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Title: Chapter 56.2

oooooooooo i love how she told kay off i don't like her messing with surbina  while she with her sexy man cesar. he kiss her feet girl keep him most people dont kiss feet lol. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Yes, most folks aren't into feet. Caesar obviously is. lol

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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 01:03 am

Title: Chapter 56.1

omg poor lessha in the coma i hope she wake up. now lessha need to get help ok  that chick is beyond crazy if she think subrina wanted anything to do with her in that way lol. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

No worries. Leesha's coma issue will be worked out. In fact, it already is.

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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 12:59 am

Title: Chapter 55.2

I love a clean man myself i can' stand when someone don't feel the need to bath it just not human lol. thanks for the update

Author's Response:

I'm partial to a clean man as well.

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Author's Response:

I'm partial to a clean man as well.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 12:56 am

Title: Chapter 56.1

WHAT??!!!

Author's Response:

I'm not sure what part of this post is so shocking. But your comment made me laugh nevertheless.

Thanks!

Reviewer: Ang Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 12:48 am

Title: Chapter 56.2

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA-HAHAHAHA...Busted her lil bubble, didn't she?! That interview with Crazy Red can be done by another agent.  Suprina is NOT needed....Kay better watch it or she going to sabotage the whole operation due to her jealousy.

Author's Response:

Even though that interview can be done by another agent, Karianne knows that Subrina wants to personally handle it. In short, she's using her loyalty and committment to the case against her.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/01/11 10:51 pm

Title: Chapter 56.1

OOOOOOOOOO...Suprina is going to be MAD!!! Good job with the twist!!

Author's Response:

Thanks, DirtyDiva. I'm trying to keep it good.

Appreciate the comment!

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/01/11 10:45 pm

Title: Chapter 56.2

run rae, run!

Author's Response:

LOLOLOL!!!

I luv it!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/01/11 10:41 pm

Title: Chapter 56.2

Now this is surprising that her boss wants her.  Wow! too many people trying to break them up.

Things are looking up and more drama I see.

Thanks for the update. 



Author's Response:

Oh yes, Karianne has been secretly crushing on Subrina for a hot minute. There is DEFINITELY more drama to come.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/01/11 10:37 pm

Title: Chapter 56.1

Wow, can someone say F'D UP!! She thinks her bff is dead, its understandable cause she has a job to do but dang. I'm glad Leesha is alive and conscious.
But Kay is starting to give off some stalker type vibes, like idk what to expect. I hope she dont try to get C locked up with Victoria, Ricky & Blaine.

I'm kinda glad this isnt published, cause with this new info I would bookmark, and skip to read the end =). Love the update & thank you, but do we get more today(greedy much lol)?

Author's Response:

tee-hee. I so have done the same thing with books - skip to read the end out of my impatience. Too funny. There's only one more post for today and then I'm done until Wednesday.

Thanks for commenting!

 

Reviewer: QuetQuet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/01/11 10:16 pm

Title: Chapter 55.1

Still loving the story!!  I see Ricky has another butt whooping coming to him!  He so deserves it!

I LOVE Subrina!  I love that instead of overreacting and acting a fool, she went up and laid claim to her man in front of all the tricks in the room!

I am sooo loving Ceasar as well.  I already feel for him when he finds out she is FBI.  Hopefully they can work past the deception.

Still loving the story!!!  :D

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the encouragement. I wasn't sure if folks would have the same enthusiasm for the story at this point. lol. I am taking the long way around with this one.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/11 02:03 am

Title: Chapter 55.1

Blaine and Ricky are just pure evil, although they didn't start out that way,  It was what was done to them as children that ruined them. yet that is still not an excuse.  Still loving this story, the character development is wonderful.  I feel like these characters are people that I actually know and care about.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

I'm THRILLED that you noticed the character development in this story. I was deliberately trying to make these people come alive to y'all. I want you to become emotionally invested in them like I have. Plus there are going to be spinoffs to this tale as we follow the lives of certain P-Ranch girls when they leave prostitution behind once and for all.

Looking forward to your next comment!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/01/11 12:41 am

Title: Chapter 55.1

Great update.

How will he respond when he finds out she is FBI 



Author's Response:

It ain't gonna be pretty, I can tell you that.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/01/11 12:05 am

Title: Chapter 55.1

oooooooo Caesar mad and it hot lol but need to calm down fighting not going to solve anything.  i like he wanted to buy her another dance that nice. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Fighting at this point is only going to cause more trouble, so yes, he needs to calm right on down.

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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/11 10:00 pm

Title: Chapter 55.1

Ricky, you better have another glass of milk on standby lol. Bree's character is a shero is there something she cant do lol.

Author's Response:

She can't seem to keep her legs closed around Caesar. lol. He is definitely her weakness.

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Reviewer: QuetQuet Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/11 08:51 pm

Title: Chapter 54.3

wow those two love to be loud lol. but can't blame bree heck i be screaming all kind of things in that room lol. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

lol. You're a mess, girl.

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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/11 06:17 am

Title: Chapter 54.2

yeah laugh it up ricky because that smile is going to be whip of your face when he relzie it bree the one screaming out your cousin name in that room lol. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Yep! tee-hee

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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/11 06:13 am

Title: Chapter 54.1

dam thought they were about to get it on on the dance floor how these two were acting lol. but glad that she handle her business and let everyone know that C man is her and no body elses. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

I know that's right! lol. She branded him right on the dance floor. lol

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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/11 06:11 am

Title: Chapter 54.2

That is Bree you idiot lmbo....you keep me crackin up

Author's Response:

Ricky's about to find out who that woman is in the next room. lol. Keep reading

Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: QuetQuet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/11 05:07 am

Title: Chapter 54.1

That was hawt!!!

Author's Response: Why THANK you! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/01/11 04:28 am

Title: Chapter 53.3

that right show them who boss in that club ok. now that how you handle your man and glad they able to ring in the new year  together. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this post so much.

Happy New Year to us all!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/11 04:43 am

Title: Chapter 53.2

glad she told the lie she did to get her stupid sisters out of the party so she can handle business. can't wait to see what going to happen next. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Subrina did what she thought she had to in order to protect her sisters.

Thanks for your continual comments!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/11 04:41 am

Title: Chapter 53.3

I am so loving these latest chapters. Subrina's sisters make me ill, something bad needs to happen to them.  Thank you for this new chapters.

Author's Response:

I'm gonna give the twins some grace...this time...maybe. lol

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/01/11 03:33 am

Title: Chapter 53.1

i'm wondering the more this story goes along if blaine even loves victoria. at first i thought he did but he just loved himself more, so he continued to cheat. but he seems more of a leach and manipulator right now who doesn't want to lose his bread and butter.

Author's Response:

I don't think Blaine knows what true love is. And whenever it presents itself to him, he ALWAYS taints it.

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Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/11 03:06 am

Title: Chapter 52.2

well veg lost vegas her comes subrina and she about to  kick some butt lol. glad dee told her and what every she do when she get there i hope she break ricky nose lol. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

You'll see what happens when Subrina gets to Sin City soon enough. Stay tuned...

Thanks for commenting.



Author's Response:

You'll see what happens when Subrina gets to Sin City soon enough. Stay tuned...

Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/11 02:22 am

Title: Chapter 52.1

Hblaine is sick in the head!!!! Bother Blaine and Ricky deserve to have the shit kicked of each of them.  Please tell me that they get theirs soon?

Author's Response:

Soon? How about eventually? Some now and the rest (major takedown) later.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/01/11 06:35 am

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