Ah hell, you gotta know when to break the rules C, cause not sayin anything is sayin something. Ricky please dont open your cause C is goin to shut it for you. Smh, thanks for the updates.
Author's Response:
Oh yes, his actions told on him BIG time.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: QuetQuet Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/12/10 03:53 am
Why did I already know that Karianne was gay and wanted Rina that 30 second kiss wasn't a quick think it was a desire that has been brewing from jump street. I think that was why she had been so hard on her in the beginning with allowing her to take this assignment.
Goodness Rina getting play all over the place...Ricky wants her and Caesar now add supervisor and Suppie is jealous as all get out I think she like Ceasar already have it in her mindset that Bree is hers.
Well that is another secret out of the bad for our dedicated readers
Thank you!
Happy writing
Author's Response:
Yep, you were about Karianne too. Can't hide nothing for you, Miss Lady! lol.
P.S. There is another reason Karianne didn't want Subrina to take this assignment, but that will be revealed later in the story. This secret is a BIGGIE and that's all I can say about that.
Happy Reading!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 18/12/10 12:08 am
Yes, That rape scene was very convincing if I did not know the story behind it I would have bee like Caesar.
I see so much turmoil coming at the end of this case for Bree and Caesar but hopefully this turmoil will make them stronger.
Author's Response:
Yes, turmoil is definitely on the horizon for these two...unfortunately.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 17/12/10 10:59 pm
Well damn I feel sorry for Ricky but not enough to see him go free for killing our girl Leesha and her baby.
I would have shot the shyt out of Cheney too @ least Blaine did right by Ricky in that manner but still Ricky needs so help.
Again great as always always...
Thank you
Author's Response:
Yes, Blaine did do right by Ricky on that front. He's not a complete beast but close to it.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 17/12/10 10:40 pm
That's right Rina make him roar girl...tame YOUR lion.
Great update as always!
Happy Writing!
Author's Response:
She can certainly handle herself...and him it seems. lol.
Happy Reading!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 17/12/10 10:25 pm
I don't remember any of them lol. they broke the head board dammmmmmmmm lol that what you call some good good loving there. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Yes, things got a little TOO frisky with those two. Poor headboard.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 17/12/10 10:18 pm
Well can I say I definitely saw that coming. A girl can only resist for so long before the will power bails on you.
LET'S GET READY TO RUMBLE!!! HERE COMES THAT HOT MONKEY LOVING! LOL!!!!!
Thank you for the update!
Happy Writing!
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!
Yep!
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 17/12/10 09:34 pm
Mama Ava never fear our girl is strickly dickly especially for that fine piece of male meat called your son....Moma you did good real good birthing and raising that one.
Great update as always
Thank you for the update.
Happy Writing!
Author's Response:
Um...no comment...lol. Just know that I've NEVER heard that phrase before. :D
Happy Reading!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 17/12/10 08:42 pm
Awwww! I loved the bonding btwn Miss Avalon and Rina...I love Caesar but he interrupted a moment....LOL
I agree with Caesar and Rina (insert hint here) we need to get my girl Miss Ava hooked up with her a fine piece of speciman too that is a real man and not one of those loosers she has been attracting and nothing like the examples across the way.
Stilling loving this story.
Happy Writing! Thank you for the update. On to my next one :)
Author's Response:
I got Avalon covered on that front later in the story. No worries. She gone be hooked up real good.
Happy Reading!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 17/12/10 07:34 pm
Girl u know with the last update of Blaine that name so fits him and glad to know I can have the author rolling with laughter. LOL!
Sorry I been slacking lately but I like it this way it allows me to set and get caught up with reading chapter after chapter :))
Happy Writing!
Author's Response:
You're not slacking. You're doing just fine. Certainly keeping me motivated that's for sure. lol.
Happy Reading!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 17/12/10 07:18 pm
well now, another twist to the mix. karianne needs to keep it moving with her crush. it will lead to nothing.
Author's Response:
I agree with you about Karianne. But IS she gonna keep it moving? We'll soon see.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 17/12/10 04:42 pm
Glad to know that I aint too far off base with good ole pyro-blaine and since I havent read about crazy ricky lately I take it he is somewhere thinking of shyt to get into or problems to cause others. Blaine burned suge's house down in Jersey and if other readers remember he said he was going to get back at Suge and Bree well he got back @ Suge but she was looked out for cause she still had insurance on the house unbeknowst to pyro...I wonder how he is going to try and get back at Rina/Bree wooo it's getting hot in here and I don't know if that's in a good way or bad well bad if it comes to Blaine but definitely and most assuringly a GOOOD GOOOD thing if it is behind Caesar and his finnnnnneeeee hot self.
