I'm glad she cleared that right on up, got Sun-Hee to-ge-ther. Kept Avalon out of trouble and realized she does have an ally in the woman. Now, she just has to get with the son. Who is totally coo-coo-bananas over her. And for good reason, too, she's awesome.
Ricky has got a big mouth, but I knew that! Of course he just had to be there so he could start blathering off about Bree to everyone.
I am looking forward to the drama.
-Peace.
Author's Response:
Subrina is definitely one awesome chick. I'm tryna be like her when I grow up. :)
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Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/04/11 02:08 am
Oh, lord, lmao! That is so funny, but wrong on SO many levels. What a hook that girl's got.
-Peace.
Author's Response:
tee-hee. Yep!
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Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 13/04/11 02:02 am
Adrees! Especially since it was that exact tattoo that let Avalon know who Bree Sheero actually is. That woman, man, she is slick.
-Peace.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Avalon is slick. lol
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Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 13/04/11 12:47 am
Easier to control when she’s happy? Wow, Blaine. And Victoria is oblivious to this ass-hole’s horrendous insides. Miss Vickie, it’s a clear day, just land.
I think Neelam and Suge could be good together, but I wonder if both of them would leave the business or tough it out together. They both have so much to lose, with the paychecks they send home to take care of their respective families. Maybe they could start their own brothel, or some other sort of business to keep their families and one another taken care of.
At least Subrina’s not a contributor to the hot water bill. ^_^
I was a baby when most of those moves were hot, but I love 80s-90s movies and that video definitely made me smile! Too much fun.
-Peace.
Author's Response:
I LOVE that 'it's a clear day' comment. That was deep. REAL deep.
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P.S. Glad you like that video.
Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/04/11 12:27 am
I did indeed, yes, and it made me smile to see her loosening up. The fact that she's getting loose with Caesar is a definite plus. She needs to stop fighting it.
Hammer, Subrina, really??? LOL. A mess. I cannot wait to see how this dance battle unfolds.
-Peace.
Author's Response:
Yes, Hammer. Subrina was going wayyyy ol' school. tee-hee.
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Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 12/04/11 11:50 pm
its been really nice reading this... you have taken this stoy a long way iand i loved reading it..... wanting more stories from you. love shafiqa well done
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your support, Shafiqa! I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much.
Reviewer: shafiqa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/04/11 04:47 am
Love sickness, it's one ailment I'm glad there is no life long cure for. I love that SuBree lit a fire under their asses. And Mercedes, that poor girl, she really doesn't know that to get the sort of respect Bree gets, she has to first respect herself the way Bree does. It's simple, but she's conceited instead of confident.
She'll figure it out, or perish.
-Peace.
Author's Response:
So true about Mercedes. Every SINGLE word!
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Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 11/04/11 09:41 pm
Caesar stupid, ladies and gents. Sitting with Mercedes? Strike one, two, three - ah, hell, all the strikes. And giggity, really, dude? Not your best on a bad day.
He's in hot water, I hope. Give it to him, Subrina!
-Peace.
Author's Response:
Oh C is gonna get it for sure. Subrina is NOT a happy camper.
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Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 11/04/11 09:28 pm
Wow, C, you could have at least made mention of her, like usual. That was not cool.
I definitely enjoyed this chapter. Comparisons between British and American English have always been of interest to me, because I love doing accents for my friends and family. I've yet to use them in a story, but I will soon - it's Brill. ^_^
Love this,
-Peace.
Author's Response:
I would LOVE to hear some of your accents. That would be hilarious! And you write too? How cool is THAT! Please share a link so that I can read some of your stuff.
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Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 11/04/11 07:17 pm
Aww, he wants to be with her for real, for real. I, for one, am excited, I think they deserve and would be great for one another. I even see them working through the speed-bump of Subrina's lie / FBI cover. Especially since Caesar thought it was terrible thar Ricky beat Leesha, but when he finds out that the bastard killed her, I think he'll be even more grounded and understanding as to why Subrina had to do what she's done.
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Avalon is a mess! ^_^ I love that woman, though. I see where Caesar gets his snooping skills, he got 'em from his Momma. Of all things to inherit, who knew?
-Peace.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you think C & S will make a great couple. I so agree. lol. C's not going to be happy about any of the sneaky things that Ricky has done, past, present, or future.
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Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 11/04/11 06:58 pm
Avalon is a great Mom, great friend, great sister; all that jazz. She cares so much for her family, even the corrupted Ricky, it seems, which says good things about her. The fact that she's not allowing her familial ties to keep Leesha's loved ones from seeing justice on her behalf is commendable. It takes guts, even if they never know she had anything to do with it.
Although I don't see that happening. Sadly. She may lessen Caesar's hurt, it's inevitable that he's going to be hurt. Loving this, Avalon is observant, I love that about her.
*Peace.
Author's Response:
Yes, Avalon is definitely a family woman. She can love most unlovable folks. I said MOST because she ain't got no love for Blaine.
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Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 11/04/11 05:08 pm
I wonder if it's her at all and not Karianne. It probably is Avalon, though. Maybe she doesn't want her son hurt. Maybe she has more to tell my favorite undervover agent. Who knows, but her timing will live on in infamy in her son'smind. *Peace.
Author's Response:
You're very close. That's all I can say. lol.
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Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 11/04/11 02:07 am
Hah, Subrina forgave him, good for her! Holding a grudge is no good, that much I've learned0. That video, just the beginning had me rolling. Love it, and the fact that Caesar makes puppets is, admittedly, creepy. Not that he makes them or that he plays with them... well, OK, that is a little bit creepy, but mostly because I hate dolls.
