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Title: Chapter 36

Wow Blaine sounds like one crazy so and so. Bree really needs to keep eyes in the back of her head with him.

Caesar being jealous was cute and I'm glad he was thinking about how this would look from the perspective of his aunt being jealous too.

Mercedes being jealous was not cute doesn't she know she doesn't stand a chance of getting Caesar?

Somebody has been very quiet on that front where is he anyway? I'm sure he's going to pop up with some mischief soon.



Author's Response:

Junebug66, you're so right about Blaine. I still can't STAND Mercedes. lol.

If you're talking about Ricky being quiet, yes, he will show back up soon.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 12:27 am

Title: Chapter 41.1

Thats why Ricky is such a tortured soul. Whew, for a second there I thought it was Blaine. Damn those 3, Vickie, Ricky and Blaine, had very tragic and traumatic childhoods. Blaine is a real serious piece of work, I definitely think there is not a thing he wont do with his pyro ass.

Author's Response:

Yes, that's exactly why Ricky is the way he is. Since hurting ppl hurt other ppl, we also now understand why he hurt Leesha. Don't make it right, but it does make more sense in a bizarre way.

I like your assessment of Blaine. lol!

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: QuetQuet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 10:04 pm

Title: Chapter 35.3

Ohoh who put the cockroach in Caesar's chili? Is he jealous of Blaine or has something else happened that we don't know about?

DD is seeing dollar signs for days and I can just imagine what this Christmas show would look like. I wonder that he doesn't have webcams in the girls rooms to broadcast what they do with their customers. He is so evil!

Imagine not wanting the women to be healthier but when Bree says they will have more energy he perks right up.



Author's Response:

Caesar is jealous of ANYONE that he thinks wants Bree. Can't speak about that webcams thing without telling the story. Just know that you're very close to something. lol.

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Date: 12/12/10 09:19 pm

Title: Chapter 35.2

Didn't comment on the previous chapter but wanna say I like the chapters long and strong like my men. Haha!

As for this chapter, that was a very smart move on Suge's part to keep the house insured, so that fire was a blessing indeed. I am happy Suge and Neelam will be moving forward not owing anyone.

I take it back, Ricky is a yapping puppy (YP) compared to Blaine who is the Dirty Dog (DD) but they better watch out, they might soon face Caesar who could be a Junkyard Dog (JD) when it comes to protecting 'his wifey'.

Thanks Supreme One.



Author's Response:

I'll try to do a combo thing. Some long, some short. As always, I'm let you know upfront which are the quickies. lol.

Your opinion of Ricky and even Blaine might change soon. Keep reading.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 09:12 pm

Title: Chapter 34.2

Ah, I really like this chapter it was sexy, funny and touching.

Thanks for that Suprina.



Author's Response: Glad you liked, Miss Lady. You're most welcome!

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Date: 12/12/10 08:58 pm

Title: Chapter 34.1

Yeah back to the grocery store, you know I love me some food and picking out fruit is just my most favorite thing to do.

I hope she gets her veggies too, the cucumbers and zuchinni are calling Bree's name as well.

I'm glad Caesar didn't immediately think the worst of Bree and decide to cut his losses. Especially since she has given him several chances already. In fact I hope he remembers that later.

Good work as usual!



Author's Response:

After being caught slipping, Bree ain't about to go anywhere NEAR the cucumbers and zuchinni. LOL!

Thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 12/12/10 08:52 pm

Title: Chapter 33.1

Imagine going to a brothel to get away from temptation. It's a good thing Bree really isn't bisexual or she would be in big trouble! Temptation to the left, temptation to the right whatever is a girl to do?

They really do have very similar qualities, being humble, kind, thoughtful, funny I would add smart but the jury is still out with Caesar on that. If he really cannot forgive Bree when the P-Ranch gets taken down then he is a big ole dummy.

Thanks again for this great story Supreme One.

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, that is a strange place to get AWAY from temptation. But since the only person Bree is tempted by is at the OTHER ranch, the P-Ranch was safe ground. lol.

Your comment about Caesar tickled me. Yes, the jury is still out on that one. tee-hee.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 08:38 pm

Title: Chapter 40.1

When they make make this raid and the truth comes out about Suprina the shit will hit the fan!! Ceasar will be very hurt and push her away.  I hate to see that but I know that it must.  I am loving this story!!

Author's Response:

Yes, there is much hurt and pain ahead for everyone involved in this case. So try to enjoy the good times before things turn very bad for them all, especially Subrina.

Thanks for loving this story and commenting!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 05:48 pm

Title: Chapter 40.1

the last sentence said it all, lol! great update - this "one" night is going to be very very interesting ;)

thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

You got that right. Subrina will NEVER forget this night. lol.