Happy writing!
Author's Response:
Pyro-Blaine? LOLOLOLOLOL!!! Too funny.
In one of Friday's posts, you'll see what Ricky is up to. Whatever it is, ain't good.
Happy Reading! Thanks for the comment AND the laugh.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 17/12/10 08:25 am
Dang! Blaine got some major issues. This is like a disfunctional family all gone wrong. Everybody has lost somebody during there child or had some mental and physical abuse bestowed on them the only difference is that Caesar and Avolon has made a more postive effect on their future and presence though Vickie doesn't seem all that bad as a person she keeps that a-hole of a husband around but hell I'm afraid if she decided she truly wanted to leave his beehive he would burn her establishment down and the way he keeps a lock on the girls they would still be in the building if he did start a fire. Things keep looking worse with that fool Blaine.
On to the next chapter. Loving it as always.
Happy Writing and Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
I once heard somewhere that we spend our adult lives trying to get over what was done to us as children. That always rang true for me. Guess cause I know so many folks that fit that description.
As for Blaine and the rest of his clan, they need some serious HELP. Some of them will receive the help that's sent their way. Others won't.
P.S. You ain't too far off about Blaine the fire-starter.
Happy reading!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 16/12/10 08:38 pm
wow so C man under her spell lol. A man never going to turn down sex and if he does he either crazy or cheating lol. She might wanted only be friend with him but that going to change big time. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Ain't no telling what's gonna happen next. I'm making a lot of changes in this story as we go along. Some subtle. Others not so subtle. Stay tuned. You'll see them all.
Thanks for the continual feedback!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 16/12/10 05:18 am
I love when hot, butt naked sex happens!!!
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!
Off-da-chain as usual.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/12/10 04:27 am
LMAO @ Subrina's reaction. OMG, I wouldn't have said it out loud but I would've thought it loud! Omg, TOO funny.
Author's Response:
Tee-hee. Glad you got a kick out of Subrina's reaction, FrenchieJonesy. I try to add humor in my stories. Tends to make them more memorable...I hope.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: FrenchieJonesy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/12/10 06:18 am
Blaine with that one action with Ricky proved that he could care about someone else. He still makes my teeth itch and now I must say that I wouldn't set him on fire now. I am beat him like he stole my last dime. Great updates.
Author's Response:
Blaine does have a heart and it's not all stone. He has a soft spot for Ricky...for now (spoiler).
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/12/10 05:14 am
wow some one little upset lol. but i think it sweet he wanted her in his bed laying together to feel her body next to him and sometimes that can be better then sex it self. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Yes, I personally like a lot of cuddling.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 15/12/10 02:37 am
Just when you think you got the whole picture... WAM. Although I feel for the kid Ricky was, he still answerable to his crimes.
Author's Response:
You got that right! Ricky WILL answer for his crimes. ALL of them.
Thanks for keeping the comments coming, Juno!
Author's Response:
You got that right! Ricky WILL answer for his crimes. ALL of them.
Thanks for keeping the comments coming, Juno!
[Report This]Date: 13/12/10 06:42 pm
Love Ceaser and Bree. I can't wait for her to go to his ranch.
Author's Response:
She'll be there soon. It's gonna be a night to remember that's for sure. lol.
Thanks for the feedback!
Author's Response:
She'll be there soon. It's gonna be a night to remember that's for sure. lol.
Thanks for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: 13/12/10 05:12 am
wow can C man get any hotter giving that hot loving and now going to make her feel like a queen i wanted him myself lol. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
tee-hee. You're a trip, girlie. At this point, Bree might fight you for Caesar. lol
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 13/12/10 02:33 am
wow i feel realy bad that happen to ricky and blaine but two wrongs don't make a right. I had bad things done to me that have me shake sometimes but to go out and hurt someone because i was hurt wanted heal you it will destory you in such a huge way that you be to gone to event come back to the right path. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Preach, girl!
(clapping my hands)
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 13/12/10 02:30 am
dam that man know how to work it ok. i love how he make her feel like she the only woman in the world for him. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Yes, Caesar is a special guy.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 13/12/10 02:25 am
girl one night please that like me saying i'm only like john cena one more time lol. wonder what going to happnen next he he. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Read on. You'll see.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 13/12/10 02:20 am
Awww. That was a nice talk between the two women and Caesar coming in after cutting down the tree was like they were a real family.
Author's Response:
I agree. It was a special moment. :)
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed [Report This]Date: 13/12/10 12:50 am