Happy writing
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOL!!!!
Girl, you keep me laughing. Thanks for the animated feedback!
Happy Reading!
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOL!!!!
Girl, you keep me laughing. Thanks for the animated feedback!
Happy Reading!
[Report This]Date: 08/02/11 01:35 am
love it
Author's Response: Thx!
Author's Response: Thx!
[Report This]Date: 08/02/11 12:57 am
LOL!!! I loved this chapter I was smiling and laughing so hard my cheeks hurt.
Burt and Miss Avalon are a trip and the ole school flirting was the bomb. I was sold whe he said he did not need a pen or paper just whisper it into his ear and it would be forever written upon his heart now if that aint ole school I don't know what is. I bet ole jackass Blaine don't have moves like that.
Love it!
Happy writing
Author's Response:
Naw, Blaine didn't have moves like that. lol
Thanks for continuing to enjoy the story so much.
Happy Reading!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 07/02/11 11:53 pm
Bree I too hope he follows his heart in the future when that dreaded day comes. You two deserve each other and I hope he can see that the lies told were for a worthy cause and that she did try to stay away from you but you were very persistant.
Author's Response:
Thundakat, you're so right. Bree really did try to stay away from C. But he just wouldn't leave her alone.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 07/02/11 11:22 pm
too cool, tx for the links you've been putting up
Author's Response:
You're most welcome, Marata!
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: marata Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/02/11 06:43 am
i didn't make any comments in the other chapters because there wasn't enough time to read and comment before i headed out the door @0500hrs lol, but now i'm home from work and can relax with a great read, yeah!
Author's Response:
lol. I understand. I'm just so grateful for you reading this story with such fervor.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: marata Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/02/11 06:01 am
I am glad that her momma made it through her surgury. I am so glad that she was able to go and be with her family. I really hate that Caesar won't be so understanding at first, he will be hurt and really disappointed in her. I can't wait for Ricky and Blaine to go to jail. The hoosegau is where they belong.
Author's Response:
I'm glad to see that you so compassionate towards Salethia. Most folks didn't like her at first.
Thanks for keeping the comments rolling in!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/02/11 11:10 pm
wow i'm glad that her mother told her that she love her every child wanted to hear that from their mother and father is the best thing you can tell a child. good she listne to brut and C man is down there with her even tho he cant go to the hospital with her. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Affectionate words from a parent are so precious.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 06/02/11 08:50 pm
I hope once Ceasar finds out, he forgives, and speedily! They are so good together.
Author's Response:
I agree. These 2 really are good together.
Thanks for commenting, Flikchick!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 06/02/11 06:21 pm
I am glad he is meeting up with Subrina...nice turn of events. Maybe, the betrayal won't hurt so much.
Author's Response:
Pleased to know that you like that unexpected turn of events. Burt hit the ball outta the park with that idea.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/02/11 11:33 am
still here reading, i am sooooooo gunna be in trouble
Author's Response:
Bless your heart. I love that you would lose sleep just to read something I wrote. (blushing)
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: marata Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/02/11 10:39 am
it is now 2237hrs, and i need to be up by 0400hrs, this is not good!!!!!!!!! haha
Author's Response:
*Big Grin*
Thanks for commenting and burning the midnight oil for this story!
Reviewer: marata Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 06/02/11 10:28 am
get em girl!!!!
Author's Response: tee-hee!
[Report This]Date: 06/02/11 10:23 am
let the fun begin grrrrrrrr lol
Author's Response: Your animated comments got me rolling! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 06/02/11 10:13 am
go getem subrina!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
She's going! tee-hee
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: marata Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 06/02/11 10:04 am
arseholes!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOLOLOL!!!
Reviewer: marata Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 06/02/11 09:54 am
oooh, i want to cry
Author's Response:
Yes, this is a tear-jerking chapter.
Thanks for sharing your emotional comment with me!
Reviewer: marata Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/02/11 09:50 am
how can i review a great story like this, when i am just a woman enjoying a very exciting story, it's great.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Marata. Any review you leave is welcome and will be received with much appreciation.
Reviewer: marata Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 06/02/11 09:40 am
Glad that she deicde to have him come to L.A he need that special after what happen with rae telling him about the baby that so sad but hopefully this trip put smile on their faces thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Yes, this trip will be just what the doctor ordered.
Thanks for commenting!
Author's Response:
Yes, this trip will be just what the doctor ordered.
Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: 06/02/11 02:18 am
Great update.
I see you gave them a life long illness.
I feel sorry for Cesar pain.
Author's Response:
Yes, I allowed them to reap what they had sowed into - an STD.
Caesar is the one I think most of us feel sorry for in this story.
Thanks for keeping up with the story and commenting along the way, Moni!
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/02/11 01:26 pm
Damn Ricky, smh....payback is a b*tch! Rae is....all I can say is she's character. But this chappie was, wow. Thanks again for the update.
Author's Response:
Ricky is definitely getting some payback. Rae is gonna get dealt with real soon.
Thanks for continuing to read and review!
Reviewer: QuetQuet Signed [Report This]Date: 05/02/11 05:28 am
what HIV OMG that omg some crazy stuff god don't like ugly and boy like they said god can teach us a lesson better then anyone on earth. wow hiv that wow thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
In this case, Ricky is reaping what he sowed into.
Thanks for the continual support, lady!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/02/11 04:42 am
I"m glad she slap some of the black off of him for what ricky has done. he hurt so many people and don't care at all. jon kissing binky realy bad realy bad. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Yes, that was a bad decision on Binky's part.
Thanks for the commenting, Wwefanforlife!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/02/11 04:40 am
Whoa Rae is beyond evil. I don't like Ricky but at les he has a chance of not having HIV.
Don't get me wrong I want him to sweat it out for the six week western blot test. In this time I want him to take a good look at his life and change it for the better.
Blaine is never going to change and I want him under the jail never to be seen again.
I hope Vicki is Ok.
Author's Response:
I don't wish any kind of sickness/disease upon anyone either, but unfortunately some folks sow into certain things (hint-hint).
Thanks for commenting, Dimples!
Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]Date: 05/02/11 04:32 am