If he gave me one of those, I'd throw it in my closet until trash day rolled around, lol. Soon they'll be caking it on the couch. And if just one touch sets it off like that, they'll be doing a lot more than that. Lol.
*Peace.
Author's Response:
LOLOLOL!!! It's okay if you find that part about C creepy. He can't be perfect in every way. lol
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Date: 11/04/11 01:56 am
I think she may have. If Avalon cared for Leesha as much as she says, then it's likely. If so, she'll hopefully be on Subrina's side in bringing the brothel to its hinges. Still, Avalon is her sister and she has done so much for her. But she repaid that debt years ago, so maybe that won't factor in.
Jealous of your Ma, C? Lol. That boy is a 70s style trip! I wonder what he has planned to get himself back in Ms. Bree's good books... It's going to be a scorcher.
*Peace.
Author's Response:
70s style trip? LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!
Too funny. Thanks for commenting! Loving it!
Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 10/04/11 08:01 pm
Uh-oh.
Author's Response:
Yep. lol
Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 10/04/11 07:35 pm
That's my favorite Sara B. song as well, yet that verse never made much sense to me, now I know why. Thanks for that. ^_^ Now I have the urge to go and have a listen. Landslide is on, though, and I live for this song.
I love Subrina and Avalon's budding friendship, 'tis the business. Caesar is a hip-hop head, huh? Wonder how he feels about jazz. It's the music of champions, lol.
C'mon Ava, loose lips sink ships, and the P-ranch seriously needs to go down! Toria is her sister, I know, but damn it - Ricky killed a woman! And what else might have gone down in that place???
*Peace.
Author's Response:
You're most welcome about that song. Does Sara B sing Landslide? I'll look it up online.
Yes, C is a hip-hop head among other things. lol. I love all kinds of music, especially jazz.
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Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/04/11 07:19 pm
See, Caesar is getting No play. Guess he shouldn't have played with that woman's feelings. Of his own volition or not, it was a scandalous way to go about things. Plus, way to make her feel cheap, C. Oh, well, I have faith that he will win her back in the near future. ^_^
I loved Suge's back story, plus she from Jersey, as am I.
*Peace.
Author's Response:
Yes, by all means, keep the faith about Caesar.
So you're a Jersey girl, huh? That's all kinds of cool. I'm a southern belle myself - GA all the way!
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Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 10/04/11 07:03 pm
Absolutely, Subrina and Caesar both are Sprung to the maximum; it's cute. But I am curious as to who Avalon thinks our girl Bree is really. Hmm. Who has she been chatting to?
I know the timing for a romantic endeavor is all types of wrong, but Caesar's biceps are worth it! Lol.
Author's Response:
lol. Let's just say that Avalon knows more than she's letting on.
I feel you about C's biceps.
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Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 10/04/11 06:45 pm
I love it, absolutely I do. It seems like SuBree is fitting right in, as to whether or not that's a good things has yet to be seen. In the future, though, I'm sure I will find out. So, Suge was once Corvette and Leesha was once Lexus. What happened to one didn't happen to the other, that's obvious, but why was Suge demoted? Or was she? Gosh, I am brimming with curiosity!
That Mercedes, and her fluffy group of minions, needs some sense knocked into them, with the quickness. And if Mercedes fell a peg or two below the rest of the girls, I wouldn't be mad,
*Peace.
Author's Response:
No worries. Mercedes and her minions will get what's coming to them soon enough.
Thanks for commenting, and for doing it so animatedly. lol.
Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 10/04/11 02:15 pm
Awww..yaaaay!!! It was a wonderful story and a pleasure to read.
I hope this gets published quickly!!
So very well done!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you found this story so pleasurable. That thrills me to no end.
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Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 10/04/11 05:05 am
LOL, her name gets me every time! I loved her reaction, she shocked the hell out of me. I, too, would have disappeared from that scene. Caesar apparently REALLY didn't have love/lust for the big girls, huh. His behavior is a straightforward shock to the system of everyone that knows him.
I cannot wait to see how Avalon responds to her son's heart going knock-knock over a curvy lady.
*Peace.
Author's Response:
No, C was really into slim chicks. All that has changed now though.
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Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 10/04/11 02:49 am
Goodness, Topaz, he broke up with you, what was it, a night ago? That means you shed a tear, watch Waiting To Exhale and get your Angela B. on, but stalking him? Not cool, makes you look crazy and desparate. That's what binoculars and blackmail are for... Not that I would know the slightest bit about it. >_>
I loved Caesar's thoughts in this one, I adored his rushing to her aid, because that would not have been cute. But Topaz had to come and ruin the (erotic) sweet moment they were having. I hope SuBree allows Caesar a moment to explain.
*Peace.
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOL!!!! You are really tickling my funny bone tonight. And I adored seeing Caesar rush to help her as well.
Thanks for reading along with us!
Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 10/04/11 02:38 am
Aww, how cute is SuBree, thinking about Caesar and his... biceps, lol. Right, she is not fooling me!
Ricky and the rest of those recruiters need to stop playing themselves, looking at her like a glass of chocolate milk and. straight up, they're thirsty! I do not think so, buddies.
The same market, lol, I wonder if they'll meet over by the cucumbers or by the melons. ~_^
*Peace.
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOL!!!! Too funny!
Thanks for the laugh, TRaberah!
Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 10/04/11 02:25 am
seems like those two are really hitting it off. loving it.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are. I'm routing for them too.
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Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 10/04/11 02:09 am
GREAT Story loved every Word
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed yourself, Jim. Feel free to read along with us anytime!
[Report This]Date: 09/04/11 11:08 pm