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Date: 12/12/10 05:29 pm

Title: Chapter 39.2

wow i hope he able to keep his promise and dont break her heart when the truth comes out. only time will tell to see what will happen. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Yes, only time will tell at this point.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 04:09 am

Title: Chapter 39.2

Hope Caesar remembers this conversation with his mother when the sh!t hits the fan.

Author's Response:

If he doesn't, he will definitely be reminded of it. Trust!

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 03:39 am

Title: Chapter 39.1

Caesar's got mad skillz. Avalon is one tricky lady. Now she has her answer.

Bree was just fooling herself. Now she knows. She can't be without C.



Author's Response:

BellaChica, you're so right on all fronts. Especially about Bree. lol

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 12/12/10 03:37 am

Title: Chapter 39.1

Another great update as usual, the chemistry between C and Subrina is HOT! I have to say this, everytime Kay is mentioned my mind screams, RUN BREE, THIS HO IS SCANDALOUS!!! And I know that she's a lesbian. Please lemme be wrong cause I dont think she's ready for that type of drama or attention. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

You're on the right track about Kay. Can't say much more than that without telling the story. lol.

Thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 12/12/10 01:14 am

Title: Chapter 39.1

wow who knew helping with a christmas tree make C man even more hot lol. i understand why she worried she realy like this guy alot but she also there to take down the family witch means things can get sticky qucikly. I wonder what going to happen next? thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Stay tuned...you'll see it all.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 01:03 am

Title: Main Cast

Oh no ma'am won't be stopping talking to them anytime soon and they are so life like and not flat words on the screen.

Author's Response: *big grin* Thanks for saying that.

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Date: 12/12/10 01:01 am

Title: Main Cast

and you know how folk get all involved about a television or movie I don't even do that only in stories that I am reading especially if they are good. I am embarassed now that you pointed it out cause I hadn't even realized it until just now.  LOL!!!

Author's Response:

PLEASE don't be embarassed and PRETTY PLEASE don't stop talking to my characters! That's how I know that they're believable and human-like, not just flat words on the screen.

 

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Date: 12/12/10 12:13 am

Title: Main Cast

OMG! Do u mean to tell me this fool can get worse.  Well I guess he could so far he has been an annoyance but not that vicious.

Great writing chica!

Thank you for always responding to my comments :D



Author's Response:

Yes, that fool can and will get worse. And you better believe I'm gonna respond to your comments, each and every one no matter how long it takes me. lol.

Thanks for all the feedback!

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Date: 12/12/10 12:09 am

Title: Main Cast

Girl I so understand the struggle I would have a hard time too resisting temptation that FINEEEE.  LOL!!!

Author's Response: tee-hee. Yep!

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Date: 11/12/10 11:46 pm

Title: Chapter 38

Loved it!!!!

Author's Response:

:)

I'm glad!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 05:21 am

Title: Chapter 38

i understand why avalon very watchfull with these two because she doesn't wanted her son to get hurt but he in love with her and i think he heal when things come out i hope he does. I like x mas lights we use to put candy canes on are tree then eat them up the next day lol. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Avalon has mixed feelings about those two. As a mother, I do too.

I'm LOVE candy canes!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 02:12 am

Title: Chapter 32.4

Bree and Caesar are both so willing to go the extra mile to help people they care about. I like how they are paying it forward.

Blaine is a dog in the manager and I hope Bree keeps one eye on him cause he is not to be trusted.

Good work Suprina!



Author's Response:

"A dog in the manger?" LMBO. Too funny!!!

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/10 12:34 am

Title: Chapter 37

wow someone getting hot and not talking about the spicy food lol.i like how avoln even see how good these two are but hard since she is doing a mission and C dont like people to lie to him? going to be a tuff road ahead thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Yep, tough road ahead for sure for these two. But trust me, this story will have a HEA.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/12/10 03:36 am

Title: Chapter 37

Good Golly Miss Molly, that was good!!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/12/10 03:12 am

Title: Chapter 36

You are on a roll with this story!  I love love love having so many chapters to read!!

I am glad that Subrina was able to help Suge and Neelam out!  That is jacked up that Blaine would not only make Suge pay back the $12K in gifts that he gave her, but that he would torch her houseas well (I am sure it was him).  I think Bree needs to keep her guard up where Blaine and Mercedes are concerned.  They both have her on their hit list!

I am loving Ceasar more and more with each chapter, but part of me feels bad for the heartache you know is coming once he finds out who she really is...  :(

Can't wait to read more updates soon!

 



Author's Response: I love, love, love your comments, Redbird! :) Thanks for weighing in on the storyline and on my posting frequency.

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Date: 08/12/10 07:26 pm

Title: Chapter 36

wow it crazy what blaine went thu but he still a butt face to me. wow i think bree might have to have a bag ice with her because C man keep bring on the fire lol. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

C is definitely bringing the heat. He ain't playing with her. He's going after what he wants.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 05:47 pm

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