Blaine is a problem. He really cares for Ricky...the both of them need to be locked up.
Will Bree continue a relationship with Caesar? Time will tell.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Glad you picked up on how much Blaine cares for Ricky. Unfortunately even that affection is going to be tempted in the days ahead.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/12/10 08:59 pm
Well damn...I knew he would be angry but did not know he would fire Bree.
I am so disappointed right now in Caesar's actions but he is in love but damn the jealousy dude you had/have Rina hooked no need to worry about outside influences like another woman "MAN"
Great update hurry hurry hurry i want to see the outcome of Rina's mission is it over is she fired...if she stays I have no doubt there will some stipulations behind her staying. How can you cut me off like that
Happy Writing
Author's Response:
That's the thing, Thundakat. Ceasar didn't know he had her hooked like that. She keeps her feelings on the DL too much, so he's constantly unsure of where he stands with her.
I didn't cut you off for long. :)
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/10 08:39 pm
Blaine will try to use this fight as an excuse to keep Bree underneath his boot - not going to happen buddy! Bree don't apologize for breaking Caesar's headboard - i would like to do that too, lol!
Author's Response:
A lot of us wish we were in Bree's shoes that night, Cassius_Noir. LOL!
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/10 01:16 pm
Urgh Picky is wrote his death sentence - what a idiot!
Author's Response:
Yep!
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Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/10 01:13 pm
No, there is no reason she should.
ricky was a coward and mean.
Author's Response:
So true about Ricky. We'll see what happens with Subrina's fake job soon enough.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/12/10 11:48 am
Rickey is such a punk ass 'itch!!!! I am so glad that Ceasar punched him in his mouth. He was deserving of that and so much more. I hope that Subrina doesn't get fired, because she has done so good since she arrived. That fight only happened because of the punk ass Ricky and his jealousy. He's jealousy is irrational as he never stood a chance with Subrina anyway. Dumb Dumb ditty!!!
Author's Response:
Ricky got more payback coming. Trust.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/12/10 09:45 am
No way. She ain't gettin fired. And if she did I bet the rest of the girls would follow her. Blaine can suck it! xD
Author's Response:
I think you're on to something, FrenchieJonesy. :)
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: FrenchieJonesy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/12/10 08:14 am
Rotflmbo at Ricky crawlin under the table, after pickin up his teeth lol. Suprina you keep me crackin up. I hope Bree dont lose her job though cause that would mean the case is over and no justice for Leesha. Smh...hold up, isnt C younger than Ricky?
Author's Response:
I try to put in as much humor as I can. Life is hard. We all need to laugh more. Glad I could add to your joy.
Yes, C is younger than Ricky.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: QuetQuet Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/10 07:39 am
Shyt Blaine can't even be near to being fit to be tired. Now me on the other had am fit to be tired...Tired of that hussy Mercedes she is another that makes my ass itch. She needs to get some sense about herself b4 she don't wake up again.
Always Always an outstanding update no different this time.
Thank you!
Author's Response:
LOL! These characters are messing with you in the strangest places. tee-hee
You're welcome and thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/10 07:15 am
Ricky makes my ass ache and that's all I got to say on that one.
I love how Rina encourages the girls and lifts their spirits.
Caesar baby you may want to get ready for a few good cold showers cause your cuz just franked up babe.
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOLOL!!!! snicker...giggle...guffaw!
You're a trip, Thundakat!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/12/10 07:06 am
LOL!!!!!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 19/12/10 06:53 am
Yeah moma! :)) Now that's what I'm talking about.
Author's Response: tee-hee
Date: 19/12/10 06:52 am
Glad to be of service or maybe I am just greedy cause you have definitely been cranking them out :) no complaints here.
Author's Response:
I'm tryna keep my momentum up. So your comments are definitely motivation for me.
Thanks for everything!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/12/10 06:50 am
ummm how is this subrina's fault? blaine is such a loser.
Author's Response:
Remember, Blaine got it in for Subrina and so he will use any excuse to get rid of her.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/10 06:17 am
I;m sorry, but I cackled like a hen when Caesar busted that fool in the mouth. Too bad they'll be able to save that doofus' teethfus.
Hope Bree lets C explain and is not too hard on him.
Author's Response:
I confess, BellaChica, it felt real good to write that scene. I wish it was MY fist busting Ricky in his big mouth. lol
As for Bree, this thing has her all messed up right now. She need some time to refocus and get herself back on track.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/10 05:23 am
I hope she doesn't get fired. It not her fault that ricky wanted to act like a butt face and glad caesar knock his teeth out. mom said knock you out lol. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
LOLOLOL!!! I remember that LL Cool J song - Mama said knock you out. Too funny!
Thanks for the laugh and the comment!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/10 05:09 am
oh heck naw. Why does ricky has to be a hater is so stupid and wanted to run him over with car lol. I hope that she doens't hurt C and break up with him. He didn't tell his cousin anything. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Ricky has almost ALWAYS been a hater when it comes to Caesar. It got worse with age.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/10 05:07 am
ricky ricky ricky, you ain't happy, so no one else can be happy, huh?
Author's Response:
That's exactly what Ricky's problem is.
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Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/10 03:18 am
Ricky is a real prick. He deserves everything that's coming to him.
You are doing a fine job with this story. I'm buckled up.
Author's Response:
Thanks, BellaChica! And yes, you're so right about Ricky getting exactly what he deserves.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/12/10 02:03 am
Ricky Ricky Ricky...I am getting so fed up with his ass. I was wondering what her was doing since haven't heard from him in awhilel well now my curiousity has been met and he is more the welcome to crawl back under a rock or two shot make it a boulder.
Thank you for the update
Happy writing!
Author's Response:
Ricky is about to start all kinds of trouble now that we've heard from him again (spoiler).
Happy Reading!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 18/12/10 10:09 pm
That was fucktastic!!!! i don't like Karianne and she needs to remove hrself from that case. Our girl gonna be getting some on the regular!!
Author's Response:
How do y'all come up with these new words? lol.
As for Karianne, she ain't going nowhere no time soon if she has anything to say about. In other words, she will have to be REMOVED!
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/12/10 06:27 am
Well hope she don't kill C man but he didn't tell his cousin what happen he just guess. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Yes, but that guess gonna get some folks in troooooooouuuuuble. lol
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 18/12/10 05:27 am
good job ceasar. now loose lips is gonna tell. should have left ricky where he was. drinking a hole through his stomach.
Author's Response:
Unfortunately or fortunately, Caesar has a caring heart.
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Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 18/12/10 04:57 am
Yes, Ricky is stupid in some ways but Caesar honey your actions just gave it all away.
Great update as always.
Thank you!
Happy Writing!
Author's Response:
True. Caesar messed up again...bad.
Happy Reading!
Author's Response:
True. Caesar messed up again...bad.
Happy Reading!
Date: 18/12/10 04:31 am
Told yall that trick was scandalous! Bree keep an eye on Kay, she havin types of fantasies goin on her end. A mess smdh. Thanks!
Author's Response:
You were so right. She is a scandalous trick! Bree gonna learn about her soon enough.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: QuetQuet Signed [Report This]Date: 18/12/10 03:59 am